1、如何打造优秀高考作文如何打造优秀高考作文句式篇句式篇思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点（审题）无遗漏信息点（审题）篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？推荐高考写作推荐高考写作10种句式种句式一、主动句与被动句的互换。一、主动句与被动句的互换。操作难度 写作效果 1.Rice is grown in the south of China.(people)2.They have printed one and
2、 a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986.People grow rice in the south of China.One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.二、将陈述句改为感叹句。操作难度 写作效果1.To prevent the pollution is very important How ！2.She is a clever girl What !How important it is to prevent t
3、he pollution!what a clever girl she is!三、将陈述句改为倒装句。三、将陈述句改为倒装句。操作难度 写作效果 1.I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.2.We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.Not until at that time did we realize our
4、mistakes.四、将简单句改为强调句。四、将简单句改为强调句。操作难度 写作效果 1.Smoking did great harm to his health.2.Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.It was smoking that did great harm to his health.It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.五、将两个简单句合并为并列句。五、将两个简单句合并为并列句。操作难度 写作效果 1.You can
5、do it.I can do it.One of us must do it.you I must do it.2.I want to buy this bike.I dont have enough money.I want to buy this bike,I dont have enough money.Eitherorbut六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。操作难度写作效果 1.同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段）1)Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the first prize in Men
6、s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.(用同位语改写),won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech.is true the president will give our school a speech.2.定语从句（限制性/非限制性）1)The 2008 Olympic Games was held in Beijing,a
7、nd its slogan is One World,One Dream,The 2008 Olympic Games,.2)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace .3)Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,.Whose
8、slogan is One World,One Dream,was held in BJare the two places which are well worth visiting.Where we bought a lot of clothes.3.主语从句1)His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.most was his wonderful performance on the stage.2)It satisfied me.Our school dining hall provides us with a large
9、variety of kinds of dishes.our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.3)I learned from the story that as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.Wh
10、at impressed meWhat satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is that【推荐句型】：What surprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressed me is thatWhat I would like to suggest advise put forward is thatWhat matters most is that What I learnconclude from the story is that 4.表语从句【推荐句型】：is no longer what it
11、used to be.我的家乡不再像以前那样了。My hometown is no longer what it used to be.5.状语从句【推荐句型】结果、程度 sothat;such that让步 no matter how what when where.=whatever,however,whenever,wherever时间 was doingwhen 1)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。,we should learn to overcome them independently.2)我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。I along the road su
12、ddenly I heard my name called.No matter how many difficulties there are ahead of us,was walkingwhen七、将两个简单句合并为一个由七、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的引导的非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句操作难度写作效果1.Recently many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things.Different people have different opinions about it.Recently
13、many middle school students spend their money on unnecessary things,about different people have different opinions.2.Many boys learn to smoke.It does harm to their health.Many boys learn to smoke,.whichWhich does harm to their health.八、八、It作形式主语或形式宾语句型作形式主语或形式宾语句型 操作难度写作效果 1.You pretend to know what
14、 you dont know.Its no good.2.It is easy to get on with Pam.I find.Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.I find it easy to get on with Pam.九、分词结构代替状语从句 操作难度写作效果1.If you work harder,you will do better in the exam next time.,you will do better in the exam next time.2.Because my friend was f
15、rightened of losing his job,he said nothing to the police.,my friend said nothing to the police.Working hard Frightened of losing his job 十、十、with 引导的短语或者复合结构引导的短语或者复合结构 操作难度 写作效果 With+宾语+adj./adv./介词短语/to dodoingdone 常用句型 with a population of.with a total area of with a long history of years1)这个地区占
16、地2000平方千米，人口10万。This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers,.2)我们学校周围种了很多花和树，吸引了大量的学生来参观。,it attracts a large number of people.3）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。,the boy dared not go to school.4)这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一个晚上。The two men went to bed early,.with a population of 100,000.With so many trees and flowers su
17、rrounding our school.with candles burning a night long With homework not finished 实战操练：实战操练：最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象40%的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木注意：1、信的开头已为你写好 2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee160的同学
18、认为公园不应该收费。Sixty percent of the students think that the park should not charge entrance fees Sixty percent of the students hold the view that entrance fees should not be charged 被动句Sixty percent of the students have the idea that people should be allowed to enter parks without charge.In the opinion o
19、f 60of the students,people can enter parks for free 2公园是公众休闲的地方。A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves A park is a place where people rest and relax 定语从句3如收门票，需建大门围墙，会影响城市形象。If entrance fees are charged,it will be necessary to build gates and walls,which will affect the appear
20、ance of the city（which指代上文）With entrance fees charged,it will be necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of the city 440的同学认为应收门票，但票价不宜高。40 of the students think that entrance fees are necessary,but the prices should not be high There are 40of the students who think t
21、hat entrance fees should be charged,but fees should be low（定语从句）In the opinion of 40 of the students,entrance fees should be charged low 5门票收入支付园林工人工资购买新花木。The income from entrance fees is used to pay the gardeners and buy new plants and flowersThe money from entrance fees is made use of to pay gard
22、en workers and buy new plants With money from entrance fees,the gardeners are paid and new plants as well as young trees are bought （With的短语）（被动句）Dear Editor,.Opinions are divided on the question.60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believed a public park should be free of c
23、harge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Without doubt,Charging entrance fees will keep some people away.What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees.They suggest,however,fees should be charged low.
