1、高三英语书面表达备考23115What makes a good What makes a good passage?passage?Language:No Chinglish/No Grammatical mistakes With exactly used words and varied sentence patterns Content:Cover all the information points mentioned Structure:Good beginning and ending Well organized and smoothly developed 2Varied s
2、entence patterns1The use of advanced words2 tips to choose words01Phrases come first词组优先原则02Later,advanced and longer后、高、长原则The use of advanced words 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。u1.Computers are very important in our life.u2.Computers play a very important role in our life.u3.Computers are of great importance
3、 in our life.Phrases come first PracticePractice 锻炼对身体健康有益。uExercise Exercise benefits benefits our health.our health.uExercise Exercise is beneficial tois beneficial to our health.our health.uExerciseExercise does good to does good to our health.our health.uExercise Exercise is of great benefit toi
4、s of great benefit to our health.our health.uExercise Exercise is good foris good for our health.our health.Later,advanced and longerLater,advanced and longer（后、高、长原则)Original onesBetter onessurprisedshockedhappygladastonishedamazeddelightedcheerfuljoyfulpleased2Varied sentence patterns1The use of a
5、dvanced words7 ways to write a 7 ways to write a good sentence.good sentence.主动变被动陈述变倒装强调句with短语或复合结构分词结构it 作形式主语或宾语复合句1.Active voice Passive voice（被动）（被动）People plants a variety of flowers in the garden.A variety of flowers are planted in the garden.They have printed half a million copies of the bo
6、ok since 1990s.Half a million copies of the book have been printed since the 1990s.2.To invert a sentence（倒装）I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.Im not only interested in Chinese culture,but also took a rel
7、evant course.Not only am I interested in Chinese culture,but also took a relevant course.His honesty and bravery impressed me a lot.It was his honesty and bravery that impressed me a lot.3.To emphasize a sentence（强调）He has made great progress in English through hard-working.It is through hard-workin
8、g that he has made great progress in English.4.To write a compound sentence（复合句）01(Appositive Clause)同位语及同位语从句03(Subject Clause)主语从句02（Attributive Clause)定语从句04（Predicative Clause)表语从句05(Adverbial Clause)状语从句 The news is true.The mayor will deliver a speech in our school.The news that_ _ _ the mayor
9、 will deliver a speech in our school is true.1.Appositive Clause 同位语从句 which are well worth visiting.2.Attributive Clause 定语从句 In my opinion,the Daming Lake and the Baotu Spring are well worth visiting.In my opinion,the Daming lake and the Baotu Spring are the two places_ Yesterday,we went to the Wa
10、nda Square,and we bought a lot of clothes.Yesterday,we went to the Wanda Square,_ _.where we bought a lot of clothes.Many young ladies learn to do yoga.It is good for their health.Many young ladies learn to do yoga,_ is good for their health.whichHis excellent performance impressed me._most was his
11、excellent performance.What impressed me3.Subject Clause 主语从句 It satisfied me.The manager gave us a reasonable explanation._ was that the manager gave us a reasonable explanation.What satisfied me 4.Predicative Clause 表语从句我的梦想是成为一名医生.My dream is to be a doctor.My dream is that I can be a doctor.He mi
12、ssed the last bus,and so he was late today.他今天迟到了。原因：错过了末班车。The reason why he was late today is that he missed the last bus.5.Adverbial Clause 状语从句Work harder at your lessons,and youll catch up with your classmates sooner or later.If you work harder at your lessons,youll catch up with your classmate
13、s sooner or later.So/as long as you work harder at your lessons,youll catch up with your classmates sooner or later.五、it it 作形式主语或形式宾语句型We should remember these words by heart.It is important.It is important that we should remember these words.We should obey the traffic rules.It is our duty.I think
14、_ our duty _.itto obey the traffic rules_,you will make greater progress in your studies.六、分词结构(V-ing&V-ed)(V-ing&V-ed)代替状语从句 If you work harder,you will make greater progress in your studies.Working hard The girl couldnt help crying when she knew the result._ the result,the girl couldnt help crying
15、.Knowing七、with with 引导的短语或者复合结构在Tom的帮助下，我成功地完成了那个实验。_,I succeeded in carrying out the experiment.With the help of Tom没有完成任务，Tom受到了老师的批评。_,Tom was criticized by his teacher.With the task not finishedXiao Ming knows Xiao Ming knows everything everything andandWeWe are very surprised.are very surprised
16、.PracticePossible ways:Possible ways:1.We are very surprised that Xiao Ming knows everything.2.That Xiao Ming knows everything surprises us/makes us surprised.3.It surprises us that Xiao Ming knows everything.4.Xiao Ming knows so much that we are very surprised.5.What surprises us is that Xiao Ming
17、knows everything 6.It is Xiao Mings knowing everything that surprises us.7.So much does Xiao Ming know that we are very surprised.Practice Practice uUse what you have learned today to write a short paragraph.u 你将在课堂上学习唐诗。唐诗反映你将在课堂上学习唐诗。唐诗反映了传统的中国文化，深受中国人民喜了传统的中国文化，深受中国人民喜爱。通过学习唐诗，你不仅可以领略爱。通过学习唐诗，你不仅
18、可以领略到汉语之美，还可以更好的理解中国到汉语之美，还可以更好的理解中国文化。课前最好简要了解一下唐朝的文化。课前最好简要了解一下唐朝的历史历史。Step 1.Translate each sentenceStep 1.Translate each sentence1.你将在课堂上学习唐诗。2.唐诗反映了传统的中国文化，深受中国人民喜爱。3.通过学习唐诗，你不仅可以领略到汉语之美，还可以更好的理解中国文化。4.课前最好简要了解一下唐朝的历史。Step 1.Translate each sentenceStep 1.Translate each sentenceu1.你将在课堂上学习唐诗。In
19、the class,you will learn Tang poetry.2.唐诗反映了传统的中国文化，深受中国人民喜爱。Tang poetry reflects traditional Chinese culture,and Chinese people love it very much.Step 1.Translate each sentenceStep 1.Translate each sentenceu3.通过学习唐诗，你不仅可以领略到汉语之美，还可以更好的理解中国文化。4.课前最好简要了解一下唐朝的历史。Youd better know something about the hi
20、story of Tang Dynasty before class.By learning Tang poetry,you can not only feel the beauty of Chinese,but also understand Chinese culture better.Step 2.ModifyStep 2.ModifyIn the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry.Tang poetry reflects traditional Chinese culture,and Chinese people love it very
21、much.As scheduled,you will mainly learn Tang poetry in the class,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.Step 2.ModifyStep 2.ModifyBy learning Tang poetry,you can not only feel the beauty of Chinese,but also understand Chinese culture better.By learning Tang poetry,
22、not only can you feel the beauty of Chinese,but also you can have a better understanding of our splendid culture.Step 2.ModifyStep 2.ModifyYoud better know something about the history of Tang Dynasty before class.Youd better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the h
23、istory of Tang Dynasty,which makes it easy for you to go through the class.Step 3.Combine those sentences into one pieceStep 3.Combine those sentences into one piece As scheduled,you will mainly learn Tang poetry in the class,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.
24、By learning Tang poetry，not only can you feel the beauty of Chinese,but also you can have a better understanding of the Chinese culture.Youd better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty,which makes it easy for you to go through the class.Su
25、mmarySummaryPassive voicePhrase comes firstTo emphasize a sentenceLater,advanced and longerTo invert a sentenceCompound sentenceIt V-ing/V-edWith HomeworkHomeworku20162016全国卷全国卷I Iu假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（简历（resumeresume）。给外教）。给外教MS Jenkins MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（的文字和格式（formatformat）。）。u注意：注意：u1.1.词数词数100100左右左右;u2.2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
