1、 高考英语书面表达阅卷情况分析及启示 本次高考阅卷特点：1.阅卷的速度快；2.阅卷时间长；3.阅卷老师的心理状态：4.高考卷其余部分较浅；给分中庸平均分：峰值：约13分1718分最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生书面表达是提高平均分最大的潜力股影响给分的四大因素：影响给分的四大因素：一一.作文的卷面；作文的卷面；二二.文中所采用的语言材料的层次；文中所采用的语言材料的层次；三三.行文的流畅度；行文的流畅度；四四.文章的思想性；文章的思想性；一一.作文的卷面；作文的卷面；漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点建议 I：1.1.高三各次考试中打卷面分；高三各次考试中打卷面分；2.2.大张旗鼓地组织学生练书法；大张旗鼓
2、地组织学生练书法；3.3.提供标准的考试用纸提供标准的考试用纸;二二.文中所采用的语言材料的层次；文中所采用的语言材料的层次；人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;1.1.goodgood2.think2.think3.in my opinion3.in my opinionperfect.excellent.outstanding promising favorable hold the view that it is widely shared that it is universally acknowledged that for my part，
3、from my own perspective 4.more and more4.more and more5.remember5.remember6.for example6.for example7.helpful 7.helpful keep in mindan increasing number of a growing number of to name only a few beneficial,rewarding1.充分利用课文；充分利用课文；建议建议 IIII：2.鼓励同学平时重视优美语句鼓励同学平时重视优美语句 的收集和欣赏；的收集和欣赏；3.从日常讲解作文做起；从日常讲解作
4、文做起；Destinationv every now and then;every now and then;v get the itch to;get the itch to;v feel the urge to;feel the urge to;v stretch itself lazily along;stretch itself lazily along;v give a glimpse of;give a glimpse of;v a walk through is a history lesson;a walk through is a history lesson;v Few v
5、isitors leave feeling Few visitors leave feeling disappointed.disappointed.v is a paradise for;is a paradise for;v a feast for the eye;a wide variety a feast for the eye;a wide variety of of 三.行文的流畅度上下贯通、一气呵成建议 III：2.组织学生归纳各种功能的连词，组建“连词库”1.突出文章段落中的主题句；Some examples：意义上承上启下的连词：Whats more,moreover,at
6、the same time,then,besides,in addition,furthermore 意义转折的连词：however,nevertheless,on the other hand,on the contrary,in other words,by the way 四文章思想性的体现“万能模板”现象：新八股文08年上海卷书面表达：Guided Writing你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：你是否会参加比赛你做出该决定的具体理由08年广东卷书面表达：学校最近组
7、织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括：1.以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；2.然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：(1)对中学生活的感受；(2)理想的大学生活；(3)中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打 算如何适应。四文章思想性的体现“万能模板”现象：新八股文建议 IV：有思路，有活路补充：1.避免低级错误，尤其写好首尾段；2.对高考最后一段时间书面表达辅导的 认识;高考29分高分作文欣赏 There are basica
8、lly two ways to get work done.One way is working individually and the other is working in a team.Of course,they each have their own characteristics.The former,working individually,can allow people to do things in whatever ways they like.Besides,people can also solve problems by themselves.The latter
9、,however,is quite different.It requires team spirit.As is known to all,two heads are better than one.Many people can talk over problems together.Whats more,people can learn from each other in team work.Personally,I prefer to combine them together.Because working individually can help me build up my
10、ability to stand on my own feet while working in a team gives me a chance to acquire experience from others.(129 words.)26分作文鉴赏There are basically two ways to get work done.Namely,working individually and working in a team.Each of them has its own advantages.The former one,that is，working individual
11、ly,is a very way to develop ones DIY ability.People make arrangement and solve problems by themselves,which will contribute to theforming of personality of independence.The latter shows exactly the immense power of cooperation.People discuss together and learn from each other.And any problems can be
12、 overcome more effectively and efficiently.In terms of me,I prefer the latter one.As an old saying goes,three minds make a giant.Also it is easy to imagine that one person might be willing in mind,but weak in muscle.So to work in a team is a wiser preference.（132 words）小结：1.整洁的卷面；-气派门面 2.丰富的词汇；-高档建材 3.流畅的结构；-合理布局 4.独到的见解；-金玉其内
