1、Design Continuation Writingby using TEAM structure Presented by Learning objectivesAfter this lesson,students will be able to:1.understand the given text and extract useful information(five basic elements:who,when,where,how,what);2.design the appropriate mind map to continue the story;3.learn to be
2、grateful to others who love them.01.TEAM Structure 02.Starting out 03.Read for details 04.Design continuation writing 05.Writing practice01 TEAM Structure第一段：首句（已给出）。第一句：第一句：Transitional sentenceTransitional sentence衔接句承上（回应首句的内容）第二句：第二句：Emotion or EnvironmentEmotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写 第三句：第三句：
3、Action 1 Action 1 动作一 第四句：第四句：Monologue or ConversationMonologue or Conversation独白/对话 第五句：第五句：Emotion or EnvironmentEmotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写 第六句：第六句：ActionAction 2 2 动作二 第七句：第七句：Transitional sentenceTransitional sentence衔接句启下（结合第二段首句，结束第一段）。01 TEAM Structure第二段：首句（已给出）。第一句：第一句：Transitional se
4、ntenceTransitional sentence衔接句承上（回应首句的内容）第二句：第二句：Emotion or EnvironmentEmotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写 第三句：第三句：Action Action 动作一 第四句：第四句：Monologue or ConversationMonologue or Conversation独白/对话 第五句：第五句：Emotion or EnvironmentEmotion or Environment心理描写/环境描写 第六句：第六句：ActionAction 动作二（解决问题）第七句：第七句：Theme T
5、heme 回归主题，感情升华。02 Starting out02 Starting out1.Would you give a gift or surprise to your mother on Mothers day?2.What kind of surprise do you plan for Mothers Day?3.Lets read a story A Mothers Day Surprise A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise t
6、hey were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.T
7、he alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two sl
8、ices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of brea
9、d.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.
10、Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para.1
11、As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared._Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._03 Read for detailsFive Basic Elements（1）Who（2）When（3）Where（4）How（5）What(main idea)A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they t
12、hought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.Th
13、e big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found
14、the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in
15、 the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But t
16、he stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turn
17、ed black as well._Five Basic Elements（1）Who（2）When（3）Where（4）How（5）What(main idea)Jenna&Jeff(The twins),Mother,FatherAt home;in the kitchenThe twins(excited-confident-panicked/calm-disappointed-)Mother(pleased-proud-surprised-)Father(confused-helpful/considerate-)The twins wanted to surprise their m
18、om on mothers day,so they were preparing the breakfast but it was mess and burned the finger.At 6:00 am in the morningA MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brough
19、t her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided
20、 to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the fry
21、ing pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shootin
22、g out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.B
23、ut Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared._Para.2 The twin
24、s carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._ _Beginning The twins Jeff and Jenna planned to make breakfast for their mother as a wothers Day surprise.Development Everything went smoothly until Jeff burnt the piece of bread.Climax The porridge boiled over,Jeffs hand touched the hot bur
25、ner and the other piece of the bread turned black.Ending Their father appeared.What would happen(发生)?excited,confident went well,under control panicked,lose control 04.Design continuation writingAs the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast a
26、nd woke their mother up.1.Father asked what had happened;the twins told the truth.2.Father helped them out and cooked it all over again;watched father cooking.3.They felt guilty about being over-confident（过于自信）.What would their father and the twins say when their father appeared?她们父亲出现了,在这情况下，双胞胎和父亲
27、会说什么？Would their father help them out?What would Father do in order to help?What the twins behavior?她们的父亲会帮助他们吗？为了帮助做了什么？她们的举动？How did the twins feel?她们的感受？As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast and woke their mother up.1.Father asked
28、what had happened;the twins told the truth.2.Father helped them out and cooked it all over again;watched father cooking.3.They felt guilty about being over-confident（过于自信）.1.happy Mothers Day,surprise for you and told the truth;thanks and proud of you 3.Mothers feeling:happy and proud;their feeling:
29、decide to learn to make their own breakfast2.hug(拥抱)each other and taste the breakfastWhat would the twins say to their mother and what would their mother say to the twins?To tell the truth?她们妈妈醒来，双胞胎和妈妈都会说什么？告诉事情的经过？When they talked to their mother,what kinds of behaviors between them?和妈妈说话的过程中，双方会
30、有什么举动呢？What did they understand and realize from this incident?从这个事件中，让她们可以懂得点意识到什么？04.Design continuation writing05 Writing practiceActivity 1 Students write transitional sentences and the theme sentence.Students own presentationActivity 2 Show possible samples.Para.1 As the twins looked around the
31、m in disappointment,their father appeared.Transitional sentence 1 Fathers appearing was like a savior to the two children./Seeing the mess in the kitchen,their father was stunned,asking what the twins were doing.Transitional sentence 2 Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!/With their fa
32、thers help,the kids soon finished French toast and chicken porridge.Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Transitional sentence 3 When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised./Waking up from her dream,their mother
33、 was still trying to figure out what had happened.Theme sentence Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again./But for this special experience,she might not have realized how much her children loved her.05 Writing practiceLogical arrangementPara.1 As the twins looked around them in dis
34、appointment,their father appeared.Put the following sentences in correct order.A.“Today is Mothers Day and we are preparing a breakfast for mom as a surprise.”said the twins.B.With their fathers help,the kids soon finished French toast and chicken porridge.C.Seeing the mess in the kitchen,their fath
35、er was stunned,asking what the twins were doing.D.Moved by their sweet idea,their father decided to offer them possible help.E.Not only did he clean the stove for them,but also he gave patient guidance to them.Key:CADEBLogical arrangementPara.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their
36、 mother up.Put the following sentences in correct order.A.“Happy Mothers Day and this is our surprise for you!”said the twins excitedly.B.Holding the kids tightly in her arms,she said,“you are the biggest surprise that I can ever have in my life.”C.But for this special experience,she might not have
37、realized how much her children loved her.D.Waking up from her dream,their mother was still trying to figure out what had happened.E.Looking at their lovely faces and the breakfast they had made,their mother burst into tears.Key:DAEBCFeatures of a good story1.core-focused(核心内容)e.g.focus on main chara
38、cters(主要人物)and main plots(主要故事情节)2.vivid scenes/plots(生动的场景或情节)e.g.actions(动作),emotions(情感),descriptions(说明),narrative(故事),(1-2)dialogues(对话)3.Language and writing skills(语言与写作技巧)e.g.a variety of vocabulary appropriately used in writing(各种合适的运用在写作中的词汇)；倒装句，非谓语动词，定语从句，强调句等。Homework:Write the ending of the storyTHANK YOU！
