1、 Dear Mary,Dear Mary, I feel bad these days. I got myself in trouble. I lost my cell phone ,my parents got angry about this. And for my poor grades, they refuse to buy me another one. I really dont know what to do. I hope you can give me advice. Yours, Jane What happened to What happened to him?him?
2、 writing How to write a suggestive letter Short Introduction: 写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和 忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个 组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的 内容，提出建议的理由。 What is a suggestive letter? 建议信就是:： 三 个 段 落 三 个 段 落 首段首段： (reason)建议信的开头要开门见 山，表明写作意图、目的及原因。 主体段落：主体段落： (suggestion）就某事提出建 议，改进措施或忠告 （包括给出的和要 求扩展的建议内容和理由）。 尾段：尾段：
3、 (hope)希望对方接受建议， 并能对其有所帮助。 The structure 时态：时态： 人称人称： 第二人称 一般现在时 Beginning: state your purpose 1. Im sorry to hear that you have trouble in Here Id like to give some suggestions. 2. Im glad to offer you some advice on 3 .I am writing to express my views concerning Lets enjoy some sentence patterns B
4、ody ： give your advice 1. First of all, it would be more beneficial if you could 2. It should be a good idea to 3. If I were you, I would Ending ： express your hope 1.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 2.I hope you could take my advice into consideration. 3.Im sure if you take my advice
5、, you will 常见连接词常见连接词罗列观点罗列观点 Firstly, First of all, To begin with, In the first place, For one thing, Secondly, Besides, Whats more, In addition, For another thing, Finally, At last, In the end, Last but not least, 首先首先 其次其次 最后最后 Dear_, (1)I ,m sorry to hear that you have trouble in_. Here Id like
6、to give some suggestions. (2) First of all , it would be more beneficial if you could_. As .Besides, Because _ . Last but not least, it should be a good idea to _. Im sure that . (3) I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Best wishes, A template of a suggestive letter _ 假如你是李华，你的美国网友假如你是李华，
7、你的美国网友Mike最近因学习压力太患上了最近因学习压力太患上了 焦虑症（焦虑症（anxiety disorder，写信向你求助。请你用英文，写信向你求助。请你用英文 给他回一封建议信，内容要包含以下要点。给他回一封建议信，内容要包含以下要点。 注意：词数注意：词数100左右。左右。 1.学会放松，（散步、运动学会放松，（散步、运动） 2.学习时不给自己太大的压力学习时不给自己太大的压力 3. 和朋友，父母或老师分享你的情感和朋友，父母或老师分享你的情感 Challenging 使用上面模板写出下面作文 人称：人称： 第二人称第二人称 时态：时态： 一般现在时一般现在时 问题：问题： 患上焦虑
8、症患上焦虑症 建议建议 题材题材 建议信建议信 1.因学习压力太患上了轻度的焦虑症因学习压力太患上了轻度的焦虑症 2.学会放松，（散步、运动学会放松，（散步、运动） 3.学习时不给自己太大的压力学习时不给自己太大的压力 4.和朋友，父母或老师分享你的情感和朋友，父母或老师分享你的情感 学习压力学习压力 患上患上 放松放松 散步散步 运动运动 分享分享 情感情感 太大的压力太大的压力 stress of studying suffer from relax Take a walk sport Too much stress share emotion 第二步：第二步：搜索相关词组搜索相关词组 推
9、荐句型推荐句型：Im sorry to hear that从句从句 Im sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorder because of great stress of studying. 1.因学习压力太大患上了焦虑症 2. 努力学习的同时放松自己，如你累的时候可 以散步或和同学一起做运动 推荐句型推荐句型：you ought to +as well as并列句并列句 You ought to study hard as well as relax yourself .When you are tired, you
10、can take a walk or do some sports with your classmates. 第三步：搜索相关句型第三步：搜索相关句型(问题及建议的扩展句问题及建议的扩展句) 3.不要给自己太大的压力不要给自己太大的压力,否则深感沮丧，有害健康否则深感沮丧，有害健康 推荐句型：推荐句型：DontwhenDontwhen从句，从句，oror并列句并列句,which,which从句从句. . Dont give yourself too much stress when you study, or you may feel depressed, which will do har
11、m to your health. 4.和朋友、父母或老师分享你的内心情感和朋友、父母或老师分享你的内心情感 推荐句型：推荐句型：简单句简单句you couldyou could You could share your inner emotions with your friends, parents or teachers. A. study hard as well as relax yourself. When you are tired, you can take a walk or do some sports with your classmates. B. First of a
12、ll C. share your inner emotions with your friends, parents or teachers D. Dont give yourself too much stress , or you may feel depressed, which do harm to your health E. Besides 第三步第三步. 连句成文连句成文 Use the expressions to finish the letter below Dear Mike, (1) I ,m sorry to hear that you have trouble in
13、. suffering from anxiety disorder because of great stress of studying. Here Id like to give some suggestions. (2) 1. , it would be more beneficial if you could 2._.As an old saying goes, all work and no play Makes Jack a dull boy.3. , when you study, 4._ .Last but not least, it should be a good idea
14、 to 5._. I,m sure that you will become happier and healthier. (3) I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Best wishes, LiHua A A C C D D B B E E Dear Mike, I ,m sorry to hear that you have trouble in suffering from anxiety disorder because of great stress of studying . Here Id like to give s
15、ome suggestions . First of all , it would be more beneficial if you could study hard as well as relax yourself. When you are tired, you can take a walk or do some sports with your classmates. As an old saying goes, all work and no play Makes Jack a dull boy. Besides, when you study, Dont give yourse
16、lf too much stress, or you may feel depressed, which do harm to your health . Last but not least, it should be a good idea to share your inner emotions with your friends, parents or teachers . Im sure that you will become happier and healthier. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Best wi
17、shes, LiHua 假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写 信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信， 词数100左右。 1、健康饮食 2、多锻炼 3、喝足够多的水 Dear Jane, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on_ First, it is important to _. As youll _. Then, it also helps if you _. Besides, it should be a good idea to _. Because_. you can also _. Im sure that_. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Sincerely yours, 用模板完成下面作文 Thank you !Thank you !
