1、七年级英语下册Unit 7写作讲解和练习 写作目标用英语写一篇短文，描述过去的生活。写作任务假如本周五英语角的主题是谈论自己过去的生活，你打算参加本次英语角。请以 My past life为题用英语写一篇短文，描述自己过去的生活。指点迷津本次写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文描述自己过去的生活，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先说明自己出生的时间和地点；然后描述自己的家庭生活，可以从房子、房子周边环境进行描述；接着描述自己的社交生活；最后表达自己对过去生活的感受。(2) 人称：以第三人称为主。(3) 时态：以一般过去时为主。(4) 文体：说明文。谋篇布局My past life说明出生的时间和地点(
2、1) 2011年，我出生在湖南省的一个小镇。In 2011, I _ _ _ a small town in Hunan Province.描述家庭生活(2) 我的房子大且舒适。房子里有一个客厅、一个洗手间和两个卧室。其中一个卧室是我的。My house was _ _ _. There was a living room, a bathroom andtwo bedrooms in the house. One of the bedrooms was mine.(3) 我的卧室非常干净。我卧室的墙上有一张中国地图。My bedroom was very clean. There was _
3、_ _ _ on mybedroom wall.(4) 我的房子后面有个花园。花园里面有很多花。There was _ _ behind my house. There were many flowers in the garden.描述社交生活(5) 我有许多朋友。他们都非常友好。我们经常在周末去购物或看电影。I had _ _ _. They were very friendly. We often went shopping orwatched movies at weekends.表达感受我过去的生活很好。我非常怀念它。My past life was great. I miss it
4、 very much.巧衔接在说明名词、表示事物的附属部分或所具有的性质时，可使用with将两个句子合并成一句，这样不仅可以使文章语言凝练、表达地道，也可以使行文连贯、自然、流畅。如：many flowers是garden的附属部分，可以用with来连接它们。连句成文同学们，根据谋篇布局的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇短文吧！My past life 收藏夹描述小学生活同学们，当描述自己的小学生活时，我们可以从哪些方面展开呢？下面一起来看看吧。校园环境与设施big, beautiful, safe, clean, green,modern(现代的).dining hall, studentcentre
5、(中心),garden,library,science lab.学习生活subject: maths, English,music, PE .be good / difficult in classthe English / Chinese.monitorget the best score in.师生关系friendly, nice, get on well with .,respect(尊重) each other校园活动sports meetingschool festival: art / book / food.festivalcompetition(比赛): writing / E
6、nglish speaking / petitionschool club:theChess(国际象棋)/ Drawing / Football.Club小试身手假如下节英语口语课的主题是谈论自己的小学生活，请你以My life in primary school为题用英语写一篇短文，描述自己的小学生活。My life in primary school 【答案】 谋篇布局(1) was born in (2) big and comfortable(3) a map of China (4) a garden (5) lots of friends连句成文My past lifeIn 201
7、1, I was born in a small town in HunanProvince. My house was big and comfortablewitha living room, a bathroom and two bedrooms in it.One of the bedrooms was mine. It was very clean.There was a map of China on my bedroomwall.There was a garden behind my housewithmanyflowers in it. I had lots of frien
8、ds and they wereveryfriendly. We often went shopping or watchedmovies at weekends.My past life was great and I miss it verymuch.小试身手One possible version:My life in primary schoolMy life in primary school was fantastic.My school was big and beautiful. There weremany beautiful buildings in it, such as
9、 the libraryand the science lab. At school, my favouritesubject was maths. It was very interesting and Iwas good at it. I could always get the best score init. My teachers were friendly. They were nice tome. There were some festivals in my school. Iliked the book festival best.Thats all about my life in primary school.3
