1、SuccessWriting Workshop 0102Learning ObjectivesTo read and talk about a life storyTo identify the main structure and learn and practise time expressions03To write a life story of a person you like or admireLead inWho is the person you admire most in your life?You are going to write a life story of a
2、 person you like or admire.Lead inDiscuss with your partner.Who are you going to write about?What is special about him/her?What big events did he/she experience in his/her life?Before reading,lets predict these questions.Read for writing1 Who is Lang Ping?2 Why was Lang Ping named“Iron Hammer”?3 Wha
3、t is Lang Pings experience as an athlete?4 What is Lang Pings experience as a coach?5 Why do people like Lang Ping?In this lesson,well learn how to write a life story of a person you like or admire.Lead inIn this lesson,well learn how to write a life story of a person you like or admire.Read the art
4、icle and check your predictation.1.Who is Lang Ping?2.Why was Lang Ping named“Iron Hammer”?Her strong and powerful playing style earned her the name“Iron Hammer.Lang Ping is one of Chinas most recognized athletes.3.What is Lang Pings experience as an athlete?In the 1984 Olympics,Chinas team won the
5、gold medal.With Lang Pings help,the team achieved a series of amazing wins from 1981 to 1985,including the World Cup,Olympics and the World Championship.5.Why do people like Lang Ping?People like her not only because of her devotion to her career,but also because of her huge influence on the sport o
6、f volleyball.4.What is Lang Pings experience as a coach?After retiring as an athlete in 1986,she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.In 1995,she returned to become the coach of the womens national team who won the 2015 World Cup.Label the paragraphs(a-c)in the bo
7、xes of each paragraph.a important life or work experiences of the personb general introduction of the person c major awards and commentsa important life or work experiences of the personb general introduction of the person c major awards and commentsbaac时态多为一般过去时，主要人称为第三人称。Narrative以时间顺序介绍人物Life sto
8、ry特征真实性，介绍要实事求是。Write 2-3 sentences about the person that you are going to write about.Use the Sentence Builder to help you.Time Expressions(1)duringLang Ping played on Chinas national volleyball tem during the 1980s.atLang was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including go
9、ld medals at the 1984 Olympics Sentence BuilderafterAfter retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.that yearThat year,Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards Sentence BuilderFind more detailed in
10、formation about the person you are going to write about.Outlining Complete the outline of the persons life story based on Activity 3.Drafting Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.Editing Edit your essay in pairs.Then share what you have written in class.1 general introduct
11、ion of the person 2 important life or work experiences of the person3 major awards and commentsWriting a Life StoryIts important to:focus on what is special about the person you are writing about;choose important events and achievements to show why he/she is special;use time expressions to describe
12、past events or experiences;use past tenses to write about events in the past.Writing HelpOutlining.Complete the outline of the persons life story based on Activity 3.体裁话题体裁话题时态人称时态人称文章架构文章架构说明文，人物介绍说明文，人物介绍以一般现在时和一般过去以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；以第三人称为主时为主；以第三人称为主首段：引出话题，介绍我首段：引出话题，介绍我最喜欢的科学家屠呦呦最喜欢的科学家屠呦呦中段：介绍屠呦呦
13、的主要中段：介绍屠呦呦的主要成就成就尾段：表达自己的愿望尾段：表达自己的愿望【写作任务】某英语学习app 写作板块“Influential people in history”在面向其用户征文。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文介绍伟大的生物学家亚历山大弗莱明(Alexander Fleming)并投稿。生卒年份生卒年份1881 年年1955 年年出生地出生地苏格兰苏格兰经历与成就经历与成就由母亲和哥哥抚养，农场生活经历锻炼由母亲和哥哥抚养，农场生活经历锻炼了其观察能力；了其观察能力；1906 年以优异成绩从伦敦帝国学院圣玛年以优异成绩从伦敦帝国学院圣玛丽医学院丽医学院(St Marys Hos
14、pital Medical School,Imperial College London)毕业并开毕业并开始研究工作；始研究工作；1928 年发现了青霉素（年发现了青霉素（penicillin），其），其应用挽救了无数人的生命；应用挽救了无数人的生命；1945 年获得诺贝尔奖。年获得诺贝尔奖。注意：1.词数100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作要求介绍生物学家弗莱明,属于记叙文的写作范畴。这类文章的关键之处在于突出人物主要成就。人称应以第三人称为主，时态则以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局此类文章一般采用“总分总”的组织模式，力求给读者一个较为清晰且完整的
15、印象。针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：第一部分：总体介绍（其身份、生卒年、出生地等）；第二部分：列举其主要经历和成就（按时间顺序）；第三部分：总结全文（对其历史地位进行简要评价）。三、组织语言常用词汇：courage,determination,patience,theory,experiment,attitude,confidence,research,gain,discovery,devotion,interest,influence,win,receive,.care for,learn.by oneself,be fond of,lead a(n).life,be good a
16、t,make contributions to,succeed in,make efforts to,be proud of,be considered as,be honoured with,be famous for/as.,grow up,be awarded to,.常用句型：.got/received a(n).degree in.was born in.and died in the year of.play(s)an important role in the development of.After graduation,he/she decided to.will be re
17、membered forever.【范文展示】Possible version one：Alexander Fleming(1881-1955)was a Scottish biologist,who discovered penicillin.Its use has been saving so many lives.Fleming was raised by his mother and elder brother.It was because he grew up on a farm that he developed great power of observation.The yea
18、r 1906 saw Fleming graduate as a top student from St Marys Hospital Medical School,Imperial College London and begin his research.He made outstanding contributions to medical science,the most important of which was his discovery ofpenicillin in 1928.Because of it,a Nobel Prize was awarded to him in 1945.Fleming is without doubt one of the greatest biologists in history.Write a life story of a person you like or admire.Thank you！
