1、 第 15 周 范文范文71 感恩父母感恩父母 假如你是李华，最近你校正在开展“感恩父母”的主题征文活动，要求学生就以下图片谈谈自己的感触。 主要内容应包括： 1. 简要描述图片信息； 2. 感恩父母对于自己的付出； 3. 将来如何回报父母。 要求： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头结尾已给，不计入总词数。 As is shown in the picture, supposing our parents can live another 30 years, we are left only _ _ _ _ _ 【思路点拨】 本文是图画类作文，要求学生“感恩父母”的主题征文活动写一征文。 写作时
2、应注意：应使用一般现在时和第一人称 文章应涵盖题干及图画涉及的所有要点 应灵活运用therefore，however等连词；get into trouble，desperately，spare，admit等高级词汇和短语；what 引导的感叹句，on seeing短语作状语，whenever和when引导时间状语从句。 【必背范文】 As is shown in the picture, supposing our parents can live another 30 years, we are left only about 1 month to accompany them. What
3、a shocking and depressing result it is! On seeing the picture, the memory of my growth with my parents care and love just crowds into my mind. My parents might work hard, but they are always there for me. Whenever I get into trouble and desperately need a hand, they come over first to support me and
4、 encourage me. I grow up with their constant care and love. They share my happiness and sorrow, for which they ask for nothing in return. At present, nothing can better comfort my parents than my working hard and being admitted to a good university. However, when I get employed, its my sparing as mu
5、ch time as possible to stay with them that can give them much joy. Therefore, I will try my best to show my gratitude to my parents and make them live a great life without worrying about me and my life. 范文范文 72 感谢外教感谢外教 假如你是红星中学高三 1 班班长李华。外教 David 来你校支教一年期满，下周将要回美国，请你代表 你班同学写一封信给 David，要点如下： 1. 感谢 D
6、avid 的教育； 2. 同学们英语进步了； 3. 双方建立了深厚情谊。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 【思路点拨】 本文要求写感谢信。第一段应该表明写信目的；第二段是文章的主题段落，感谢 David 的教育并具体 说明理由；第三段再次表示谢意。 时态以一般现在时为主。 【必背范文】 Dear Mr. David, Im Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Senior 3. On behalf of my class, Im writing this letter to express our sincere appreciatio
7、n to you for teaching us English this year. Since you came, you ve made a great effort to teach us. It s your patient and effective teaching method that have helped us overcome the difficulties and build up our confidence in learning English well. We are more interested in learning English and have
8、been making progress. How time flies! You are leaving for America next month, and we will miss you. During this year youre our teacher and also become our good friend, so along with this letter we present you a Chinese knot in memory of your great effort and our friendship. Yours, Li Hua 范文范文 73 向帮助
9、过自己的教授致谢向帮助过自己的教授致谢 假定你是李华，你学校的美籍教授 Sue Wood 不久前返回美国任教了。请你根据下列写作要点和要求给 Sue 写封电子邮件。 1.表达想念之情； 2.对她表示感谢； 3.希望了解她的近况。 注意：1.词数 100 左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sue, Im Li Hua, one of your students in China. All the best Li Hua 【思路点拨】 本文要求写一封感谢信。所以开头首先向教授表示感谢及思念之情；然后详细叙述教授曾经对自己的 帮助，此部分是文章的主体。在
10、写作的过程中，应注意高级句式的应用。 【必背范文】 Dear Sue, Im Li Hua, one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us. We all miss you so much and are very grateful for what you did for us. Firstly, Id like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care and love for me! A million tha
11、nks to your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. Besides, you spared lots of personal time to introduce American culture and traditions to us so that we got a better understanding of English. Moreover, you cooked delicious American food for us when we visited you. You are re
12、ally kind and devoted! How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. All the best Li Hua 范文范文 74 感谢朋友感谢朋友 假设你是李华，你寒假参加了去北京的冬令营活动，当时同行的一个队友 Wang Tao 对你非常照顾，下 周末他要过生日，而你因母亲生病不能脱身。请写封信表达你对他表示感谢及歉意。 注意：1.词数 100 左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以
13、使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。 Dear Wang Tao, _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 按照题目要求需要写一封信，对自己照顾有加的朋友表示歉意。首先因下周不能参加他的生日聚会表 示抱歉；之后再表示他对自己的照顾而表示感谢；最后赠送礼物并表达自己的祝福。 时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称为主。尽量使用高级词汇和句式，以使文章增色。 【必背范文】 Dear Wang Tao, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Satur
14、day evening. That is owing to the fact that my mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there immediately and take care of her, because my father is on business in England now. I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would mis
15、s the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party. Yours Li Hua 范文范文75 感谢评委感谢评委 假设你是李华，上个月你的外教 Mrs. Brown 受邀请担任了学
16、校英语演讲比赛的评委，并作了如何提高 口语的演讲，参赛选手和观众们都受益匪浅，请写一封信表达对她的感谢并询问她是否能参加 6 月 20 日在 校举行的毕业典礼。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写出。 Dear Mrs. Brown, How have you been recently? Thanks again for what you have done for us. Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 题目要求写一封感谢信信。主要是向收信人表达谢意，并询问她是否能参加毕业典礼。 【必背范文】 Dear Mrs.
17、 Brown, How have you been recently? I am writing to express my gratitude to you for attending our schools speech contest last month. As you and other judges like you shared a passion for the competition, it was the most successful competition ever. All the competitors did learn a lot from your helpf
18、ul suggestions. Whats more, I shall always remember the speech you shared, which helped us know more about how to improve our oral English. As you know, we will graduate this June. We are planning to hold a graduation ceremony on June20th. we would be honored to have you among us and share the important moment with us. Would you kindly let me know if you can come? Thanks again for what you have done for us. Yours, Li Hua
