1、Section B 3a-Self check人教版 八年级上写作课Do you know these places?Do you know these places?Tiananmen Squarethe Palace Museumthe Great Wallthe Summer Palacea Beijing hutongthe old Summer Palace Have you ever traveled to Beijing?Do you know anything about in Beijing？Where do you want to go on your next vacat
2、ion?Warm up Tiananmenthe Great Wallthe Palace Museuma Beijing hutongBeijing duckthe Summer Palacetimeweatheractivitiesfoodfeelings:(description words)hot and sunny tired Beijing duck take some photosbeautiful buy something special interesting learn something important AugustGroup the words in the bo
3、x.hot and sunnyAugusttake some photos,buy something special,learn something importantBeijing duck tired,beautiful,interesting Warming upComplete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places.3a3a hot and sunny tired Beijing duck delicious take some photos beautiful buy something special intere
4、sting learn something important AugustDivide the words and phrases on the left into different ways.TimeWeatherActivitiesFoodDescription wordsAugusthot and sunny take some photosbuy something speciallearn something important Beijing duck tired delicious beautiful interesting Wednesday,_ 20th Today th
5、e weather was _.I went to _.It was _.We _.I liked this place because _.For dinner we had _.It was _.In the evening,I felt really _.Augusthot and sunnyTiananinterestingtook some photosI can learn something importantBeijing duckdelicioustiredhot and sunny tired Beijing duck delicious take some photos
6、beautiful buy something special interestinglearn something important Augustmen Square3b Answer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.1.Where did you go?5.What food did you eat?2.Did you go with anyone?6.What did you like best?3.How was the weather?7.Did you dislike anything?4.What di
7、d you do every day?8.How did you feel about the trip?Pre-writingIts your show time.dislike v.&n.不喜爱（的事物）；厌恶（的事物）=hate3bAsk and answer the questions about a vacation you took.and fill in the blanks.1.Where did you go?2.Did you go with anyone?3.How was the weather?4.What did you do every day?5.What fo
8、od did you eat?6.What did you like best?7.Did you dislike anything?8.How did you feel about the trip?Begining BodytimeEndingplace partnerweatherdislike v.&n.不喜爱（的事物）；厌恶（的事物）=hate日记的格式 日期.正文星期+逗号 月 日Monday,July 27th1.顶格2.使用一般过去时3.正文由beginning,body,ending 构成Sunny Monday,July 15thI arrived in Penang in
9、 Malaysia this morning with my family.It was sunny and hot,so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel.My sister and I tried paragliding.I felt like I was a bird.It was so exciting!For lunch,we had something very special Malaysian yellow noodles.They were delicious!In the afternoon,we rode bicyc
10、les to Georgetown.There are a lot of new buildings now,but many of the old buildings are still there.In Weld Quay,a really old place in Georgetown,we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago.I wonder what life was like here in the past.I really enjoyed walking around the town.A Diary
11、 Entry1.题材：记叙文2.格式：天气左上角日期右上角星期在前，日期在后3.时态：一般过去时Can you find out the basic points of a diary?Diary日记是属于记叙文性质的应用文，是将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要的记下来。日记可以记叙自己一天生活中做过的、看到的、遇到的、想到的和听到的事情，可以记事，可以写人，可以状物，可以写景，也可以记述活动。Pre-writingLets learn What is a diary?Wednesday,August 20thToday the weather was hot and sunny.I wen
12、t to Tiananmen.It was beautiful.We took some photos.I liked this place because I learned something important.For dinner we had Beijing duck.It was delicious.In the evening,I felt really tired.Language featuresFormat(格式)1.The first person point2.Simple past tense3.Friendly and informal language.Are y
13、ou clear?What about the content?Lets learn Then lets learn the Wednesday,August 20thToday the weather was hot and sunny.I went to Tiananmen.It was beautiful.We took some photos.I liked this place because I learned something important.For dinner we had Beijing duck.It was delicious.In the evening,I f
14、elt really tired.Content:timeweatherplace+descriptionfeeling+reasonfeelingBeginningBodyEndingactivityfood+description.What is a diary?Framework(结构)My travelBeginning Main bodyEnding timeplaceweatherfeelingspartneractivitiesWe didWe ateWe thoughtWe enjoyed.We saw/heardfeelings3w(when,where,who)+weath
15、erwhatfeelingshowHow to write an English diary?1.格式：格式：英文和中文日记的写法大致相同。一般是第一英文和中文日记的写法大致相同。一般是第一 行写上行写上日期、星期、天气日期、星期、天气状况。星期，天气状况写在状况。星期，天气状况写在 右上角右上角。表示天气情况的词一般用形容词，如：。表示天气情况的词一般用形容词，如：fine,cold,rainy,windy,cloudy,sunny,snowy,foggy 等。等。正文正文部分另起一行。部分另起一行。2.人称：人称：日记要用日记要用第一人称第一人称写。写。3.时态：时态：写日记的时间一般是在
16、下午或晚上，有时也写日记的时间一般是在下午或晚上，有时也 有在第二天补记的。所记叙的事情通常发生在过去，有在第二天补记的。所记叙的事情通常发生在过去，所以常用所以常用一般过去时态一般过去时态。4.日记的写作顺序：日记的写作顺序：日记一般按照日记一般按照时间顺序时间顺序或或 事情经过事情经过来写。语言要清楚、自然，内容要来写。语言要清楚、自然，内容要 连贯、完整。连贯、完整。Diary另起一行。正文可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。格式书端正文位置：第一行 一般写上日期、星期和天气状况。顺序：月日年表示天气情况的词一般用形容词，写在日期之后，用逗号隔开。June 18th 2020sun
17、ny,fine,rainy,windy,snowy,cloudy.顺序：星期在前，月日在后Monday,June 18th Write a travel diary._Tip1:Frame and content(结构与内容)Wednesday,August 20th I went to the Palace Museum with my family today.The weather was hot and sunny.There are a lot of old and special buildings in it.They were so beautiful that I took
18、quite a few photos.And I heard many interesting stories of old China.They helped me learn something important,such as the culture(文化),the history.When I walked around the museum,I wonder what life was like here in the past.For dinner,we had Beijing duck.Although it was very delicious,I didnt eat too
19、 much.That was because I dont want to be fat.What a wonderful day!All of us felt tired but really happy.Ending Beginning Main body Sunday,May 25thI arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents.It was sunny and warm,so we decided to go for a walk near our hotel.We saw many pretty buildings and lot
20、s of good restaurants.For lunch,we had something spicy and delicious.I love Sichuan food!In the afternoon,we went to see pandas in the zoo.Pandas are my favorite animals because theyre so cute.I was happy to know people are trying their best to save these endangered animals.In the evening,we went sh
21、opping along Chunxi Road and bought something special.I really enjoyed this trip.We all had a great time.Sample writingWhile-writing第一人称一般过去时一般现在时书端，星期月日Tips for your writingContent and frame(内容和结构内容和结构)Good sentencesGood phrasesGood wordsGood language（语言）（语言）Good handwriting（书写）（书写）Correct tense(时态
22、)Spelling words（单词拼写）Punctuations（标点符号）Correct grammar（语法）（语法）rich content andcomplete frame（内容丰富结构完整）Content and frame(内容和结构内容和结构)Good handwriting（书写）（书写）Clean and neat(干净整洁)Tips Oh,I went to Beijing.Did you do anything special in Nanjing?4.Imagine you are all of foreigners on vacation in China.You
23、 meet each other at the airport on your way home.Talk about what you did on your vacation.Hi,my names Paul.I went to Nanjing.Hi,Paul.Im Anna.Where did you go on vacation?I went to Sanya.How was the weather there?It was very hot and sunny.What did you do there?Hi,Lily,where did you go on vacation?I w
24、ent to the beach.It was very beautiful.anything everything nothing anyone everyone no one1.Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.1.A:Did _ go on vacation with you last month?B:Yes,my family went to the countryside with me.2.A:Did your family go to the beach with you last weeke
25、nd?B:No._ from my family went,but my friend went with me.3.A:I didnt bring back anything from Malaysia.B:_ at all?Why not?No oneanyoneNothinghot and sunny tired Beijing duck delicioustake some photos beautifulbuy something special interestinglearn something important August Wednesday,_ 20thToday the
26、 weather was _.I went to _.It was _.We _.I liked this place because _.For dinner we had _.It was _.In the evening,I felt really _.hot and sunnyAugust beautifula Beijing hutong some photosI learn something importantBeijing duckdelicioustiredComplete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in
27、brackets.Last August，our class（do）something very special on our school trip.We（go）to Mount Tai.We （start）our trip at 12：00 at night.Everyone in our class （take）a bag with some food and water.After three hours，someone looked at the map and（find）out we_ （be，not）anywhere near the top.My legs_（be）so tir
28、ed that I wanted to stop.My classmates（tell）me to keep going，so I（go）on.At 5：00 a.m.，we got to the top！Everyone（jump）up and down in excitement.Twenty minutes later，the sun（start）to come up.It was so beautiful that we（forget）about the last five hours！didwentstartedtookfoundwere not/werentweretoldwentjumpedstartedforgot_ 沿途沿途another two hours(=two more hours)_ 查明；弄清查明；弄清_ 升起升起_ 带回来带回来jump up and down in excitement _along the way 另外两个小时另外两个小时find out come up bring back 兴奋地跳来跳去兴奋地跳来跳去Summary_学一些重要的东西学一些重要的东西_过得很愉快；玩得非常开心过得很愉快；玩得非常开心learn something important have a fun time See you！
