1、写作素养提升练写作素养提升练安徽译林版八年级上安徽译林版八年级上Unit 4 Do it yourself本单元的话题为“自己动手做”，要求写关于“自己动手做事”的短文。写作时，首先根据写作提示介绍自己动手做事的起因；其次详细描述自己动手做事的过程和结果，可用first，next，then 和finally 等词进行描述；最后要介绍自己的感想，同时可以表达自己的希望。安徽译林版八年级上安徽译林版八年级上写作时主要用第一人称或第三人称单数，在描述做事的过程和结果时应用一般过去时。表达希望时可用一般将来时。安徽译林版八年级上安徽译林版八年级上你的生日快要到了，你的妈妈决定自己为你做蛋糕，你花了两个
2、小时的时间帮助妈妈做蛋糕。请你写一篇日记，记录如何做蛋糕，不少于80 词。【思路构建思路构建】步骤构思列纲1决定自己为我做蛋糕decided to make a cake for me by herself2用了小时It took.hours to.finish.3首先然后最终 当我们完成时First.Then.Finally.When we completed.Saturday,29 OctoberMy birthday is coming,so my mother decided to make a cake for me by herself.It took me two hours t
3、o help my mother finish the work.First I helped my mother put three kilos of flour into a bowl.Next my mother added one kilo of butter to the flour.Then she mixed the butter and the flour together and added a glass of milk.Finally,she broke【精彩范文精彩范文】twelve eggs into the bowl and added one kilo of su
4、gar.When we completed the work,there was flour on everything:the table,my clothes,my hands and my face!I believe I can make a better cake next time,because practice makes perfect.add,mix,instead,terrible,advise,salad,certain【单词单词】stand for,be crazy about,put in,fill.with.,for example【短语短语】I decided.
5、by myself.Lets.Wed better.It took me.to finish.This is the first.Ive made.Its.for sb.to do sth.Practice makes perfect.【句型句型】以“My first DIY job”为题，写一篇短文，内容必须包括以下要点：1.在妈妈生日前做一个生日音乐盒，并保密，给妈妈一个惊喜；2.花了许多时间，在制作期间曾出错；3.将一朵真玫瑰粘贴在盒盖上；4.打开盒子，妈妈就能听到生日歌；5.第一次为妈妈做礼物，妈妈高兴，你更高兴。注意：词数不少于80（开头已给出，不计入总词数），可适当增加细节，使句子
6、通顺、连贯。My first DIY jobMy mothers birthday is coming,so I decided to makeher a birthday music box by myself._My first DIY jobMy mothers birthday is coming，so I decided to make her a birthday music box by myself.I went to Amys home to make it because I wanted to keep it secret.Amy helped me make the m
7、usic box.We had fun working together.It took me a week to finish it.Lots of things went_wrong during that time.Finally,I stuck a real rose on the cover of the music box.When my mother opens it,she will hear the birthday song.This is my first DIY job for Mum.I hope she will like it.If Mum is happy,I will be happier.
