1、Unit 5 单元同步作文指导单元同步作文指导本单元以“谈论产品”为话题，围绕产品是由什么制造，在哪儿制造等相关内容展开，同时也向同学们介绍了一些代表中国传统文化的物品，如剪纸、孔明灯、陶瓷等。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能根据所学，介绍某种产品或描述家乡的某种特产。教材中出现的相关句型：My town/city is famous for.is famous in my town/city.is/are made of/from/with/by/in.is/are used for.is/are known for.is/are special because.As far as I kno
2、w，tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains.据我所知，茶叶树被种植在山的侧面。It seems that many people all over the world drink Chinese tea.似乎全世界的人都喝中国茶。When the leaves are ready，they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing.当叶子长好后，它们被人们手工采摘下来，然后送去加工。Tea is good for both health and business.茶叶对身体和商业
3、都有好处。According to Chinese history，sky lanterns were first used by Zhuge Kongming.根据中国历史，孔明灯最先被诸葛孔明使用。They are seen as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.它们被看作是幸福、美好祝愿的象征。During the Spring Festival，they are put on windows，doors and walls as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.在春节期间，它们
4、被贴在窗户上、门上、墙上当作好运气、新年愉快的象征。假设你是李明，你的国外网友埃里克(Eric)在网上看到几幅中国剪纸(Chinese paper cutting)，对此很感兴趣，故发来邮件询问有关中国剪纸的相关信息，请你根据下表提示给他回复邮件。Dear Eric，You wanted to know about Chinese paper cutting.Here Im glad to tell you something about it.Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years.It can be seen
5、 in different parts of China.Many people,no matter young or old,are fond of it.People in northern part of China is good at making paper cutting.The paper,usually red,is cut into different shapes，like birds,animals，flowers and so on.They are put on doors,windows and walls when people celebrate someth
6、ing happy，especially for the Spring Festival.More and more people are interested in it now.I hope youll come to China to see more Chinese paper cutting one day.Best wishes!Li Ming现代人放孔明灯多作祈福之用。男女老少亲手写下祝福的心愿，祈求丰收成功，幸福年年。孔明灯又叫天灯，俗称许愿灯。请根据以下提示简要地介绍一下孔明灯。1相传是三国时的诸葛孔明(即诸葛亮)所发明。2当年，诸葛孔明被司马懿围困于平阳，无法出城求救。孔明
7、根据风向，用会飘浮的纸灯笼，系上了求救的信息。最后脱险，于是后世就称这种灯笼为孔明灯。提示词：be surrounded被困；out of danger脱险；the direction of wind风向Do you know sky lanterns？They are used for asking for happiness and good wishes.They are made of bamboo and paper.According to Chinese history，they were first made by Zhuge Kongming.When he was surr
8、ounded in Pingyang，he had no way to go out for help.According to the direction of wind，he used the paper lanterns with the message.At last，he was out of danger.So people call them sky lanterns.十一、书面表达。(15分)假如你叫李华，最近你的美国朋友吉姆(Jim)想通过邮件了解你家乡最著名的传统艺术是什么。请你根据提示和问题回复邮件。Name of the artwork：kiteHistory：over
9、 2，000 yearsMaterial：paperFeatures(特征)：different sizes，shapes，fly highWhat is the most famous traditional art in your hometown?Whats it made of/from?How long is its history?.To：JimSubject：Artwork in my hometownHi，Jim！Im glad to hear from you.In your last email，you said you were interested in the loc
10、al artwork in my hometown.Now I will tell you something about it.My hometown is famous for making and flying kites.In my hometown，the history of making kites goes back to over 2，000 years_ago.Kites_are_mainly_made_of_paper，which_can_be_made_into_different_sizes_and_shapes.People_like_to_fly_them_in_
11、spring.Its_not_hard_to_fly_kites，and_flying_kites_is_great_fun.Some_can_fly_as_high_as_hundreds_of_meters.Yours，Li Hua Write a paragraph about the product.Use your notes in 3a.3b3bUsing the following expressions to help you:My town/city is famous for is famous in my town/city.is/are made of/from/wit
12、h/by/in is/are used for is/are known for is/are special because Lanterns have been around for about 1800 years.They were first used for lighting in the old days.Today,they are used at festivals and other celebrations.Chinese people love lanterns very much because theyre symbols of good luck and fami
13、ly reunion.From Spring Festival to Lantern Festival,lanterns are hung up everywhere.Lanterns were usually made of bamboo and paper in the old days.Now they are made of many kinds of materials,such as steel,silk,cloth,plastic and so on.They are made all around China.Lanterns are made in the shape of
14、different animals,vegetables,fruits and many other things.2根据3a表格中的信息以及3b的写作提示，写一篇短文来介绍家乡的产品，完成后小组内互相交流纠错，借鉴好词好句，教师抽查点拨。(7分钟)参考案例My town is famous for lanterns.They are made of bamboo strips and nice paper.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals，vegetables，fruits and many other things.Th
15、ey are made by the artists in my town in the factory.Lanterns was used for lighting and celebrating the festivals.It can also bring us good luck.While making lanterns people usually write riddles on lanterns.On the eve of Lantern Festival，all the lanterns are hung up.On Lantern Festival people go ou
16、tside to have a look at the lanterns and guess the riddles on the lanterns.六、书面表达。(15分)如果你仔细观察就会发现，身边的许多生活用品看似并不起眼，却对我们的衣食住行起着至关重要的作用。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一件你认为很重要的生活用品，并说一说它对你的生活产生了怎样的影响。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；280词左右。One possible version：There are many useful things around us.Each of them is playing an importa
17、nt role in our lives.For me，the most important one is the mobile phone.With the development of technology，people can do more and more things with mobile phones，such as making a call，searching for information and shopping online.As for me，I usually use my mobile phone to take pictures and talk with m
18、y friends.Sometimes I chat with my friends on WeChat.The mobile phone makes my life more convenient.义务教育教科书（人教版）九年级英语上册义务教育教科书（人教版）九年级英语上册二、篇章训练随着中国经济的腾飞，越来越多的中国人意识到保护非物质文化遗产的重要性。请你以“Chinese Xuan Paper”为题，写一篇120词左右的英语文章，介绍中国宣纸。参考词汇:稻草 rice straw；书画 calligraphy and painting；文人墨客 poets and writers；气味
19、smell；青檀qingtan；工序 procedureplace安徽泾县Materials used竹子，青檀，稻草How to make手工制作，十八道工序，约一年时间Be used for最好的书画用纸Features植物的气味，深受文人墨客喜爱，久存不坏，越久越贵More information盛于唐朝【写作微技能:make an outline】Chinese Xuan Paper is produced in Jing county，Anhui.请在“单元写作小专题(答题页)”相应位置完成。One possible version：Chinese Xuan PaperChinese
20、 Xuan Paper has a history over 1，000 years old.It became popular from Tang Dynasty.The best Chinese Xuan Paper is produced in Jing county，Anhui.It is made from bamboo，qingtan，rice straw and so on.It is the reason why people can smell pleasant smell of plants when using it.However，making Xuan Paper i
21、s not an easy job.It cant be made by machines but by hands only.Besides，it needs 18 procedures to make a perfect piece of Xuan Paper.So its very common to take about one year to complete everything.Xuan Paper is the best paper for calligraphy and paintings so it is always loved by poets and writers
22、both in the past and now.Whats more，the calligraphy and paintings on Xuan Paper can be kept and remained for many thousand years but never be destroyed when time goes by.In a word，Chinese Xuan Paper is thought to be one of the greatest treasures in China.And Chinese Xuan Paper also shows the love th
23、at all Chinese people have for life and beauty.书面表达。(10分)一批外国中学生要去参观你学校的剪纸作品，你将用英语向他们介绍中国剪纸艺术。以下是剪纸艺术的介绍：1.剪纸在中国历史悠久；2.剪纸的目的：喜庆或装饰；3.春节期间，贴在门窗上，表达快乐，希望得到好运；4.剪纸艺术在你校的情况：学校开设了剪纸课，许多学生都喜欢这项民间艺术。.One possible version：Paper cutting has a long history in China.It is used in China mainly for two purposes:
24、for celebration or decoration.The most common pictures are flowers，animals，and things about Chinese history.Chinese people always put paper cuts on doors and windows to express happiness during the Spring Festivals and to hope for good luck.Paper cutting lessons are offered in our school，and many st
25、udents are fond of this traditional folk art.假如你是韩梅，远在美国的笔友假如你是韩梅，远在美国的笔友Linda给你写信了！信给你写信了！信中，中，Linda向你了解中国有什么著名小吃。请根据表格提向你了解中国有什么著名小吃。请根据表格提示给示给Linda回信。回信。民间小吃民间小吃 糖葫芦糖葫芦 原料原料山楂山楂(hawthorn)，有些地方的糖葫芦用，有些地方的糖葫芦用草草莓（莓（strawberry)、葡萄、葡萄（grape)、甚、甚至小苹果等制成至小苹果等制成历史渊源历史渊源据说，宋代据说，宋代(the Song Dynasty)一一位皇位皇
26、帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫芦治好了病，帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫芦治好了病，因此流传因此流传 下来下来 象征象征幸福和团圆幸福和团圆Dear Linda，You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country.Well,_ _ _ _ Are you looking forward to eating it?Come to my country,and Ill treat you to tanghulu.Yours,Han Mei 要求：要求：1.1.短文应包含表格中的内容，但是不能逐条翻译短文应包含表格中的内容，但是不能逐条翻译,可可适当增加适当
27、增加 细节，以使短文连贯、自然细节，以使短文连贯、自然；2.2.词数词数8080左右。（文章左右。（文章开开头和结尾已经给出头和结尾已经给出，不计不计入入总词数总词数）这是一篇表格提示作文，时态以一般现在时和一这是一篇表格提示作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，描述冰糖葫芦会用到被动语态结般过去时为主，描述冰糖葫芦会用到被动语态结构。根据提示可考虑采用下面的模板。构。根据提示可考虑采用下面的模板。著名小吃著名小吃概括介绍概括介绍具体描述具体描述总结评价总结评价It was so delicious and healthy thatIt is now seen as the bright s
28、ymbols ofOne of the most famous snacks isEach different part of China hasIt is usually made ofBut there are more materialsIt is said thatDear Linda,You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country.Well,in my country,one of the most famous snacks is tanghulu.Each different part of China has d
29、ifferent tanghulu.It is usually made of hawthorns,which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar.But there are more materials for tanghulu today in some places,such as strawberries,grapes，and even little apples.范文范文 It is said that tanghulu ever saved the life of an emperors wife in th
30、e Song Dynasty.It was so delicious and healthy that many Chinese people like eating it.It is now seen as the bright symbols of happiness and reunion.Are you looking forward to eating it?Come to my country,and Ill treat you to tanghulu.Yours,Han Mei Well,in my country,one of the most famous snacks is
31、 tanghulu.开门见山，直接入题，向朋友介绍中国的著名小吃。开门见山，直接入题，向朋友介绍中国的著名小吃。Each different part of China has different tanghulu.两个两个different使用准确，为下文介绍不同种类糖葫芦做铺垫。使用准确，为下文介绍不同种类糖葫芦做铺垫。It is said that 用用It is said that 句型介绍小吃的历史渊源，句型介绍小吃的历史渊源，增加了浓浓的传奇色彩。增加了浓浓的传奇色彩。It is now seen as the bright symbols of happiness and reu
32、nion.语言精练，点出了小吃的文化内涵。语言精练，点出了小吃的文化内涵。【创新写作创新写作】山东潍坊以风筝闻名于世。假如你叫王静山东潍坊以风筝闻名于世。假如你叫王静,是山东潍坊人是山东潍坊人,请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下潍坊风筝。请根据提示写一篇短文介绍一下潍坊风筝。提示提示:1.山东潍坊因风筝闻名于世山东潍坊因风筝闻名于世,它被全世界的人所熟知。它被全世界的人所熟知。2.潍坊有各种各样的风筝潍坊有各种各样的风筝,有的像鸟有的像鸟,有的像龙有的像龙,有的像有的像人。人。3.风筝由竹子、纸或丝绸制成。制造者主要是农民。风筝由竹子、纸或丝绸制成。制造者主要是农民。4.潍坊国际风筝节在每年的四月份
33、举行。潍坊国际风筝节在每年的四月份举行。要求要求:1.不要逐字逐句翻译不要逐字逐句翻译,逻辑要合理通顺逻辑要合理通顺;2.可适当发挥可适当发挥;3.词数为词数为80100个。个。【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:说明文。说明文。(2)人称人称:第三人称。第三人称。(3)时态时态:一般现在时。一般现在时。【写作模板写作模板】【参考范文参考范文】I am a girl.I come from Weifang,Shandong Province.Weifang is famous for its kites.It is known all over the world.There are all
34、kinds of kites in Weifang.Some are like birds;some are like dragons;some are like persons.They are made of bamboo,paper or silk.They are often made by farmers.The Weifang International Kite Festival is held in April every year.The kites in our hometown are very beautiful and they can fly very high.I
35、 hope that they can become better and better and bring people more happiness.英语课上，你班的各个学习小组对中国的一种传统艺术形式英语课上，你班的各个学习小组对中国的一种传统艺术形式 中国中国结结(Chinese knots)(Chinese knots)进行了交流，老师要求每个小组选出一名代表来发言，介绍进行了交流，老师要求每个小组选出一名代表来发言，介绍中国结。你是你们小组的发言人，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇发言稿。中国结。你是你们小组的发言人，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇发言稿。要求提示：要求提示：1.著名且历史悠
36、久；著名且历史悠久；2.由一根绳或线编成的；由一根绳或线编成的；3.根据特定的外形和意义来命名；根据特定的外形和意义来命名；4.过去用来记录事件，现在把它当做装饰物；过去用来记录事件，现在把它当做装饰物；5.是幸福和好运的象征。是幸福和好运的象征。参考词汇：参考词汇：1.famous 2.a single rope or thread(线线)3.specific form(特定外形特定外形)4.decoration(装饰物装饰物)5.symbol 6.gift写作要求：写作要求：1.可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行 文连贯；文连贯；(参考词汇仅供参考参考词汇仅供参考
37、)2.使用本单元所学的语法使用本单元所学的语法 一般一般 现在时的被动语态；现在时的被动语态；3.语句通顺，语法正确，语句通顺，语法正确，80词左词左 右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Making Chinese knots is a traditional art form of China.Its famous in China and has a long history.Every knot is made with a single rope or thread.Every knot is named by its specific form and me
38、aning.In the past,people used it to record events.But now its mainly used as a decoration.The Chinese knot is usually red.In China its seen as a symbol of happiness and good luck.We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it in our houses.It has become popular in China and around the world.七、作文（共1小
39、题；共25分）41.手机是现代人必备的通讯工具之一。它不仅可以用来打电话，还可以用来做很多其他事情。例如：听歌、玩游戏、上网聊天、发邮件、看电影等。它一般是用塑料（plastic）和金属（metal）制造的。请根据以上提示写一篇短文，介绍一下手机。词数80个左右。【参考范文】Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our life.Nearly everyone has his or her own mobile phone except some children or very old people.They are no
40、t only used for making a phone,but also for doing many things,such as listening to music,playing computer games,chatting online,sending emails and watching movies.They are usually made of plastic and metal.I think mobile phones will be better and better and bring us more happiness.“三步法三步法”介绍你所介绍你所喜欢
41、的物品的文章喜欢的物品的文章一、首先介绍喜欢的 物品是什么二、然后具体介绍此 物品的相关信息 (如：材料、产地 等)三、总结收尾 大家都有自己喜欢的东西。请根据以下提示，介绍一下你所喜欢的物品。词数不少于80。内容须包括：1物品的制成材料、产地等相关信息；2如何得到的这个物品；3._单元一法练写作返回 I have a lovely doll.Its a toy girl.The toy girl has two big blue eyes with curly yellow hair and wears a white skirt.The doll is made of cotton.So
42、it feels very soft.And it is made in Hangzhou.My mother bought it for me on my eighth birthday.I often go to sleep with it.I regard it as my best friend.I think its the best gift.I like the doll very much and Ill keep it forever.范文范文:本文很好地运用了“三步法”介绍自己所喜欢的物品。文章先总体介绍了自己所喜欢的物品是a lovely doll，然后描述了她的外貌及材
43、质、产地等信息，最后总结全文，抒发感情。本文的添彩点:with“拥有”，用于描述事物所具有的性质，运用准确恰当。be made of“由制成”和 be made in“在生产”，分别用于表述物品材质和产地。名师点评：.书面表达。(10分)在英语论坛上，大家都在讨论电脑对我们生活的影响，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，表述一下你的想法。提示：1.电脑是最重要的发明之一，其应用越来越广泛；2.电脑有利也有弊；3.人们应该正确使用电脑。要求：条理清晰,语法正确，符合逻辑，不要逐词翻译。One possible version：The computer is one of the most
44、important inventions.It has greatly changed peoples lives.We use the computer in schools,families,shops and offices.With the help of the computer,our lives become more easy.But the computer also has disadvantages and it has caused some social problems.Many children like playing computer games so muc
45、h that they cant get away from them.Thieves can steal money on the Web easily.I think we should use the computer wisely and make it serve us better.二、篇韋训练 随着中国经济的腾飞，越来越多的中国人意识到保护非物质文化遗产的重要性。请你以“Chinese Xuan Paper”为题，写一篇120词左右的英语文章，介绍中国宣纸.。参考词汇：稻草 rice straw;书画 calligraphy and painting;文人墨客 poets and
46、 writers;气 味 smell；青檀 qingtan；工序 procedure place 泾县，安徽 Materials used 竹子，青檀，稻草 How to make 手工制作，十八道工序，约一年时间 Be used for 最好的书画用纸 Features 植物的气味，深受文人墨客喜爱，久存不坏，越久越贵 More informatio 盛于唐朝 One possible version：Chinese Xuan Paper has a history over 1,000 years old.It became popular from Tang Dynasty.The be
47、st Chinese Xuan Paper is produced in Jing county,Anhui.It is made from bamboo,qingtan,rice straw and so on.It is the reason why people can smell pleasant smell of plants when using it.However,making Xuan Paper is not an easy job.It cant be made by machines but by handsonly.Besides,it needs 18 proced
48、ures to make a perfect piece of Xuan Paper.So its very common to take about one year to complete everything.Xuan Paper is the best paper for calligraphy and paintings so it is always loved by poets and writers both in the past and now.Whats more,the calligraphy and paintings on Xuan Paper can be kept and remained for many thousand years but never be destroyed when time goes by.In a word,Chinese Xuan Paper is thought to be one of the greatest treasures in China.And Chinese Xuan Paper also shows the love that all Chinese people have for life and beauty.
