1、高考英语读后续写素材一、段落开头句(围绕给定句)写好段落开头句一、时间状语从句Once/While/When/As/The moment., sb. do sth.简单句:She got onto the bus.改写后:Once the bus stopped, she got onto it in no time, excited and relieved.简单句:It began to rain.改写后:As I was leaving the house, it began to rain.二、让步状语从句的倒装adj.+as/though+sb. was, sb. do sth.简单
2、句:He was exhausted and hungry. He crossed the finish line.改写后:Exhausted and hungry as he was, he still insisted on crossing the finish line.简单句:The man was ugly. He had a kind heart.改写后:Ugly though the man was, he bore a kind heart as pure as a diamond.三、形容词或形容词短语作状语+独立主格结构情绪形容词1 and情绪形容词2,sb. do st
3、h. ,+独立主格简单句:Jack knelt down.He was desperate and hopeless.His tears flowed down his face.改写后:Desperate and hopeless, Jack knelt down, tears streaming down his cheek.实例演练:On her second marathon in Portland, she had her foot injured. Painful and exhausted, Patti had no choice but to stop running, eye
4、s filled with disappointment.Half a year later, Patti ran in Washington and finally shook the hand of the President. Unable to contain her joy, Patti choked with tears spilling out of his eyes, Without my father, I wouldnt come up in the competition today. It was his encouragement and company that i
5、nspired me to move on.”形容词或形容词短语作状语例句Lost/deep in thought, she didnt seem to notice that everyone was looking at her.她陷入沉思,似乎没有注意到每个人都在看着她。Tired and thirsty, he went to the tea house immediately.又累又渴,他直接去了茶馆Warmhearted, my father even volunteered to drive the little boy to his home.我的父亲是如此的热心,以至于自愿开
6、车把小男孩送回家。Puzzled and curious, Alice unwrapped her present secretly.既困惑又好奇,爱丽丝偷偷打开了她的生日礼物。Nervous yet determined, I raised my head.紧张但是很坚定,我抬起我的头。Unable to contain her joy and excitement, she threw herself into her mothers arms, murmuring, “Thank you. dear mum.”她难以抑制高兴和激动,扑到母亲的怀里,喃喃道,“谢谢你,妈妈。”二、结尾主题升
7、华句(一)三种方法1.比喻结尾Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love.只有当我们打开心门,我们才能沐浴在明媚的阳光中,享受爱的温暖。Todays experience was like an everlasting flower, blooming in the river of my memories.今天的经历将像是一朵永不凋谢的花朵,永远绽放在我的记忆长河里。With laughter lingeri
8、ng in the room, their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never withers.伴随着笑声回荡在房间里,他们真挚的友谊之花在这个盛夏绽放,永不凋败。2.谚语名言结尾Just as the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Now I couldnt agree more with those words.正如俗语所说,“有志者,事竟成。”现在我完全同意这句话。更多谚语、格言.3.事情+流泪(独立主格
9、)+感悟(强调句+非限)sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control.It is love that makes the world go round, which was deeply engraved in ones memory. 某人看着某物/拿着某物,眼泪不受控制地滚落下来。正是爱让世界转动,这深深地刻在了某人的记忆里。(二)五个主题1.追求梦想(条件状语从句)Its never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every oppo
10、rtunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dream.追求梦想永远都不算晚,只要你抓住机会并且充分利用它,你就有机会实现梦想。Life without dreams is like a bird with a broken wing.生活没有梦想如同鸟儿折断了翅膀。2.克服困难(条件状语从句)The journey to success is not smooth. We should be brave to embrace the difficulties and challe
11、nges of it. As long as we dont give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goals finally.通往成功的旅程不会平坦,我们要勇敢地拥抱旅程中的艰辛与挑战。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力去克服所有困难,我们终将实现目标。When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.随遇而安,苦中作乐。3.战胜自卑(时间状从+宾从+原因状从+强调句)I smiled asI eventually
12、realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like and much happier, because I have realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.当我最终意识到了自信的真正来源的时候,我笑了。现在,我为我的样子感到骄傲,而且更快乐,因为我已经意识到,决定你真正是谁的是你的性格。4.亲情友情Family and friends are hidden treasures. 家人和朋友是隐藏的珍宝Frie
13、ndship is to us what water is to fish. 友谊之于我们就像水之于鱼Family is to us what harbor is to ships. 家之于我们就像港口之于船只5.助人为乐Roses given, fragrance in hand. /The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine. 赠人玫瑰,手留余香From that day on, every time I meet someone who is in need of help, I always reach out to them, hoping t
14、o pass on the love and kindness to others. Just as a saying goes,Roses given, fragrance in hand.从那天起,每当我遇到需要帮助的人,我总会向他们伸出援手,希望能够把爱与善良传递给其他人。正如谚语所说:“赠人玫瑰, 手有余香。”Sometimes, a small act of love and kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference. So, never underestimate the value of our actions.有时候,一个小小的善举能够产生巨大的影响,所以永远不要低估我们行动的价值。From then on, I would try my best to help sb like sb. Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起,我会尽我最大的努力去帮助别人,就像某人一样。 只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。3