1、英 文 写 作 范 文 范文讲评：旅行 要求 暑假就要到了，许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。的确，旅游对一个人的身心健康颇有好处。那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇旅游的文章。 Travel is a very good means of broadening a person s perspective. Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and
2、disadvantages. 范文 Travel Travel is a very good means of broadening a person s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures， meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much， you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences， b
3、ut also be aware of the vastness of nature. Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience， which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good mem
4、ories. Later， you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences， thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind. The field s his study， nature was his book. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most e
5、xpensive. Buses and trains are less expensive， but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle， which， although slow， can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature. 评语 本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼
6、界的原因，接着指出为什么旅游 能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情，最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明，主题突出。“ come into contact with?”，“ enrich you knowledge and experiences”，“ be aware of the vastness of nature”，“ disperse your boredom”，“ broaden your mind”等词语的恰当搭配，生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。 范文讲评：旅游事业 要求：旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。 请以 Ways to Improve China s
7、 Tourism 为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。（提示：扩大宣传，改善旅游设施，提高服务质量?） 范文 Ways to Improve china s tourism Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done， Chinas tourism will definitely be improved. First， our places
8、of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second， facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally， the quality of service should be improved. Don t tell people their ideas are bad unless you ve got a good one. 评语 本文第一段提出问题，
9、第二段解决问题，“ first”，“ second”，“ finally”等词的使用，使整篇文章条理格外清晰。 范文讲评：如何利用空余时间 要求 题目：你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。现在需要写出一份简要的底稿，底稿应包含以下基本要点。 随着工作时间的缩 短，空余时间越来越多了。 如何利用空余时间。 利用空余时间的益处。 题目自拟。 范文 Use of Free Time Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment， but it would be hard to find such people in contemp
10、orary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer， and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping， what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school？ Use of free time often discloses much about one s tastes， values， inter
11、ests and personality. What may be one man s leisure， however， might be another man s work. In leisure hours， some may turn to the humanities： literature， magic， art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports，politics， voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still o
12、thers like parties， travelling， or just loafing. Obviously， the use of free time is a good means of relaxation， but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well
13、. So the good use of free time will make life rich， colorful and rewarding. 评语 这篇文章写得很有水平。说理深入浅出，语言丰富晓畅，例证详实，句式灵活多变，使得文章生动并吸引人。开篇用问句，引出下文；结尾点题，总结全文。并且很有文学性。 范文：大型企业和小型企业 Large Companies and Small Companies Directions： Write a composition on the topic Large Companies and Small Companies in thirty min
14、utes. You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline （ given in Chinese） below. 1.大学毕业后有的人希望在大公司工作。 2.有的人则认为在小公司工作 更能锻炼人。 3.我的看法。 参考范文： Large Companies and Small Companies Upon graduation from college， young men and women face the first choice in their career life：
15、to go to a large company or a small one？ Although many graduates are attracted by the prestige of large companies， I believe the small one will afford more chances of success and more opportunities to develop your ability. There are two basic differences between the large and small enterprises. Firs
16、t， working in the small company you operate primarily through personal contacts； you have more chance to develop your communication ability and the ability to handle various kinds of personalities. In contrast， in the large company there are established policies and fairly rigid procedures. Even the
17、 man at the top is only a cog in a big machine： you needn t make any decision and can t see the effect of your work? Second， in a small business you are normally exposed to all kinds of experiences and expected to do a great many things without too much help or guidance. Thus， you may acquire much m
18、ore skills and experience， and develop the ability to handle different， complicated things. But in the large corporation， since you are normally taught one thing and limited to one procedure， you may become the man who knows more and more about less and less. Obviously if you want to gain more exper
19、ience and ability needed in business organizations and to become an excellent manager or executive in your future career， working in a small company is your best choice. 范文：名人隐私 Privacy of Famous People Directions： you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay no less than 120 words on the following
20、topic. Newspapers and magazines have special interest in the private lives of famous people. What can you explain it？ What effect it will have on the people being exposed？ And what is your opinion of it？ 范文： Privacy of Famous People In recent years， many newspapers and magazines focus on the activit
21、ies of film stars， pop singers and some other famous men and women. Reporters disguise their identities， infiltrate the subject s business and family， or even bug and wiretap them to get the news by whatever means are necessary. It is not difficult to explain the reason for their surprising amount o
22、f interest in famous people s lives. They are in the spotlight， renowned or notorious， they are the topic of ordinary people who like to know everything about them. To satisfy their curiosity， or “ the people s right to know”， journalists often find it their duty to report their activities. More ove
23、r， what matters to a newspaper or a magazine is the number of readers. A large readership means the rise in the circulation of their publications，hence a huge profit. Since film stars and pop singers are newsworthy figures， and their stories draws far more attention than those of other people， it is
24、 natural that the press tries to attract them to buy their magazines by featuring private lives of famous people. How ever， those exposed people can be severely injured by such press attention. Sensational stories about their private lives cause great unhappiness to them. To escape reporters， they can t even lead a normal l
