1、.1书书 面面 表表 达达.2“考试大纲考试大纲”对写作的要求明确规定对写作的要求明确规定要求考生要求考生根据提示根据提示进行书面表达。考生进行书面表达。考生应能：应能：（1 1）（2 2）在一定的在一定的语境语境中中,准确准确使用使用 语法语法 和和词汇词汇；使用一定的使用一定的句型句型、词汇词汇，清楚、连贯清楚、连贯地地表达自己的意思表达自己的意思。.3书面表达答题步骤书面表达答题步骤?认真审题，明确要求；认真审题，明确要求；-列提纲列提纲分析要点，遣词造句；分析要点，遣词造句；-翻译造句翻译造句扩展成文，认真检查。扩展成文，认真检查。-过渡词过渡词（注意时态、人称等）（注意时态、人称等）
2、Tips.4一、一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;1 1句子结构错误句子结构错误 双谓语现象双谓语现象 句子结构混乱句子结构混乱 2 2动词使用错误动词使用错误 时态错误时态错误 语态错误语态错误 滥用滥用bebe动词动词 3 3名词单复数错误名词单复数错误 4.4.不规则动词及常用词拼写错误不规则动词及常用词拼写错误 5.5.汉语式英语汉语式英语三、词义模糊，用词不够准三、词义模糊，用词不够准;四、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接四、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接.尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误尽量
3、避免下列书面表达常犯错误Tips.51.卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写漂亮书写漂亮；2.用词造句，扬长避短；用词造句，扬长避短；3.要点写全要点写全,亮点突出；亮点突出；4.结构完整，脉络清晰结构完整，脉络清晰 作文阅卷时间紧，且采用作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的段之间运用恰当的过渡词过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的，以吸引阅
4、卷老师的“眼球眼球”。英语作文如何得高分英语作文如何得高分？切实加强对写作的总结，积累一些非常切实加强对写作的总结，积累一些非常地道、非常具有表现力的优美的词组和句型地道、非常具有表现力的优美的词组和句型并有意识地用于自己的习作中。并有意识地用于自己的习作中。Tips.6列举要点常用词列举要点常用词:first(ly),second,third,finally,last but not least,in the first place,first of all,to start with,for one thing,for another增加论点增加论点:whats more,furtherm
5、ore,also,in addition to this/that,additionally,besides,apart from this/that,not to mention the fact that(as well as)常用过渡词常用过渡词.7陈述相对或相反观点陈述相对或相反观点:However,On the other hand,But,Nevertheless,Despite,In spite of,Regardless of,其它过渡词其它过渡词:In other words,Thanks to,Owing to,Due to,As/So long as,On conditi
6、on that,As a result,Therefore,Consequently,Surely,Without any doubt,As is known to all,To tell the truth,To be honest,Honestly speaking,To speak frankly,Importantly,In terms of sth.总结语总结语:Above all,In conclusion,In short,In a word,In my opinion,Personally,.8半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型 In my opinion
7、,Personally,（only in this way can we）Taking everything into account,I thinkAs is previously stated,In conclusion,On the whole,In a word,As far as I am concerned,Im of the opinion that All things considered,.9高考英语书面表达高考英语书面表达之之话题话题训练训练.10 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有
8、不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示，以法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自为题写一篇短文，并发表你自己的观点。己的观点。.11 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编报社编辑写一封信辑写一封信发表观点。发表观点。.12 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文的短文,介绍人们的观点介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的并表达自己的看法看法.(2005年江西高考年江西高考).13 假如你是李华假
9、如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生是某农村中学的学生.你校打算在教室里安装空调你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论让学生讨论.请请根据下表中讨论的结果根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿给校英语报刊投稿,并表明你的观点并表明你的观点.14一一.书面表达书面表达 (满分满分30分分)三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论.讨论的题目是讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童开始学习英语要不要从儿童开始?请你根请你根据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下讨论介绍一下讨论的情况的情况.15Para 1Para 2Para 3Para 4O
10、pinions/adviceAdvantages/approvalDisadvantages/objection General introduction.16很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看法。请宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示根据下面表格提示,以以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文为题写一篇短文,并发表你自己的观点。并发表你自己的观点。_.17General introductionPara.1.18AdvantagesPara.2.19DisadvantagesOn the other
11、 hand They think the students arent accustomed to the food offered by the homestay family.And the cost of living is higher.Para.3 Whats worse,there will be some limits to their life.20Opinions or advice In my opinion,it is good for the students to study abroad.While studying abroad,they can broaden
12、their knowledge.So I hope there are more and more students studying abroad.Para.4.21They think the students arent accustomed to the food offered by the homestay family.And the cost of living is higher.Whats worse,there will be some limits to their life.Studying abroad has been popular in recent year
13、s.But people have different opinions.Some people think that students should study abroad if possible.Tostartwith,it is good for their English improvement,especially they can become fluent in spoken English.In addition,they will have a better understanding of cultures and customs of the country.Final
14、ly,they dont worry about their food and housing.In my opinion,it is good for the students to study abroad.While studying abroad,they can broaden their knowledge.So I hope there are more and more students studying abroad.22Studying Abroad_.23 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑你根据下列表格所给信息给
15、报社编辑写一封信发表观点。写一封信发表观点。.24 Nowadays in our city,more and more people own cars.I think there are good reasons for owning a car.First,with a car a person can get around freely,without spending a lot of time.Second,a car is comfortable to travel in.Finally,it is safe to drive a car than cycle.However I
16、am afraid more and more cars will cause air pollution.What is worse,more traffic jams and accidents are happening every day.Personally,I hope the government should control the number of the cars to let us have a clean,quiet environment.25 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上
17、交友的短文的短文,介绍人们的观点介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的并表达自己的看法看法.(2005年江西高考年江西高考).26 假如你是李华假如你是李华,是某农村中是某农村中学的学生学的学生.你校打算在教室里安装空调你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学让学生讨论生讨论.请根据下表中讨论的结果请根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语给校英语报刊投稿报刊投稿,并表明你的观点并表明你的观点.Homework_.27一一.书面表达书面表达 (满分满分30分分)三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论.讨论的题目是讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童开始学习英语要不要从儿童开始?请你根请你
18、根据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下讨论介绍一下讨论的情况的情况.28注意注意:1.文章的起始句已给出文章的起始句已给出 2.词数词数:120左右左右(不包括已给出不包括已给出 的起始句的起始句);3.参考词汇参考词汇:基础基础 foundation 汉语拼音汉语拼音 Chinese pinyin The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood.29 Some of them thin
19、k that English learning should start from childhood.First,little boys and girls have a very good memory,and they can learn a lot of English words by heart.Whats more,this will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning.But some other students dont agree.They dont think that E
20、nglish learning should start from childhood.To begin with,young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school.Next,If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time,it will be very easy for them to mix them up.In addition,this will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but al
21、so to their future English learning.In short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.30书面表达练习书面表达练习 作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。明你的观点。_Practice.31.32 We middle s
22、chool students have many tests or exams.We have both achieved success and suffered from failure.Different students take different attitudes towards failure.Some fall in low spirits when they dont do well in the exams.They often lose heart and no longer study as hard as before.But most students take
23、an active attitudes towards failure.Practice.33They encourage themselves to be self-confident.They find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.I agree with those with active attitudes.As we all know,failure is the mother of success.Even great men may have failed
24、 many times before they succeeded.So we must deal with our failure correctly.Practice.34The peoples livelihood.35Writing making 人们一直面临着上学难、看病难、买房难的问人们一直面临着上学难、看病难、买房难的问题。如：大部分人都负债买房。题。如：大部分人都负债买房。今年政府将更加重视民生。教育、医疗、住房，今年政府将更加重视民生。教育、医疗、住房，就业等状况将会得到改善。如：就业等状况将会得到改善。如：义务教育免费、减义务教育免费、减轻农民负担、控制房价、扩大就业等轻农
25、民负担、控制房价、扩大就业等,让人民群众让人民群众持续地得到实惠。请根据以上所述写篇短文，并简持续地得到实惠。请根据以上所述写篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。要发表自己的感想。1.词数：词数：120左右。左右。2.参考词汇：民生参考词汇：民生 the peoples livelihood 义务义务教育教育compulsory education_.36One possible version Nowadays,most people can not afford to buy a house,to go to school or to see a doctor.As we all know,mo
26、st people are in debt for a house.This year,the government are paying much more attention to the peoples livelihood.A lot of measures will be taken to improve it.The conditions of education,medical services,housing and employment will be greatly improved.For example,the government will provide free
27、compulsory education.Also,the farmers burden is surely going to be lightened.In addition to this,the prices of the houses are to be controlled.Moreover,the government will create many more chances for jobs.As is previously stated,we can see that China is getting richer and stronger,and peoples life
28、will be getting better and better.Personally,I think we should study harder to make contributions to our country.37 Nowadays,most people can not afford to buy a house,to go to school or to see a doctor.As we all know,most people are in debt for a house.This year,the government are paying much more a
29、ttention to the peoples livelihood.A lot of measures will be taken to improve it.The conditions of education,medical services,housing and employment will be greatly improved.For example,the government will provide free compulsory education.Also,the farmers burden is surely going to be lightened.In a
30、ddition to this,the prices of the houses are to be controlled.Moreover,the government will create many more chances for jobs.As is previously stated,we can see that China is getting richer and stronger,and peoples life will be getting better and better.Personally,I think we should study harder to ma
31、ke contributions to our country.过渡词过渡词.38 目前，目前，民生民生问题受到空前关注。为保障民生，改善民生，问题受到空前关注。为保障民生，改善民生，政府将采取一系列措施。政府将采取一系列措施。请根据下面漫画写一篇短文，并简要发请根据下面漫画写一篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。表自己的感想。注意注意:1.恰当表达图画含义恰当表达图画含义,要有适当发挥要有适当发挥.2.词数：词数：120左右；左右；参考词汇：参考词汇：保障保障ensure vt 完善完善 perfect vt 养老金养老金 pension n 医保医保 Medicare n.39如何看图写作如何看
32、图写作？仔细看图仔细看图 列出要点；列出要点；选准词句恰当表达；选准词句恰当表达；紧扣主题适当发挥。紧扣主题适当发挥。连句成篇认真检查连句成篇认真检查（理解图画所表达的含义）（理解图画所表达的含义）.40Pair work Work in pairs and each pair must make one or two sentences according to the picture.1 2 3 4.41One possible sentenceThe government will provide pension,Medicare and training for jobs.42Poss
33、ible sentencesTo peoples delight,various laws are to be perfected.Some legal service centers will be set up to protect peoples rights.43One possible sentenceTo make sure that people can live safely and peacefully,the government will make great efforts.44One possible sentenceThe government will try i
34、ts best to stop water and air pollution,so people can enjoy clean water and fresh air.45Never before has the peoples livelihood been cared about as it is today.To ensure and improve the peoples livelihood,the government is taking a series of measures.As is shown in the pictures,the government will p
35、rovide pension,Medicare and training for jobs.To peoples delight,various laws are to be perfected.Moreover,some legal service centers will be set up to protect peoples rights.Whats more,to make sure that people can live safely and peacefully,the government will make great efforts.By the way,the gove
36、rnment will try its best to stop water and air pollution,so people can enjoy clean water and fresh air.Personally the people in our country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively.One possible version.46Summary 根据根据“考试大纲考试大纲”对写作的要求，积累并灵活对写作的要求，积累并灵活运用运用词汇
37、、语法、句型、过渡词词汇、语法、句型、过渡词等。构建等。构建提纲提纲式、图画式、图表式式、图画式、图表式写作体系。写作体系。2.2.关注话题写作。关注话题写作。高考英语写作热门话题高考英语写作热门话题之之词汇词汇猜想猜想（100100练）练）高考英语写作热门话题高考英语写作热门话题之之句型句型训练训练(50句句)高考英语热门话题高考英语热门话题之之书面表达书面表达猜想猜想 3.平时（读报）注意用英语思维一些平时（读报）注意用英语思维一些热点话题热点话题。.47第一节第一节 网络时代网络时代话题话题1 1 高三学生能不能上网高三学生能不能上网话题话题2 2 网上购书网上购书话题话题3 3 你同意
38、学生网上交友吗你同意学生网上交友吗第二节第二节 和谐社会与节约型社会和谐社会与节约型社会话题话题1 1 节约节约从身边做起从身边做起第三节第三节 父母与孩子之间父母与孩子之间话题话题1 敬重父母敬重父母话题话题2 父母陪读父母陪读 其它预测话题其它预测话题.48第四节第四节 健康生活健康生活 话题话题1 1 早餐的重要性早餐的重要性 话题话题2 2 快餐为何在国内受欢迎快餐为何在国内受欢迎 话题话题3 3 体育锻炼的重要性体育锻炼的重要性 话题话题4 4 健康掌握在自己手中健康掌握在自己手中第五节第五节 中学生学习与生活中学生学习与生活 话题话题1 1 中学生带手机上学的利与弊中学生带手机上学
39、的利与弊 话题话题2 2 中学生对考试失败持什么态度中学生对考试失败持什么态度 话题话题3 3 中学生最想说的话中学生最想说的话 话题话题4 4 中学生追随时尚的问题中学生追随时尚的问题.49第六节第六节 变化与发展变化与发展话题话题1 1 农民生活发生的变化农民生活发生的变化话题话题2 2 关于家庭拥有私人汽车的观点与看法关于家庭拥有私人汽车的观点与看法话题话题3 3 电脑进入家庭电脑进入家庭第七节第七节 旅游旅游 话题话题1 对生态游的看法对生态游的看法 话题话题2 旅游广告旅游广告 话题话题3“五一五一”旅游建议旅游建议 话题话题4 度假方式的变化及原因度假方式的变化及原因.50第八节第
40、八节 电视、电影与广告电视、电影与广告话题话题1 关于看电视的利与弊关于看电视的利与弊话题话题2 广告的利与弊广告的利与弊第九节第九节 环境保护环境保护 话题话题1 呼吁全社会保护环境呼吁全社会保护环境 话题话题2 保护湿地保护湿地 话题话题3 创建创建“绿色家园绿色家园”.51第十节第十节 社会生活社会生活 话题1 民生 话题话题2 2 生活的小事情生活的小事情大道理大道理 话题话题3 3 追随时尚追随时尚 话题话题4 4 城市是否可以饲养宠物城市是否可以饲养宠物 话题话题5 5 文明礼貌文明礼貌 话题话题6 6 全社会学英语热潮问题全社会学英语热潮问题 话题话题7 7 志愿者活动志愿者活动 话题话题8 8.52Home work 2 Finish Writing 21 Exchange your paper and check Writing 1 after class.53
