1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、感谢信:演讲比赛帮助(2021学年第二学期杭州市髙一年级期末教学质量检测)假定你是李华,昨天你校举办了“我爱家乡”的英语演讲比赛,你获得了一等奖。你的新加坡朋友Antony给予了你参赛指导,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.告知消息;2.感谢帮助;3.邀请他来游玩。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路:三段论。第一段交代写信目的告知获奖(要点1)并表达感谢;第二段感谢帮助并说明理由(要点2);第三段再次表达谢意并邀请来家乡游玩(要点3)。【参考范文】Dear Antony,I hope th
2、is e-mail finds you well. I have won the first prize in our schools English speech contest themed with I Love My Hometown. I am writing to extend my gratitude for your careful guidance.Without your help I would never have achieved such a good result.You taught me how to better organize my words, exp
3、ress my thoughts, and how to embrace the great challenges onstage. Not only did these skills contribute to my success in the competition, it also made a great difference to my growth.Words fail to express my thanks for your support and encouragement. Id like to invite you to visit my hometown during
4、 the summer vacation. Best wishes! (114 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的安东尼:见信好。我在学校举办的“我爱家乡”英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖,我写信想要表达你对我的悉心指导。没有你的指导我就不会取得这么好的成绩。你教我如何更好地组织语言、表达思想,以及如何在台上克服困难展现自信。这些技巧不仅在比赛中发挥了重要作用,也对我的个人成长产生了深远的影响。千言万语难以表达我的感激之情,再次对你的支持和鼓励表示感谢。同时我也想邀请你在暑假的时候来我的家乡游玩。祝好!李华Speech Contest【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作三步法:(1)仔细
5、审题,确定本文为感谢信;(2)因双方是朋友关系,故李华身份不必交代;(3)根据写作要求,本文主体部分为感谢对方帮助自己获得演讲比赛一等奖,确定本文时态主基调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点:(1)I hope this e-mail finds you well运用无灵主语结构;(2)themed with后置定语,意为“主题是”;(3)extend ones gratitude for sth因某事向某人表达谢意;(4)Without you help I would never have done sth运用含蓄虚拟条件句,without your help=If you hadnt help
6、ed me;(5)embrace the great challenges迎接巨大挑战;(6)Not only did .否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构;(7)contribute to有助于;(8)make a great difference to对.产生巨大影响;(9)Words fail to express my thanks for .言语难以表达我的感激之情。二、通知:英语作文大赛(九省联考卷2024年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛,请你写一则活动通知,内容包括:1.介绍活动目的;2.说明参赛要求。注意:1.写作词数应为80
7、个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路:二段论。第一段介绍活动目的(要点1)并说明参赛要求(要点2),第二段号召同学们积极参与。【参考范文】Welcome to Join the English Writing CompetitionOur school is scheduled to organize an English writing competition themed with Joint Efforts to Save Food, with the purpose of enhancing the students awa
8、reness to cherish food and put an end to waste, so that they learn thrift as a habit by heart and bear it in mind.The article is required to be focused on the theme, with the sharing of the students practices and opinions of saying no to food waste as well as the specific measures to promote the Cle
9、an Plate Campaign. Each and every article may as well be limited to no more than 500 words, attached with the class and name of the author.Your active participation is highly expected, and please keep those around you informed. (123 words)The English Newspaper【中文翻译】欢迎参加英语作文大赛为了提升全体同学珍惜粮食、杜绝浪费的意识,让勤俭
10、节约成为一种习惯入脑入心,我校拟举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。文章需紧扣主题,分享自己抵制餐饮浪费的做法和感受,提出推进“光盘行动”的具体举措。来稿词数控制在500字以内,并注明班级和姓名。非常期待同学们的踊跃参与,并请相互转告。校英文报【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤:(1)审题判定文体为通知;(2)因本文是一则通知,故李华身份不必交代;(3)因文本主体部分写活动的目的参赛要求,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点:(1)be scheduled to计划做某事;(2)themed with以.为主题,用作后置定语;(3)with the purpose of目
11、的是.;(4)put an end to结束;(5)learn . by heart and bear it in mind使.入脑入心;(6)say no to拒绝;(7)each and every每一个;(8)may as well还是.的好;(9)is highly expected某事是很期待的;(10)keep sb informed使某人知晓。三、投稿:Students Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly(泉州市2024届高中毕业班质量检测二)你校英文报正在开展以 Students Time Spent on Physical Exerc
12、ise Weekly 题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.描述调查结果;2.分析其原因并给出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Students Time Spent on Physical Exercise WeeklyNowadays, many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise, although the time theyspend on it varies.写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路:二段论。第一段描述调查结果(要点
13、1);第二段分析原因并给出建议(要点2)。【参考范文】Students Time Spent on Physical Exercise WeeklyNowadays, many students are aware of the significance of physical exercise, although the time they spend on it varies. A survey shows that 18 % of the students exercise 4-5 hours a week, while 30 and 40 % spend respectively 2-
14、3 hours and 3-4 hours exercising weekly. Another 12 % do physical exercise less than two hours a week.Obviously, an increasing number of students take a fancy to physical exercise, since they have realized that fitness is to them what water is to fish. However, going beyond the limit is as bad as fa
15、lling short. As students, it is preferable to find a suitable way to exercise according to our physical conditions so that we can keep the balance between study and relaxation. (105 words)【中文翻译】大家下午好!我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天,我们在这里为她举行欢送会。学生每周体育锻炼的时间如今,许多学生都意识到体育锻炼的重要性,尽管他们花在体育锻炼上的时间各不相同。一个调查显示,有18%的学生每周锻炼
16、4-5个小时,而花费在每周锻炼的时间为2-3小时以及3-4小时的学生分别为30%和40%。另还有12%的学生每周锻炼不超过2个小时。很明显,越来越多的学生喜欢锻炼,原因是他们都开始意识到锻炼的重要意义。然而,过犹不及,锻炼也应该适可而止。作为学生,我们应该根据自己的身体条件,找到一个适合自己的锻炼方式,以平衡自己的锻炼和休息。【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤:(1)审题判定文体为投稿;(2)因文体是投稿,故作者身份在正文中不必交代;(3)因文本主体部分为介绍调查结果,分析原因并提出建议,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点:(1)an increasing number of越来越多=more and more;(2)take a fancy to喜欢;(3)fitness is to them what water is to fish健康对他们而言就如同水之于鱼,用A is to B what C is to D比喻健康的重要性;(4)going beyond limit is as bad as falling short过犹不及;(5)It is preferable to do sth做某事是更可取的。4