1、读后续写读后续写一次考试读后续写试题，引发的内心的惊涛骇浪！对英语学习的迷茫和无奈，但不会放弃英语成绩的提高，不是一蹴而就的！在于平时的积累，和每天的坚持！老师想告诉你：2 Complete the sentence:At that moment,I was seized by a sense of sadness and couldnt help _.crying bitterlyLogicalTip:3 Ask your desk-mate to read it aloud:Waiting anxiously for the teacher to announce the result o
2、f the exam,I stared at the paper held in the teachers hands.OrganizedTip:4 Act it out:Terribly unhappy,I hid the paper and lowered my head,thinking what I should do next.VividTip:1 Read it aloud:Upon hearing the sad news,my heart sank.EmotionalTip:ogical rganized motional ividLOVEEVOLLOVE读后续写，坚持四个原则
3、：有逻辑，有组织，有生动，有情感。读后续写的题型分析和写作方法本节课目标：新题型！读后续写对每一位老师、学生来说都是一个新题型，大家没有接触过，觉得无从下手，这很正常，大家不要焦虑。认识读后续写：这种题型是阅读理解和书面表阅读理解和书面表达的桥梁。达的桥梁。考察什么？读后续写这道题，考察学生对文章的阅读理解能力，又考察学生的想象力、创造力，以及运用准确丰富有逻辑的语言的表达能力。怎么做？更加体现平时多阅读，善思考，积累好词好句的重要性。平时阅读的过程中，要注意观察和体会别人的表达，学以致用。读后续写 到底该如何下手？思考：一、仔细阅读题目要求47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两
4、段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150词左右。47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150词左右。二、处理文本1.看文章理解文章，了解故事内容。2.看表达注意文中的动作、心理、情绪、外貌等描写，关注所用到的词汇、短语、句子，在文中划出来。本文讲述了作者和父亲在排队买马戏团的票时，前面有个家庭给作者留下了深刻印象。这个家庭看上去不是很有钱，有8个孩子，但他们穿着很干净，举止良好，在开心地谈论小丑、大象和其他表演。到买票时，那位父亲没有足够的钱支付8个孩子的票，感到很尴尬，他的嘴唇开始颤抖了。作者特别理解孩子们的感受，为他们感到难过
5、。三、处理所给句子1.读懂所给的两个句子。2.思考两个句子之间的逻辑关系。Paragraph1:Seeing what was going on,my dad put his hand in his pocket,pulled out a$20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Paragraph 2：That day I went back home with my father without any tickets,except a valuable lesson.我的爸爸帮助了他们注意：所给的两个句子，是有联系的！三、处理所给句子1.读懂所给的两个句子
6、。2.思考两个句子之间的逻辑关系。Paragraph1:Seeing what was going on,my dad put his hand in his pocket,pulled out a$20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Paragraph 2：That day I went back home with my father without any tickets,except a valuable lesson.看到这一切，爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张20美元的钞票，扔在地上。那天我和我的父亲回家，除了一堂宝贵的课，没有任何票。这一段可以描写
7、作者的父亲是如何帮助那个买不起票的父亲的。第二段可描写父亲的行为中带给作者的感悟。1.构思情节四、构思内容Paragraph1:Seeing what was going on,my dad put his hand in his pocket,pulled out a$20 bill and dropped it on the ground.思考：1.What did my father do next?说了什么，做了什么？2.What did he say to the father of eight children?说了什么，做了什么？3.How the father feel and
8、 what he said to my father?什么表现，什么感受，本段注意：细节描写（语言描写，动作描写，心理描写，情绪描写等），使文章更丰富，有血有肉更能打动人。技巧：可以借用文中词汇短语或可以借用文中词汇短语或句子。句子。2.续写线索送钱困惑感谢回家感悟 思路参照：拍了拍他的肩膀；说你的钱掉了；对方很惊讶；但通过我父亲的笃定，他明白了我父亲的用意；非常感激；握着我父亲的手说感激的话；眼里闪着喜悦和感激的光芒等等3.词汇激活行为类拿出：pull out/take out 回答：reply/answer返回：go back/return情绪类 困惑：confused/puzzled 感
9、谢：with gratitude/gratefullyParagraph 2：That day I went back home with my father without any tickets,except a valuable lesson.本段重点写：个人感悟高分句型1.But soon,he knew what was going on.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句作knew的宾语）高分句型2.However,it was a desperate,heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a proud father who w
10、ished nothing but highlight his childrens life just with the circus.（由关系代词who引导定语从句）高分句型3.What my dad did show me that being wealthy is not just about money.（由what引导主语从句和连接词that引导宾语从句）范文 Paragraph 1：Seeing what was going on,my dad put his hand in his pocket,pulled out a$20 bill and dropped it on the
11、 ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the father on the shoulder and said,“Excuse me,sir,out of your pocket fell this bill.”The man turned around and saw the money.He stood silently for a second,feeling confused.But soon,he knew what was going on.Holding my dads hand in both of his hands and keepi
12、ng a tight grip on the bill,his eyes lit up with gratitude.With his lips shaking and something shining in his eyes,he replied in a low voice,“Thank you,Sir.This really means a lot to me and my family.”学习范文中：学习范文中：动作描写动作描写 语言描写语言描写 心理描写心理描写 Paragraph 2：That day I went back home with my father without
13、 any tickets,except a valuable lesson.Surely,the man wasnt begging for a handout.However,it was a desperate,heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a proud father who wished nothing but highlight his childrens life just with the circus!Dad stepped forward and offered his warm hands with respect
14、.What my dad did show me that being wealthy is not just about money.作者感悟作者感悟 ogical rganized motional ividLOVEEVOLLOVE重温：读后续写四个原则：有逻辑，有组织，有生动，有情感。英文原著中欣赏细节描写摘自 Flipped 怦然心动这句话主要描写了妈妈忙碌的身影英文原著中欣赏细节描写摘自 Charlie and the Chocolate Factory 查理和巧克力工厂这段是查理得到那张宝贵的金票之后，一路飞奔回家，给妈妈描述他得到票的过程的一段话。这段话中间没有标点，是一个大的句子，个人感觉，这里用一个长句，表达了查理激动和喜悦的心情，想要一口气说完的感觉。英文原著中欣赏细节描写摘自 Charlie and the Chocolate Factory 查理和巧克力工厂神秘工厂的神秘老板终于现身了这段描写了Mr.Wonka 的眼睛和脸
