1、高考英语读后续写构造动作链句式讲解和练习一、知识讲解句式一：主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C （三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。The singerglancedat the audience,tooka deep breathandbeganto sing.仿写1：He took a taxi to the police station.翻译他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳进去冲着司机说，“去”改写Hestoppeda taxi,jumpedin with the suitcaseandtoldthe driver, “Go to the pol
2、ice station, please.”仿写2：The boys jumped into the lake to play.翻译男孩们兴奋地跑到湖边，脱下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。改写The boys excitedlyrushedto the lake, quicklytookoff their clothesandjumpedinto the water to play.仿写3：She hugged her son tightly.翻译她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。改写Shedashedforward without hesitation,kneltdownandgatheredher so
3、n into her arms tightly.仿写4：I rushed home to get the cotton cat.翻译我冲回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那顶棉质的。改写Irushedhome,searchedthrough my collection of hatsandgrabbedthe cotton one.仿写5：She looked at the trophy and thanked TUNTUN.翻译她先看一下奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢吞吞！”改写Sheglancedat the trophy,tooka deep breathandsaid,“Thank TUNT
4、UN!”仿写6：Mac jumped off the bicycle to shut the door.翻译麦克毫不犹豫跳下自行车，冲向车的后门，猛然地关上车门。改写Macjumpedoff the bicycle without any hesitation,dashedto the back doorandslammedthe door heavily.仿写7：I went to school in a hurry this morning.翻译我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起书包，骑着自行车匆忙去上学了。改写Ipulledon my coat hurriedly,grabbedmy school
5、bagandcycledto school this morning.仿写8：My mum gave fifty dollars to the poor old man.翻译妈妈打开钱包，拿出五十元钱，递给那个贫困的老人。改写My momopenedthe purse,tookout fifty dollarsandhandedit to the poor old man.仿写9：She picked up the photo and placed it into the album.翻译她拿起照片，盯着看一会儿，仔细放进相册里。改写Shepickedup the photo,staredat
6、 it for a whileandplacedit cautiously into the album.仿写10：Jimmy quickly threw the meat at the fierce wolf.翻译吉米快速拿出肉，瞄准，径直朝凶猛的狼扔过去。改写Jimmy quicklypulledout the meat,aimedat the wolfandthrewit straight to the fierce animal.句式二：Having done, 主谓宾（表示先做了某事，再发生核心动作）【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Having wa
7、itedin line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.仿写1：After having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.翻译排了三个小时队后，他被告知票卖完了。改写Having queuedfor 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.仿写2：She wandered aimlessly in the street for hours
8、, then she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.翻译她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。改写Having wanderedaimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.仿写3：After he told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.
9、翻译说出真相后、他心里轻松了很多、心情放松地回家了。改写Having toldthe truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.仿写4：After getting my promise of tending to my mother, my father felt assured and loaded his luggage into the car.翻译得到了我会好好照顾母亲的承诺后，爸爸放心地把行李放进车里。改写Having gottenmy promise of tending to
10、 my mother, my father felt assured and loaded his luggage into the car.仿写5：After fighting in the war for years, the solider returned to his home, only to find his families had moved away.翻译征战多年后，战士回到家中，发现家人已经搬走了。改写Having foughtin the war for years, the solider returned to his home, only to find his
11、families had moved away.仿写6：AfterI promisedthat we would get there before five, I was seized with panic when the car broke down.翻译因为承诺了五点之前我们一定到那儿，所以当车抛锚的时候，我非常慌张。改写Having promisedthat we would get there before five, I was seized with panic when the car broke down.仿写7：After she made full preparation
12、s, she stood by the window and expected the arrival of her daughter.翻译做好充分的准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。改写Having madefull preparations, she stood by the window, expecting the arrival of her daughter.仿写8：After receiving the Nimbus 2000, Harry Potter was so happy that he didnt know what to do.翻译哈利波特收到光轮2000后高兴得
13、不知所措。改写Having receivedthe Nimbus 2000, Harry Potter was so happy that he was at a loss what to do.仿写9：After waiting for a long time, I walked to school through the snow by myself.翻译等了很久之后，我独自在雪地里跋涉到学校。改写Having waitedfor what seemed to be ages, I trudged to school through the snow by myself.仿写10：Afte
14、r experiencing so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up.翻译她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。改写Having experiencedso many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up.二、实战练习1.(2023年新高考I卷读后续写片段)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest when the ne
15、ws came. To my surprise, Iwas informedthat my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me._ _（再三仔细检查后，我再也无法控制自己，立即与我的英语老师分享了这个消息。）Withoutherhelp, I would neverhavehad the chance to obtain the honor.My face lit up with joy as I accepted the award, my smile fill
16、ed with pride.I felt a burst of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging though me2.(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spiders web. Passing the
17、deserted house, I spotted the broken glass, which had been fixed perfectly. It reminded me of the hummingbird, the tiny cute creature._（在和主人聊了一会儿之后，我被告知她从那天起就再也没有回来过。）“Perhaps sheis enjoying the valuable freedom at this moment,”I said to myself. Hours later, the sun began to sink.3.(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段
18、)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.I still remembered my friends promise so I went past the abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken window. Tomy satisfaction, no other tiny creatures would meet this trouble any more. As I approached the farm, I
19、was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue, urging me to walk faster. We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere,_（享受着精致的美食，谈论着我们的有趣经历，唱着歌直到日落）. It was time for us to say goodbye so we went to the parking lot together.4.(2022年新高考I卷读后续写片段)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。We sat down next to each o
20、ther, but David wouldnt look at me.Tapping him gently on the shoulder, I asked David what had caused him to decide to give up the opportunity.1_ _（犹豫了一下，他低声回答：“你知道，我跑得很慢，而且我的跑步姿势很难看，这会让别人嘲笑我。”）2（我笑了笑，摇摇头说：“事实上，所有的人都尊重和钦佩那些克服自己的困难，勇敢地实现目标的人。”）“Really?”He seemed to be in doubt about my words. Seeing m
21、e nod firmly, he wore his big toothy smile again, his eyes sparkling with excitement and curiosity.5.(2021年新高考I卷读后续写片段)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。In the morning, as scheduled,1 （双胞胎早早起床，踮着脚走进厨房，从袋子里舀出面粉）Once they set about making bread，they felt confused. At that time，2 ，（他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道）“Don
22、t quit. You can overcome the challenge.” The twins made the bread smoothly. Then，3 （他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈）. With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mother was so content that she gathered her children into her arms.三、好题精练1.河北省金科大联考2023-2024学年高三10月联考读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。One d
23、ay, Sam was on his way to a nearby town when his car broke down in the middle of nowhere. He tried to fix it but couldnt figure out what was wrong. Just then, a middle-aged woman passing by saw him struggling and approached him. She asked if he needed help, and Sam felt relieved.The woman inspected
24、the car and found out that the engine had blown up. She told Sam that she knew a mechanic in the nearby town who could repair the car.The woman took Sam to the mechanic, and he got his car repaired. When Sam asked for the bill, he found that he left his wallet at home and didnt know what to do. The
25、mechanic told him that the middle-aged woman had already paid for it. Sam was surprised and didnt know how to repay her.However, the woman refused to accept any payment from him, simply smiling and saying,“You dont have to pay me back. Just promise me that youll pay it forward to someone else in nee
26、d when you can. ” Sam was touched by her kindness and accepted her help.Feeling grateful and inspired,Sam continued his trip to the town. Going through all these things, he felt a bit tired and stopped at a nearby caf to have a rest. When he was about to leave, he noticed that the waitress was pregn
27、ant(怀孕的)and struggling to carry a tray of food to a table. He sympathized with her very much and went to help her carry the food without hesitation.The waitress was surprised and thanked Sam for his friendliness. She asked him why he was being so kind to her, and he told her about the middle-aged wo
28、man who had helped him earlier and how he wanted to pay it forward.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When he arrived home, his wife asked him how his trip went._Sam felt proud of the chain of love that he had started, which had spread far and wide._2.2024届山东省滨州市新高考大联考高三10月月考读后续写阅读下面文章，根据其内容和所给段落开
29、头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整短文。Once upon a time there was a great man who married the woman of his dreams. With their love, they created a little girl. She was a bright and cheerful little girl and the great man loved her very much.When she was very little, he would pick her up, hum a tune and dance with her aro
30、und the room , and he would tell her, “I love you, little girl. ” When the little girl was growing up, the great man would hug her and tell her, “I love you, little girl. ” The little girl would pout and say , “Im not a little girl anymore. Then the man would laugh and say,“But to me, youll always b
31、e my little girl.”The little, girl who-was-not-little-anymore left her home and went into the world. As she learned more. about herself, she learned more about the man. She saw that he truly was great and strong, for now she recognized his strengths. One of his strengths was his ability to express h
32、is love to his family. It didnt matter where she went in the world. The man would call her and say,“I love you, little girl. ”The day came when the little girl who-was-not-little-anymore received a phone call. The great man was damaged.“He had had a stroke. He was aphasic,they explained to the girl.
33、 He couldnt talk anymore and they werent sure that he could understand the words spoken to him. He could no longer smile, laugh , walk , hug, dance or tell the little girl who-was-not-little-anymore that he loved her. And so she went to the side of the great man. When she walked into the room and sa
34、w him, he looked small and not strong at all. He looked at her and tried to speak, but he could not.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The little girl did what she had been longing to,_And then she heard from within the man, the beat of his heart._3.江苏省常州市联盟学校2024届高三10月学情调研读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语
35、续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Years ago, not long after graduating from school and starting my career in Denver, I set off on an exciting solo trip to reunite with an old friend. As I packed my car, little did I know that this adventure would unveil the remarkable bonds that can form between strangers, all spark
36、ed by the simple exchange of thank you.My journey commenced with a thrilling flight to Albuquerque, a vibrant city in New Mexico. My ultimate destination was Oklahoma City, where I looked forward to visiting a dear friend. The trip was relatively smooth, treating me to beautiful sights along the way
37、. While waiting in line to pay for gas, I struck up a friendly chat withan older couple who were also refueling their vehicle.Continuing my jourey with joy in my heart, dark, ominous smoke suddenly billowed from my cars rear.Panic gripped me as I hastily pulled over to the side of the road, unsure o
38、f our next steps. In an incredible twist offate, the same friendly couple from the gas station pulled up behind my car. With warm smiles and open hearts, they generously offered to drive me to my friends place in Oklahoma City. During the ride, we engaged in lively conversations, sharing stories and
39、 laughter as the miles passed by. Upon reaching our destination, the husband even handed me his business card as a gesture of goodwill and kindness.Appreciative of their unwavering help, I later expressed my gratitude through a heartfelt thank-you note. In response, they sent me a cherished Christma
40、s gift along with a touching note as well. As the years passed, lifethrew another curveball my way. On a fateful day, I drove to a nearby town for an important meeting.Unfortunately, in my haste, I accidentally left my cars lights on all day long. As dusk approached, I returned to my car, only to fi
41、nd that the battery had completely died. Thankfully, I noticed the Friendly Ford dealershipconveniently located next door. Filled with hope, I entered the showroom, where I encountered two helpfulsalesmen.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。In a lighthearted tone, I asked, Just how friendly is Friendly Ford?”_This heartwarming sequence of events serves as a reminder of the profound impact two simple words-Thank you -can have._
