1、高考英语读后续写分类指导一、自我成长篇阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thirteen can be a challenging age.Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body, I also had to deal with my parents bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.When we moved, my beloved compan
2、ion, a small brown pony (小马), had to be sold.Feeling helpless and alone, I couldnt eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time.I missed my family, my home and my pony.Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.My horse, Cowboy, was with
3、out a doubt the ugliest horse in the world.He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed.But I didnt care about his faults.I loved him beyond all reason.I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboys looks.I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking.Th
4、e other members rode beautiful registered horses.When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were quickly out of the game.I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed events.I chose barrel racing (绕桶赛),an event in which a horse an
5、d its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events.She always won the blue ribbons.Needless to say, she didnt feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show.She didnt need to.I cam
6、e in next to last.The bitter memory of Beckys smirks (得意的笑)made me determined to beat her.For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena (运动场地).We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home.On the way home I would be so tired; th
7、ose five miles seemed twice as long.All of our hard work didnt make me feel confident by the time the show came.I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with ease.My turn finally came._No cheers filled the ai
8、r when I finished my show._1.构思续写两段主要情节结合对故事主题、环境、人物、情节等要素的分析以及对续写第一段、第二段段首句的分析，可以构思续写第一段和第二段的主要情节。续写第一段的主要情节:I started the race and almost fell at first, but I didnt give up and tried hard with Cowboy to finish the game.续写第二段的主要情节:It was announced that I had won the competition and Becky had come i
9、n second.2.构思续写“四点”内容根据对原文的分析和两个段首句推测两段首尾部分“四点”的内容，确保段落当中和段落之间情节连贯以及文章的主题和结局积极向上。续写第一段的段首衔接句:Before I started, I heard contemptuous(轻蔑的)laughter.续写第一段的段尾衔接句:Cowboy successfully finished the last turn.续写第二段的段首衔接句:A great cheer went up from the crowd.结尾句:The blue ribbon was the best reward for our3.呼应
10、前文续写时，需要把握的一个关键词是“努力”，主要是“我”和Cowboy的努力。可以结合原文中出现的一些情节线索，推测它们在续写时可能会出现的呼应，如:For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena.) We practiced for hours in the hot sun.【分析】这两个句子表现出为了这场比赛, “我”和Cowboy每天早早出发，顶着烈日坚持训练，体现了“我”背水一战的决心。因此在续写的部分，“我”所付出的努力也应该会有所回报，并且“我”经
11、历这次比赛之后可能会有新的感悟和成长。【练习】结合文中出现的以下伏笔，预测续写部分可能发生的情节。She always won the blue ribbons.It would be announced that Cowboy and had presented the best show and won the competition.【分析】前文中提到 Becky之前一直都是比赛的第一名在构思续写第二段的结局时，需要考虑这一次比赛结果是否会发生变化。考虑到原文中提到“我”和Cowboy坚持努力训练，可以设计“我”取得第一名的情节。【高分作文】My turn finally came.Th
12、e whistle was blown just an instant before I squeezed Cowboys side.Unable to resist the impulse, I signaled him to move into a faster and faster trot.My white knuckles were sweating bullets as I hurtled towards the last deadly bend at 40 miles per hour.However, with a bump, Cowboy lost his balance a
13、nd I took a nasty tumble.I crept up to check my old friend who was panting and trying to get up (定语从句).1gripped the rein, hobbling over to the finish line (现在分词作状语).No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.The sun was still shining (环境描写) while my body was shivering.Bowing my head (现在分词作状语)，
14、I dragged myself toward the gate with Cowboy.“Hi, you have an ugly horse,”Becky said proudly (原文协同)“But it is a nice horse too.”, Those words made my heart skip a beat and brought back memories of when we had practiced hard (心理描写).My life is a bit like barrel racing.Its challenging, but there is alw
15、ays something can do to adapt to it or even change it.Regardless of the outcome, at least we should give it a try (主题升华).二、人与动物篇阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was invited to a cookout on an old friends farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking hous
16、e which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the b
17、ird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright
18、 eyes.I removed the sticky spider webs that covered her head and wings.Still, she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to
19、 move.I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout, I told my hosts
20、 about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my e
21、yes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment, all were speechless.Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”A few weeks later, I went to the farm again._I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared._1.构思续写两段主要情节结合对文章主题、环境、人物、情节等要素的分析可以构思续写第一段和第二段的主要情节。续写第一段的主要
22、情节：I went to the farm again to visit my friend and hoped to see the hummingbird.续写第二段的主要情节：The hummingbird reappeared and greeted me.2.构思续写“四点”内容根据对原文的分析和两个段首句推测，确保段落当中和段落之间情节连贯以及文章的主题和结局积极向上。续写第一段的段首衔接句：It was harvest time and my friend invited me over.续写第一段的段尾衔接句：After a delicious dinner, it was t
23、ime to set off.续写第二段的段首衔接句：I couldnt help but smile.结尾句：Thus, we began our friendship which has lasted till today.3.呼应前文续写时，需要把握的一个关键点是“我”与蜂鸟的关系层层推进，相关的情节线索可以从原文中蜂鸟获救后的动作描写中获取，如：1.When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.2.She turned from person to
24、 person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone.【分析】这两个句子叙述了蜂鸟获救后记住了“我”的样子，随后又在“我”要离开时和“我”道别，表明了蜂鸟可以认出“我”，以及“我”与蜂鸟之间已经建立了信赖、友好的关系。在续写的第二段中，基于蜂鸟和“我”的关系，当蜂鸟出现后，应该会与“我”互动。续写时，可以参考原文中的动作片段，体现人鸟重逢时的亲密关系。【练习】结合文中出现的以下伏笔，预测续写部分可能发生的情节。During t
25、he cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window. By the time of my second visit, the window would have been fixed.【分析】前文提到“我”第一次去农场救助蜂鸟后，将故事讲给了“我”的朋友们，他们答应修补破碎的窗户。根据这个细节推断，在续写部分，“我”第二次到访农场，窗户应该已经被修好了。1.As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my
26、 car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move.2.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. I would probably meet the hummingbird again near the blackberry-lined path where I used to park my car.【分析】前文提到“我”救助蜂鸟后，蜂鸟并没有立即离开，而是当“我”走到一条通往停车场的两边生
27、长着黑莓的小路上时，蜂鸟才开始活动。在“我”即将离开农场时，蜂鸟又在停车场附近出现，向“我”道别。因此可以推测，在“我”第二次去农场时，可能会在相同的地点与蜂鸟重逢。【高分作文】A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.I parked outside the farm and went straight to the milking house, hoping that the broken window had been repaired (现在分词作状语).To my satisfaction, they kept their word .I
28、 was relieved and thankful.I looked around and pricked up my ears, tracing the signs of the hummingbird（现在分词作状语), but found nothing.I headed for the farm, my heart full of disappointment (独立主格结构).We spent the whole day eating, chatting and singing, and everything seemed perfect.For an instant, I see
29、med to have forgotten about the hummingbird.I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.She flew around me with her buzzing wings and chirps.I recognized her immediately when I saw her at first sight and screamed, “Shes back.” The dim grayness within my heart vanished in an instant (无灵主语
30、句), replaced by surprise and joy.Tentatively, I spread my hand, wondering if she would land (现在分词作状语).Once again, she hovered a few inches in front of my face, looked into my eyes, and turned her head from side to side as if to confirm something.Then, she perched on my hand.We looked at each other for a few seconds before she flew away with a squeaking call.As I drove away, I knew that the memory of that encounter would stay with me forever.4
