1、Welcome to my class!Do you like the song whose name is Try everything?Which grammar item do you think the sentences use?Attributive Clause We all like the song whose name is Try everything“which is the theme song of Zootopia.The Restrictive Attributive Clause in writing(限制性定从在写作中的运用限制性定从在写作中的运用)Lear
2、ning Objectives：1 Know the functions of each relative pronoun and adverb in restrictive attributive clause correctly;2 Use the restrictive attributive clause correctly to translate sentences 3 Use the restrictive attributive clause correctly to write a short introductive passage.4 Develop the studen
3、ts ability of corporation and assessment,and learn the optimistic spirit of the cartoon characters.4关系代词关系代词修饰修饰成分（从句）成分（从句）省略省略whichthatwhowhomwhose物物人、物人、物人人人人人、物人、物主、宾语主、宾语主、宾语主、宾语主、宾语主、宾语宾语宾语定语定语在从句中作宾语时可以省略在从句中作宾语时可以省略u连接词：连接词：关系副词关系副词修饰修饰成分（从句）成分（从句）省略省略whenwherewhy表时间的名词表时间的名词表地点的名词表地点的名词reas
4、on在从句中作状语，从句不能缺主语或宾语在从句中作状语，从句不能缺主语或宾语不可省略不可省略Zootopia is a modern mammal metropolis(动物大都市动物大都市).All the animals have their own living place in the modern mammal metropolis.All the animals can live in peace in the modern mammal metropolis.What do you know about Zootopia?Zootopia is a modern mammal m
5、etropolis where all the animals have their own living place and can live in peace.How to combine the 3 sentences into one by using the attributive clause?Judy has dreamed of becoming a police since she was young.Judy becomes the first rabbit to join the police force who/thatJudy _has dreamed of beco
6、ming a police since she was young becomes the first rabbit to join the police force Nick is a fox.Judy works with Nick in a case.whomNick is a fox_ Judy works with in a case.This is Nicks friend whose name is Flash.This is Nicks friend.His name is Flash.There was a time_ Judy was very confused about
7、 the case of animal disappearance.whenWith the help of Nick,Judy succeeded finally.Thats the reason_ Judy and Nick become good friends.whyCorrect your sentences！Zootopia is a modern mammal metropolis where all the animals have their own living place and can live in peace.Judy who has dreamed of beco
8、ming a police since she was young becomes the first rabbit to join the police force.Nick is a fox whom Judy works with in solving the case.Nick has a friend whose name is Flash.There was a time when Judy was very confused about the case of animal disappearance.Thats the reason why Judy and Nick beco
9、me good friends.When should we use attributive clause in writing?Introduce a placeIntroduce a personIntroduce the timeIntroduce the reasonWriting time！Writing:Writing:Write an introduction of Write an introduction of ZootopiaZootopia 假如你是校电视台的主播李华。因电视台栏目假如你是校电视台的主播李华。因电视台栏目“电影之声电影之声”需要写需要写一篇电影介绍报告。以
10、下是一些电影相关信息一篇电影介绍报告。以下是一些电影相关信息。片名片名：Zootopia 导导 演演：Byron Howard 发行公司发行公司：The Walt Disney Company (发行发行:release v)上映日期上映日期：2016-03-04 剧情介绍剧情介绍：疯狂动物城是一座现代动物都市。每种动物在这里都疯狂动物城是一座现代动物都市。每种动物在这里都有自己的居所。动物们在这里和平共处。自小就梦想成为警官的有自己的居所。动物们在这里和平共处。自小就梦想成为警官的Judy，成为史上第一任兔子警官。不过乐观的兔子警官，成为史上第一任兔子警官。不过乐观的兔子警官 要和一群要和一
11、群强硬的大块头动物警察合作可不是件容易事。为了证明自己，她强硬的大块头动物警察合作可不是件容易事。为了证明自己，她决心侦破一桩动物失踪案决心侦破一桩动物失踪案;追寻真相的路上她被迫与狐狸追寻真相的路上她被迫与狐狸Nick联手，联手，最终获得成功。最终获得成功。写作要求写作要求;1请结合请结合实际需要实际需要和和自己的观影感受自己的观影感受写一篇写一篇100词左右的电影介绍。其中剧情可词左右的电影介绍。其中剧情可适度增加细节。适度增加细节。2 作文中需要写上自己的观影感受作文中需要写上自己的观影感受3尽量使用多种定语从句表达相关内容。尽量使用多种定语从句表达相关内容。第二步：合理第二步：合理分段
12、分段，合理，合理扩充扩充第一步：认真第一步：认真审题审题 文体？时态？人称？要点？文体？时态？人称？要点？zWriting:Writing:Write an introduction of Write an introduction of ZootopiaZootopia 假如你是校电视台的主播李华。因电视台栏目假如你是校电视台的主播李华。因电视台栏目“电影之声电影之声”需要写一篇电影需要写一篇电影介绍报告。以下是一些电影相关信息介绍报告。以下是一些电影相关信息。片名：片名：Zootopia 导导 演演(director)：Byron Howard 发行公司：发行公司：The Walt Dis
13、ney Company (发行发行:release v)上映日期：上映日期：2016-03-04 剧情介绍：疯狂动物城是一座现代动物都市。每种动物在这里都有自己的剧情介绍：疯狂动物城是一座现代动物都市。每种动物在这里都有自己的居所。动物们在这里和平共处。自小就梦想成为警官的居所。动物们在这里和平共处。自小就梦想成为警官的Judy，成为史上，成为史上第一任兔子警官。不过乐观的兔子警官第一任兔子警官。不过乐观的兔子警官 要和一群强硬的大块头动物警察合要和一群强硬的大块头动物警察合作可不是件容易事。为了证明自己，她决心侦破一桩动物失踪案作可不是件容易事。为了证明自己，她决心侦破一桩动物失踪案;追寻真
14、追寻真相的路上她被迫与狐狸相的路上她被迫与狐狸Nick联手，最终获得成功。联手，最终获得成功。写作要求写作要求;1请结合请结合实际需要实际需要和和自己的观影感受自己的观影感受写一篇写一篇100词左右的电影介绍。其中词左右的电影介绍。其中剧情可适度剧情可适度增加细节。增加细节。2 作文中需要写上作文中需要写上自己的观影感受自己的观影感受3尽量使用尽量使用多种定语从句表达多种定语从句表达相关内容。相关内容。Para 1:general introductionPara 2:main plotPara 3:your feeling 作文评价表（作文评价表（25分）分）Excellent/good/n
15、eed improvement+分分内容内容能用约能用约100词表达完词表达完整的内容（整的内容（10分）分）结构结构每个句子主谓结构完每个句子主谓结构完整符合语法（整符合语法（6分）分）表达表达手段手段有充分使用到各种关有充分使用到各种关系词的定语从句（系词的定语从句（6分）分）书面书面书写，卷面书写，卷面3分分 Hello everyone！Im glad to share a film with you.This film is called Zootopia，whose director is Byron Howard.Zootopia which is released by the
16、 Walt Disney Company was on show on March 3rd,2016.Zootopia is a modern mammal metropolis where all the animals have their own living place and can live in peace.There is a rabbit whose name is Judy.Judy who has dreamed of becoming a police since she was young becomes the first rabbit to join the po
17、lice force.However,the optimistic Judy finds that its hard to work with those policemen who are big and strong.Luckily,she is encouraged by the words of Mayor Lionheart who is the top leader in Zootopia.He says that everyone could be anything that they want in Zootopia.To prove herself,she is determ
18、ined to work out a case of the animal disappearance.And Nick is a fox whom Judy works with in solving the case.Nick has a friend whose name is Flash.During the course,there was a time when Judy was very confused about the case.With the help of Nick,Judy succeeded finally.Thats the reason why Judy an
19、d Nick become good friends.After watching this film,I am deeply moved by the encouragement and optimism that are shown by Judy.And I always believe that lifes a little bit messy and we all make mistakes.No matter what you are,change starts with you.So let us try everything.Thank you for your listening!Homework1 Polish your composition 2 Finish exs on your handout
