1、高中英语选择性必修二 Unit 1 单元写作指导与演练本单元的中心话题是“有成就的人”。通过单元内容，我们需要熟悉人物介绍类记叙文的特征及要点，学会描述人物，学会运用介绍人物品质和个性的形容词，并能灵活运用非限制性定语从句已完成本单元的写作人物。人物介绍一般采用“总分总”的形式。第一段开门见山，简要介绍人物身份及其成就；第二段介绍人物主要经历；第三段总结全文，达到首尾呼应，画龙点睛之效。【可借鉴词汇或表达】1.外貌：good-looking; ordinary-looking; odd-looking;2.品质或个性：committed; determined, considerate, op
2、timistic, easy-going, warm-hearted; hard-working; responsible; patient; generous;3.爱好：have a great gift/talent for/be gifted/talented in; be keen on; be crazy about;4.教育：graduated form; earned a(an)degree; major in; go abroad for further study/to further ones study5.经历或成就：devote oneself to; commit o
3、neself to; make up ones mind/determine to do sth.; overcome many difficulties; spare no efforts to do/make every effort/make great efforts to do sth.; enjoy widespread popularity win fame; make great contributions to6.其他：be born in/into; set a good example; be the pride of.,; be considered/recognize
4、d/seen/acknowledged as; be honored as;【词汇积累】一、外貌（appearance/look）1.good-looking相貌英俊的2.funning-looking外表可笑的3.ugly-looking丑陋的4.ordinary-looking外貌平平的5.white-haired白头发的6.near/far-sighted近/远视的7.charming有魅力的8.fashionable时尚的9.slim苗条的10.fat胖的11.lovely可爱的二、性格气质（character）12.kind-hearted好心的13.warm-hearted热心的1
5、4.absent-minded心不在焉的15.bad-tempered坏脾气的16.a strong will很强的意志力17.naughty淘气的18.smart/bright聪明的19.wise睿智的20.hard-working/diligent勤奋的21.humorous幽默的三、生日、出生地(birth/age)22., (who was) born in , is a四、家庭背景（family background）23. was born in/ into a poor/rich family出生在贫穷的/富裕的家庭24.as a child of years old, he还是
6、个岁的孩子时25.his/ her father was very strict with him 父亲对他/她严格要求26.spend his childhood in 在度过了他的童年27.live a happy/hard life生活很幸福/艰苦五、教育背景（schooling / education background）28.be admitted to university考取大学29.graduate from department of university从某大学某系毕业30.receive/get a doctors degree获取博士学位31.go abroad fo
7、r further studies出国深造32.When at college, he majored in French/he was a French major.读大学时他主修法语六、主要事迹（main event）33.serve as / work as / act as做工作34.devote oneself /ones effort/ones life to; be devoted to致力于35.make up ones mind to do/be determined to do决心做36.have a gift/talent for / be gifted/talented
8、 in有的天赋七、成就(achievement)37.excellent /outstanding /remarkable出色的38.succeed in sth./ doing sth.成功做39.be good at/ do well in擅长40.famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外著名的41.make great/rapid progress in在取得很大/快速进步42.overcome many difficulties/go through hardship克服困难43.set a good example to为树立好榜样44.spea
9、k highly of 高度赞扬45.be honoured as被授予46.be remembered as 被铭记为47.win the prize获得奖项48.win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal 获得金/银/铜牌49.make great contributions to为作出巨大贡献50.He is the pride of China.他是中国的骄傲。【句式积累】（一）描述外形（1）She keeps her figure beautiful.她身材保持得很好。（2）She is about 160 centimeters tall.她身高1
10、60厘米。（3）With a pair of glasses, her face looks like a cartoon charactervery lovely and humorous.她戴了副眼镜，那张脸看上去就像一个卡通人物很可爱、很幽默。（4）She always wears her long hair in braids, looking as simple as a primary school girl, pure and fresh.她留着长发，扎着辫子，看上去就像一个小学生，很清纯。（5）She is well dressed and looks very fashion
11、able.她衣着讲究，打扮入时。（6）Her frequent smile impresses me a lot.她总是面带微笑，这给我留下了很深刻的印象。（7）She looks kind and always smiles to anyone.她看上去很善良，对任何人都是面带微笑。（8）He is the same age as you but looks much older.他和你同龄，但看上去比你的年龄大多了。（9）He is over forty, but he doesnt look his age.他已经四十多岁了，但看不出是这个年纪的人。（10）I notice that s
12、he has some gray hairs.我注意到她已经有了一些白发。（二）描述性格（1）He treats the old kindly as if they were his own parents.他善待老人，似乎他们都是他的父母。（2）She behaves herself.她守规矩，懂礼貌。（3）He is fairly out-going.Talking with him is a pleasant thing.他很外向，与他交谈是一件很愉快的事。（4）She is fairly thoughtful and easy-going.她很有思想，待人随和。（5）His gentl
13、e manner, his eloquence in conversation, and his ability to make all the people feel at home surprised me very much.他温文尔雅的举止，口若悬河的谈吐，以及那种令人宾至如归的能力令我大为惊叹。（6）He enjoys the company of children and shares various interests with the children.It seems he never grows up.他喜欢与孩子们为伍，与孩子们趣味相投。似乎他永远也长不大。（三）描述成就
14、（1）He has won the prize for 他获得了奖。（2）He was awarded the prize for 他被授予/获奖。（3）He has successfully achieved/fulfilled 他成功地实现了（4）His invention/achievement ranks one of the top 他的发明/成就排名在前名。（5）He has mainly contributed to 他对做出了重要的贡献。（四）描述印象（1）He is the only child, but he is not spoilt.他是一个独生子，但他没有被宠坏。（2
15、）He is a handsome boy with strong determination.他是一个英俊果断的孩子。（3）He is the best teacher I have known so far.他是至今为止我所知道的最好的老师。（4）His appearance, way of life and special qualities will remain in my memory.他的外表、他的生活方式以及他的一些特别的品质将永远留在我的记忆里。（5）She likes to talk about people behind their backs.她喜欢在背后说别人的坏话。
16、（6）He gives us the impression of always being too busy to talk.他给我们的印象是他总是那么忙，连说话的时间都没有。（7）He is our friend as well as our teacher.他是我们的老师，也是我们的朋友。（8）He is strict with his students and in his work.他严格要求学生，工作也很严谨。（9）He can be trusted and relied on.他是可以信任和依靠的人。（10）The best thing about her is her sense
17、 of humor.她最突出的就是她的幽默感。【谚语积累】Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人。Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事，只要肯登攀。Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。Remember: Keep
18、smile on your face.记住：面带微笑。Good mind,good find.好心有好报。You cant judge a book by its cover.人不可貌相。Nothing to be got without pains but poverty.一份耕耘，一份收获。No sweat,no sweet.一分耕耘,一分收获。No one (or man) is born wise or learned.人非生而知之者。【万能写作模板】模板_（人名）, born in _（地点）, is recognized as one of the most outstanding
19、 scientists in the world today.As a boy, he is considered to be unwise.As a matter of fact, he is a man full of imagination.He is popular with people of all ages.I admire him because he has made great contributions to _（领域）.It is his contribution that makes _ possible for us to _（实现）; I admire him b
20、ecause he _（原因）.What impresses me most is that _（名言）, I cant be a/an _（名人名字）, but I can _.From him I have learnt that _（道理）.百度百科打算创建英文版的百度人物词条,请你结合以下信息,为袁隆平编写词条。姓名:表隆平爱好:听音乐,游泳职业:科学家生活态度:生活简朴,淡泊名利出生:1930年,北京毕业院校:西南农学院(现西南大学)成就：(1)提高水稻产量,消除世界饥饿(2)杂交水稻之父注意：1.词数100左右;2.适当表达个人看法。参考词汇:西南农学院Southwest Agri
21、cultural College;杂交水稻之父Father of Hybrid Rice【审题思路】明确写作要点,分三段写作:袁隆平生平袁隆平的生活和爱好袁隆平的贡献。【佳作欣赏1】Yuan Longping is a great scientist who is devoted to agriculture.Born in 1930, Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College.After graduation, finding ways to grow more productive rice has been his life g
22、oal.Thanks to his research in hybrid rice, we have more tools to increase the rice output and rid the world of hunger, for which he is honoured as Father of Hybrid Rice.Yuan Longping lives a simple life and he cares little about money or being famous.As for hobbies, he enjoys swimming as well as lis
23、tening to music.Yuan Longping has made great contributions not only to China, but also to the whole world.Therefore, in my eyes, he is more of a scientist; he is a pioneer for all people.【亮点词汇】1.大量短语的正确使用为文章增色不少。如:bedevoted to, graduate from, thanks to, be honoured as, live a.life, as for, make grea
24、t contributions to, in ones eyes等。2.定语从句、非谓语动词等的使用使文章句式丰富。3.非谓语动词(动名词)做主语的应用是文章的一大亮点。4.关联词的正确使用使文章有层次感。如:after.,not only.but also.,therefore等。【佳作欣赏2】Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”, is one of Chinas most famous scientists.Yuan Longping was born in September 1930 and died in 2021,
25、 aged 91.He cultivated the worlds first high-yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly one-fifth of the worlds population.After fighting Chinas food shortages, he turned his attention to a much bigger challenge, solving world hunger.Since the 1980s, Yuans team has offered training courses i
26、n dozens of countries in Africa, the Americas and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks of famine.Yuan Longpings legacy is not only the progress of hybrid rice-his curiosity, devotion, courage, perseverance, diligence, cooperation and selflessness have left an indelible spiritu
27、al wealth to us all.【亮点词汇】培育：cultivated breed提供：offer provide巨大的：huge enormous财富：wealth treasure【高分句型】【高分句型1】He cultivated the worlds first high-yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly one-fifth of the worlds population.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Since the 1980s, Yuans team has offered t
28、raining courses in dozens of countries in Africa, the Americas and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks of famine.（运用了现在分词作状语）（一）（2023江西校联考二模）你校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，正在面向全校学生征稿，请你以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物的简介；2.对你的影响；注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯My Role Model【思路解读】本篇书面表达属于开放性作
29、文。校英文报新增了“榜样人物”专栏，要求考生以My Role Model为题写一篇短文投稿。首段直入话题篇中介绍人物事迹-篇尾总结评价及个人感想。【满分作文】Tu Youyou, the first female Chinese scientist to receive a Nobel Prize, is the role model in my heart.After graduating from university, she acquired a broad knowledge of both Chinese and Western medicine through constant
30、learning.Determined to find a cure for malaria, she referred to numerous ancient books of traditional Chinese medicine.After working tirelessly and going through many failures, she eventually discovered artemisinin, the worlds most effective drug for fighting malaria, thus saving millions of lives a
31、ll over the world.Tu Youyous life story tells me that under no circumstances shall we acknowledge defeat and that success will belong to those who insists on trying.【亮点词汇】获得，得到：acquire obtain/gain持续不断的：constant continuous最终：eventually ultimately/finally决不：under no circumstances by no means【高分句型】高分句型
32、1 Determined to find a cure for malaria, she referred to numerous ancient books of traditional Chinese medicine.(运用了形容词作状语)高分句型2 Tu Youyous life story tells me that under no circumstances shall we acknowledge defeat and that success will belong to those who insists on trying.(运用了that引导宾语从句)（二）（2023高
33、三单元测试）假设你是李华。你们学校英语校报就外国医学家John Snow专出一期专栏，请你代表你们班给报社撰稿，内容包括：1.John Snow的医学贡献；2.John Snow的贡献对医学研究的影响；3.你如何看待John Snow的医学研究方式。注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【思路解读】本篇书面表达属于说明文。文章可分为三部分内容包括：1.John Snow的医学贡献；2.John Snow的贡献对医学研究的影响；3.你如何看待John Snow的医学研究方式。【写作步骤】人物简介-人物事迹-人物总评【满分作文】John Snow (1813-1858), a
34、 British anesthesiologist and epidemiologist, is regarded as the pioneer of anesthesia medicine and public health medicine.In 1854, cholera was prevalent in London.Snow found their common behavior pattern by studying the daily life of cholera victims and discovered the relationship between cholera a
35、nd drinking unclean water.At his appeal, the government shut down the dirty water in time and effectively stopped the epidemic of cholera.He also recommended several practical preventive measures, such as washing dirty clothes and quilts, washing hands and boiling water for drinking, with good resul
36、ts.Although John Snow did not find the pathogen that caused cholera, he creatively used spatial statistics to find the source of infection and proved the value of this method.Today, mapping has become a basic research method in medical geography and epidemiology.“Snows cholera map” has become a clas
37、sic case.【亮点词汇】被认为：be regarded asbe considered as推荐：recommendput forward造成：causegive rise to实用的：practical=utility=useful【高分句型】高分句型1 Snow found their common behavior pattern by studying the daily life of cholera victims and discovered the relationship between cholera and drinking unclean water.(运用了动名
38、词作宾语)高分句型2 Although John Snow did not find the pathogen that caused cholera, he creatively used spatial statistics to find the source of infection and proved the value of this method.(运用了although引导的让步状语从句)（一）（2023全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。注意：1.词数100左右
39、；2.题目已为你写好。【思路解读】体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。【写作步骤】人物简介人物事迹人物总评【满分作文】Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history.His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony.Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless di
40、sciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated.His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.Even today, his ideas continue
41、 to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.Confuciuss life offers valuable lessons.He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.His teachings remind us of the importance o
42、f integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.【亮点词汇】著名的：well-known famous人物：figure person强调：emphasize stress基础：foundation basis【高分句型】【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)【高分句型
43、2】He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)（二）（2020全国新课标I卷）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。【思路解读】体裁：应用文。时
44、态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and sha
45、re many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So第五步：润色修改范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：
46、My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。【满分作文】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us.They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders.As for me, my father is the person I respect most.My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He wor
