1、读后续写读后续写情绪表达五种高级方法授课目标:通过复习五种情绪表达的高级写法,帮助学生在写作中通过高级情绪写法,迅速提高写作成绩。Part.01 形容词作状语形容词作状语通常用来说明主语的情况,具有副词的功能。形容词作状语时,可位于句首、句末或句中,一般用逗号将其与句子的其它部分隔开。结构:Adj,SVO结构:Adj,SVOEg.Modest and easy-going,Mr.Johnson soon put everyone at ease.约翰逊先生谦虚随和,很快就使大家放松下来。结构:Adj,SVOEg.Thrilled and enraptured,Jane quickened pa
2、ce and sprinted to the helicopter,knowing that she would be rescued eventually.简欣喜若狂,加快了步伐,向直升机冲去,她知道自己终于获救了。结构:Adj,SVOEg.Thrilled and enraptured,Jane quickened pace and sprinted to the helicopter,knowing that she would be rescued eventually.简欣喜若狂,加快了步伐,向直升机冲去,她知道自己终于获救了。结构:Adj,SVO翻译:心满意足的,姐姐看了看这些花,
3、认为它们是世界上最奇妙的作品。Satisfied,my sister stared at the flowers,regarding them as the most marvelous work in the world结构:Adj,SVO翻译:兴奋喜悦的,Puppy摇了摇尾巴,在地毯上跳来跳去。Enraptured and elated,Puppy wagged her tail,bouncing around the carpet.Part.02 so that倒装结构:So+adj+be/V+主词+that 当“so/such.that.”结构中的so,such连同它所直接修饰的成分共
4、同位于句首表示强调时,主句要进行倒装(that后面的结果状语从句不倒装).结构:So+adj+be/V+主词+that Eg.Recalling these hurtful words,so furious was Paul that he stormed out and slammed the door heavily,striding away without looking back.保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼(hurtful words),气得暴跳如雷,重重地摔门而去,头也不回地大步走开(大步走 stride away)。结构:So+adj+be/V+主词+that Eg.Spottin
5、g this,so frightened was the deer that she shivered and trembled all over like a leaf.看到这儿,小鹿吓得像一片叶子一样浑身颤抖。结构:So+adj+be/V+主词+that 翻译练习:回想起那一幕,简非常后悔,忍不住哭了起来,泪水夺眶而出。Recalling the scene,so regretful was Jane that she couldt stop crying,tears sparking out her eyes.结构:So+adj+be/V+主词+that 翻译练习:杰克激动得走上舞台,给
6、了妻子一个温暖的拥抱。So thrilled was Jack that he stepped into the stage,giving his wife a warm hug.Part.03 非谓语动词结构:Feeling deeply/profoundly+adj,SVO非谓语动词用于情绪描写主要以Feeling+adj的形式展开,或者理解为形容词作状语的一种简单变形,在形容词之前加上Feeling即可。结构:Feeling deeply/profoundly+adj,SVOEg.Feeling deeply satisfied,my sister stared at the flowe
7、rs,regarding them as the most marvelous work in the world.感到非常满意,姐姐看了看这些花,认为它们是世界上最奇妙的作品。结构:Feeling deeply/profoundly+adj,SVOEg.Feeling deeply touched,Grandpa patted his shoulder and stroked his hair tenderly.爷爷深受感动,轻轻地拍着他的肩膀,抚摩着他的头发。结构:Feeling deeply/profoundly+adj,SVO翻译练习:杰克感到又羞愧又尴尬,他低下头,一言不发地回到座位
8、上Feeling ashamed and embarrassed,Jack lowered his head,stepping back to his seat without saying a word.结构:Feeling deeply/profoundly+adj,SVO翻译练习:简感到精疲力竭,毫无希望,吃力地穿过茂密的森林,希望直升飞机能再飞回来Feeling exhausted and hopeless,Jane dragged herself through the dense forest,hoping the helicopter to come back again.Par
9、t.04 独立主格“独立主格结构”在句中的功能就相当于一个带有自己主语的状语从句。前面也可加上with.结构:SVO,A gush of/A ripple of+情绪名词+flooding into ones heart/sweeping over ones face.Sadness悲伤,sorrow 悲伤,remorse 悔恨,anxiety着急,fear害怕,excitement兴奋,sympathy 同情,joy愉快 pleasure快乐,happiness 幸福,puzzlement,blankness 茫然,relief 释然,guilt 愧 疚,disappointment 失望E
10、g.Jane realized that,a gush of sadness flooding into her heart.简意识到了这一点,顿时一阵悲伤涌上心头。Eg.Staring at his receding figure,I suddenly understood the real meaning of the tin heart,a gush of relief flooding into my heart.望着他渐渐远去的身影,我忽然明白了那颗锡心的真正含义,一种如释重负的感觉涌上心头。翻译练习:他兴奋地拥抱着爷爷,脸上掠过一丝喜悦He hugged Grandpa excit
11、edly,a ripple of joy sweeping over his face.翻译练习:他砰的一声把门关上,像一阵风似地冲了出去,一股焦虑的情绪涌上心头。He slapped the door and stormed out like a wind,a gush of anxiety flooding into his heart.Part.05 特定句型.almost drowned sb Eg.Blankness and puzzlement almost drown her when Jane realized that she had been lost in the for
12、est and might never see her husband again.当简意识到她在森林里迷路了,而且可能再也见不到她的丈夫时,茫然和困惑几乎淹没了她。.almost drowned sb Eg.Sorrow and remorse almost drowned her when Jenny was reminded of his words.当珍妮想起他的话时,悲伤和悔恨几乎淹没了她。.almost drowned sb 翻译练习:当路易斯叔叔告诉我我们要去人类居住区时,我无比兴奋。Excitement almost drowned me when uncle Louis told me we would head for human settlement.almost drowned sb 翻译练习:当我妹妹发现爸爸最喜欢的康乃馨被永远毁了的时候,她的悔恨几乎淹没了她。Regret almost drowned my sister when she found Dads favorite carnations had been ruined forever.Thanks