1、必修一 Unit 2 Sports and Fitness(7)高一年级 英语A True Story Writing WorkshopTeens Newspaper invites you to write a true story.The story would be something that either happened to you or someone who inspired you in the past.Get Ready for Writing An imaginary storyA true story Get Ready for Writing You are go
2、ing to write a true story to share with readers.Think about the questions before writing.1.Who is your story about?2.Why do you want to write this story?Get Ready for Writing Read for Writing The Final Sprintcyclo-cross race公路越野赛a short period of fast running to the finishing line Read for Writing R
3、ead the story“The Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.1.Where and when did it happen?2.Who were the main characters?3.How did the story develop?4.What was the result?Read for Writing It happened in the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain with 300 metres from the finishing line.Para.
4、1Read the story“The Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.1.Where and when did it happen?Read for Writing 2.Who were the main characters?Ismael Esteban and Agustin Navarro.Para.2Read the story“The Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.Read for Writing 3.How did the story develop?Para.2+3Read the story“The
5、 Final Sprint”.Answer the questions.Put the pictures into the correct order.123puncture Read for Writing 3.How did the story develop?Esteban was in third place with only 300 metres to the finishing line.Esteban got a puncture,threw his bike over his shoulder and raced towards the finishing line.Nava
6、rro caught up with him.Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.climaxtime order Read for Writing 4.What was the result?Esteban won the bronze model and tried to give his medal to Navarro.But Navarro refused.Para.3How do you understand sportsmanship?The Final SprintSettingCharactersDevel
7、opmentClimaxEndingRead the story again.Take notes in the first column.the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in SpainThe Final SprintCharactersRead the story again.Take notes in the first column.Ismael Esteban,Agustin NavarroRead the story again.Take notes in the first
8、column.The Final SprintDevelopmentEstebans bike got a punture.Esteban threw his bike over his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.The Final SprintClimaxRead the story again.Take notes in the first column.Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him.The two cyclists reached the fin
9、ishing line with Esteban ahead on foot,Navarro just behind him.The Final SprintEndingRead the story again.Take notes in the first column.Navarro let Esteban finish in third place,while he came fourth.1Setting;Characters2 Development3Climax4Ending5Comments Write an OutlineWhat opinion?Where?When?Who?
10、How?What conflict?What result?key words or phrasesWriting a story is like climbing a mountain!My StorySettingCharactersDevelopmentClimaxEndingTake notes in“My Story”column.Focus on StructureSetting;CharactersDevelopmentClimaxEndingComments An ExampleA final part of the 2016 World Triathlon Series(铁人
11、三项)in Mexico.Brownlee brothers:Alistair and Jonny.Jonny,in lead,with his brother Alistair in the third place.Around the corner,Alistair saw Jonny was about to fall.Should he help his brother or win alone?Alistair pushed Jonny,which put Jonny the second place.Focus on Language1.It was the final sprin
12、t of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain.Sentence Structure(2)Attribute Focus on Language2.Just a few seconds later,fourth-placed Navarro caught up with him.Sentence Structure(2)Adverbial(time)Focus on Language3.Navarro let Esteban run ahead of him.Sentence Structure(2)Verb Obj
13、ect Object Complement Focus on Language4.After the race,Navarro said,“I didnt want to win that way.”Sentence Structure(2)Adverbial(time)Adverbial(way)Focus on LanguageuAttributeuAdverbial(time,place,way,reason.)uVerb+Object+Object ComplementDetails Writing Help Writing a True Storyl SETTING&CHARACTE
14、RSl COMMENTSl ORDER(time)l TRUEl DETAILSSCORESTeens Newspaper invites you to write a true story.The story would be something that either happened to you or someone who inspired you in the past.Writing TimeIt was the final part of the 2016 World Triathlon Series in Mexico.With just 700 metres to go,A
15、listair Brownlee was in third place and his younger brother,Jonny,was in the lead.JUST A BROTHERSetting+Characters Alistair pushed himself towards the finishing line in the burning heat,but as he came round the corner,he saw his brother about to fall onto the track.Alistair had to choosebrotherly lo
16、ve,or a chance to win the race?JUST A BROTHERDevelopment For Alistair,the choice was clear.His brother was in trouble.He had to help.Alistair ran towards Jonny,caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line.Alistair then pushed his brother over the line.JUST A BROTHERClimax The move put
17、Jonny in second place and Alistair himself in third.It was an unexpected end to the race,but Alistair did not want to discuss it with the media.He just wanted to see his younger brother,who had been rushed to the medical area.JUST A BROTHEREnding Watched by millions,the ending to the race has divide
18、d opinions:should the brothers have been disqualified or highly praised for their actions?But for Alistair,at that moment,he was no longer an athlete aiming for a medalhe was just a brother.JUST A BROTHERComment Summary 1.Ideas:Brainstorm ideas;2.Outlining:Use Mountain Diagram;3.Drafting:Use your outline and SCORES;4.Editing:Edit your story in pairs with Peer Edition Sheet.Writing a True Story1.Finish your writing draft;2.Edit your story in pairs.(Peer Editing Sheet,P90.)Homework Thank you!
