1、 冯娟芸冯娟芸PS.要具体文本具体分析，不要要具体文本具体分析，不要生搬硬套生搬硬套!一、七三四法则一、七三四法则二、动作二、动作1.看2.笑3.哭4.说5.走6.跑7.跳三、情绪1.喜（1）高兴（2）兴奋（3）感动五五、主题升华归纳主题升华归纳1.助人类2.救人类3.动物类/环境类4.亲情类5.友情类6.成长类 （1）勇敢/决心 （2）梦想/努力 （3）真诚 （4）实践 （5）爱7.常见名言六、句型六、句型目录目录（4）满意（5）感激2.怒3.孤独、郁闷、忧伤4.惧5.愧疚6.紧张、焦虑7.后悔、遗憾8.惊讶四、过渡句七三四法则七三四法则七个七个“不不”1.不增加人物。不增加人物。2.不增加
2、旁支情节。不增加旁支情节。题目要求“考生根据所给情节进行续写”，旨在延续原材料的故事情节，并不是要发展新情节。3.不用过多对话。不用过多对话。在续写中展示对话,虽能丰富内容和语言,增强语篇的连贯性,但使用过多的对话,会显得篇幅累赘且很难在限定的词数里把整个后续的情节发展补充完整。4.不用负能量结局。不用负能量结局。5.不在文末设置悬念。不在文末设置悬念。6.不偏离原文主题。不偏离原文主题。7.不违背逻辑常理。不违背逻辑常理。情节和细节的想象要合理,符合生活常识及具有逻辑性。三个原则三个原则1.原文一致原则原文一致原则续写内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，保持时态一致、人物一致、事件一致及语言表达风格一
3、致。2.曲折性原则曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏或矛盾冲突，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。但情节设计不能过于复杂或离奇，否则阅卷老师便不能快速读懂你想表达的内容。3.正能量原则正能量原则：围绕“真善美”的大主题去设计情节，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。四个步骤四个步骤1.通读全文，理清脉络通读全文，理清脉络借助“5W+1H工具”提炼故事的六要素(时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果)，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件脉络。当中,需要特别留意故事里的人物、时态(通常是一般过去时)、事件(起因和经过)、故事的结构特点及语言特色，以便在续写时保持上下文一致。牢记一句口诀：人物时态和
4、事件，语言特色不要变。(1)读大意，抓中心主题把故事六要素结合起来，我们即可得知原文大意(2)读人物，找续写人物(3)读时态，选续写时态(4)读结构，辨划分方式弄清故事的结构特点及表现形式，选择合适的方式划分段落，常用的有4：以时空变化划分(指时间和地点)；以人物思想感情的变化来划分；按记叙内容的变化来划分；按描述角度的变化、事情发展的阶段来划分。(5)读语言，定风格特色挖掘文本语言表达风格，模仿原文语言写句子。使续写部分的语言风格与原文的风格相一致，以促进语言协同。此外，如果原文有较多对话,续写也可出现对话；如原文没有对话,尽量少用对话形式。2.抓住关键，构思框架抓住关键，构思框架紧记口诀：
5、两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量。即由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架；第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。3.增加细节，展开续写增加细节，展开续写在已定框架范围内，依据情节发展和生活常识，推断故事中人物所见、所闻、所思、所说、所做，选择性地加入多角度的细节性描写，增加故事的可信度、真实度和饱满度。动作动作-1.看看look 看（指注意或有意识地看）看（指注意或有意识地看）see 看（强调看的结果）看（强调看的结果）watch 观察；聚精会神地观察；聚精会神地看看glare at sb./sth.怒视怒视peek at 窥视；偷看窥视；偷看；“通过孔隙窥视通过孔隙窥视”ca
6、tch a glimpse of 瞥见瞥见glance at 瞥一眼；扫视瞥一眼；扫视gaze at凝视；注视凝视；注视stare at 盯着看盯着看eye sb.up and down 上下打量上下打量glance through 浏览浏览表示表示“看看”的词的词常用短语1.gaze at 凝视2.stare at 盯住3.glare at 怒目而视4.peep at 偷窥5.glimpse/glance at 瞥一眼 catch a glimpse of 瞥见6.blink at 朝眨眼7.look down upon 看不起8.browse the web page 浏览网页9.take
7、 a quick look 瞥见；匆匆一看10.ones eyes are wide with horror 某人惊恐地瞪大了眼睛11.ones eyes shine with excitement 某人眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒12.ones eyes fall on someplace 某人的目光落在13.look at sb.straight in the eye 直视某人的眼睛14.ones eyes fix on 某人的目光紧盯着动作动作2.笑笑smile微笑微笑laugh出声笑出声笑chuckle轻声笑轻声笑/tkl/giggle咯咯笑咯咯笑sneer讥讽地笑讥讽地笑 beam笑容满面笑
8、容满面 grin露齿笑露齿笑 2.笑笑(一一)微微一笑微微一笑 smile1.a big/broad/wide/bright smile 灿烂的灿烂的微笑微笑2.force/manage a smile 强作强作欢颜欢颜3.flash a bright smile 露出灿烂的露出灿烂的微笑微笑4.with a smile 微笑微笑着着5.smile shyly/bitterly 羞答答地微笑羞答答地微笑/苦笑苦笑6.smile at sb.朝某人朝某人微笑微笑7.smile from ear to ear 笑得合不拢笑得合不拢嘴嘴(二二)出声一笑出声一笑 laugh1.laugh at 嘲笑嘲
9、笑2.with a laugh 笑了一笑了一声声3.burst into laughter 突然突然大笑大笑4.laugh from ear to ear 笑得合不拢笑得合不拢嘴嘴5.explode with laughter 哄堂大笑哄堂大笑6.scream/roar with laughter 放声放声大笑大笑7.howl with laughter 狂笑狂笑动作动作3.哭泣哭泣1.Tears are running down her cheek like a river.眼泪从她脸颊上滑落，像一条小河。2.Tears burst into my eyes./Tears blurred m
10、y eyes.(泪水充满了我的眼睛。)/（泪水模糊了我的双眼。）3.When she went back home,sitting on a seat by the table,throwing her arms on it and burying her face in them,she started to cry stormily.当她一回到家，她就坐在了桌子旁边的凳子上，把胳膊放到桌子上，把脸埋进胳膊里，接着开始放生大哭。4.Burying his face in his hands,he tried to control his weeping.他用手捂着脸，努力控制自己的哭泣。（W
11、ith his face buried in his hands,he tried to control his weeping.）他将脸埋在手里，努力控制自己的哭泣。5.With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks,he hugged his mother tightly.感激的眼泪顺着脸颊淌下，他紧紧地拥抱他的妈妈。动作动作4.说说3种种形式形式1.提示语在前提示语在前:提示者提示动词提示者提示动词,“大写大写”Ausable explained,“Its not my balcony.It belongs to the next apar
12、tment.”2.提示语在中提示语在中:“,”小写提示者小写提示者(pron.)+提示动词提示动词,/.“小写大写小写大写.”“,”小写提示动词提示者小写提示动词提示者(n.),/.“小写大写小写大写.”“Yes,”he added,“and I would miss my dumplings and fatty pork.”“You were just looking,”contended Samantha.“I was the one doing all the work.”3.提示语在后提示语在后:“,”小写提示者小写提示者(pron.)+提示动词提示动词 “,”小写提示动词提示者小写提
13、示动词提示者(n.).“Oh,well,better luck next time,”she sighed.“Well,I do have to rest a lot,”admitted Yong Hui.注意：1.对话中的逗号，永远在引号里面。对话中的逗号，永远在引号里面。对话提示语对话提示语“某某说某某说”构成了整个句子的框架构成了整个句子的框架，它和它引用的部分是一个整体，是完整的一个句子。“It was as hard as a rock,”he said.He said,“It was as hard as a rock.”2.整个对话（引用部分整个对话（引用部分+对话提示语）完整的
14、时候，才能对话提示语）完整的时候，才能使用句号。使用句号。“There was a letter from Prince Andrew today,”he said to Princess Mary.“Havent you read it?”“I have a new umbrella,”explained Emily,“and I am excited to try it out.”轻声轻声说说Murmur/Mutter (喃喃自语)多指别人不易听到的低语。Gossip (小声地悄悄地传开,八卦)Moan/complain(抱怨着说）Mumble/grunt (咕哝）Comfort 安慰说w
15、hisper v.耳边轻语大声说大声说Call 喊叫 Cry 叫喊Shout 呼喊 Scream惊吓地尖叫Yell 喊叫着说 Roar 咆哮Growl 低沉的怒吼 exclaim 惊叫建议说建议说Advise/propose/suggest/offer/recommend建议Argue 认为Caution/Warn 警告权威说权威说Announce/declare宣布 Claim/state声称Order命令问与答问与答Ask/inquire/enquire 询问 reply/answer/respond 回答结巴地说结巴地说Stammer/stutter/stumble 结结巴巴地说其他其他
16、“说说”add补充说道=continue继续说道retort反驳道 explain解释道state陈述道 protest抗议道sob哭诉道 agree同意道comfort安慰道 promise承诺道assure保证道 insist坚持说repeat v.重复地说 gasp 气喘吁吁地说chorus 齐声说utter v.讲；发出（声音）He uttered a snorting laugh.他嗤笑了一声。高级词块高级词块with a smile 笑着 with absolute certainty 斩钉截铁地with false enthusiasm 故作热情地with great serio
17、usness 特别严肃地with sudden resolution 突然坚决地speak with passion 充满激情地说 in a low tone/voice 低声地in a soft/gentle/mild tone 用温柔的语气说in a soft voice 以温柔的口吻in an excited/angry voice 以兴奋/生气的口吻in a whisper 低声说 in surprise 惊奇地through gritted teeth 咬牙切齿地mutter between teeth 低声含糊地说 roar with laughter 大笑着说let out a
18、scream of horror 发出恐惧的尖叫words of comfort 安慰的话utter a cry of joy/grief 发出快乐/悲痛的叫声动作动作5.走走1、轻轻地走、轻轻地走creep “蹑行蹑行”指蹑手蹑脚地走、轻手轻脚地指蹑手蹑脚地走、轻手轻脚地走走We took off our shoes and crept cautiously along the passage.我们脱掉了鞋，在走廊中蹑手蹑脚地往前走。tiptoe“踮着脚尖走踮着脚尖走”She tiptoed to the bedside of the sleeping child.她踮着脚尖轻轻地走到熟睡的
19、孩子床边。slip“溜溜”指趁人不注意悄悄溜进去。指趁人不注意悄悄溜进去。She slipped into the room when no one was looking.她趁无人注意悄悄溜进房间。2、沉重地走、沉重地走plod“沉重行走沉重行走”，指步子缓慢，脚步沉重地，指步子缓慢，脚步沉重地行走行走Despite the wind and the rain,we plodded on until they reached destination.尽管大风大雨，我们缓步前行，直到到达目的地。shamble指由于疲倦或身体虚弱而迈不开步，拖着脚步指由于疲倦或身体虚弱而迈不开步，拖着脚步行走行
20、走Sick patients shambled along the hospital corridors.病人在医院走廊里一拖一拖地行走。3、蹒跚地走、蹒跚地走hobble“蹒跚蹒跚”、“跛行跛行”指一瘸一拐地指一瘸一拐地走走We were hobbled through the rugged depression.我们深一脚浅一脚地穿过了那块高低不平的洼地。limp“跛行跛行”，指一拐一拐地走、缓慢费力地前，指一拐一拐地走、缓慢费力地前走走He had to limp off with a leg injury.他腿上有伤，离开时只能一瘸一拐地走。stagger“蹒跚而行蹒跚而行”，指一跌一
21、撞、东倒西歪地向前，指一跌一撞、东倒西歪地向前行走行走I saw a drunken man saw staggering up the street.我看到一个醉汉在街上蹒跚而行。4.trek 长途跋涉长途跋涉We spent five days trekking through forests and over mountains and finally reached the destination.我们花了五天时间穿过森林，翻过高山，终于到达目的地5.trudge 艰难的行走或负重行走艰难的行走或负重行走We trudged home through deep snow.我们踏着很深的
22、积雪，吃力地走回家。6.wade 在比较浅的水中趟水行走在比较浅的水中趟水行走He wades down a shallow pebbly stream to school every day.他每天要沿着一条浅的有卵石的小溪跋涉到学校。7.东倒西歪地向前行走东倒西歪地向前行走 staggerI saw a drunken man saw staggering up the street.我看到一个醉汉在街上蹒跚而行。8.其它的其它的“走走”Shuffle拖步走Crawl 手足并用地在地上爬行meander迂回地走march行军pace踱步走She paced the floor,waitin
23、g for the phone to ring.她踱来踱去，等着电话铃响。stroll散步漫步prowl潜行 He prowled the alleys of the city after dark.天黑后他在城市的巷子里游荡。动作动作6.跑跑rundash 急奔；急驰；猛冲急奔；急驰；猛冲=rushI must dash,Im late.我得赶紧走，来不及了。She dashed off to keep an appointment.她急匆匆地赶去赴约。jog 慢跑，慢步长跑（尤指锻炼）慢跑，慢步长跑（尤指锻炼）chase 追赶；追逐；追捕追赶；追逐；追捕The kids chased ea
24、ch other around the kitchen table.孩子们围着厨房的桌子相互追逐嬉戏。skip 蹦蹦跳跳地走蹦蹦跳跳地走She skipped happily along beside me.她连蹦带跳，高高兴兴地跟着我走。bound 跳跃着跑跳跃着跑The dogs bounded ahead.那些狗在前面蹦蹦跳跳地跑。storm into sp./out of sp./off 气呼呼地疾走；闯；冲气呼呼地疾走；闯；冲She stormed into my office waving a newspaper.她挥舞着一张报纸怒气冲冲地闯进我的办公室。He burst into
25、 tears and stormed off.他突然大哭起来，气呼呼地跑了。常用短语常用短语sneak out of the house偷偷溜出give a jump in the air 跳到空中（表示开心）jump to ones feet 跳起来（表示震惊）make a running step back 跑着后退dash back 冲回pace restlessly/aimlessly 不安地/无目的地走动 start to ones feet 站起来1.hop on vi.跳上下；单足蹦跳；齐足（或双足）跳行；摘葎草花 vt.跃过；登上（飞机、汽车、火车等）；在跳来跳去；加啤酒花于2
26、.Jump in3.bounce off v.（使）弹起；反射；蹦跳，上下晃动；试探；与探讨n.弹跳；弹性；活力；反弹4.skip over 跳过，略过5.leap across 跨越6.skip through 跳着穿过，大致浏览7.spring onto 跳上8.vault over vt.进行撑竿跳；做成圆拱形；成穹状；（以手撑物或撑竿）跳过vi.跳跃；成穹状弯曲9.hurdle through 跳过10.launch into （使）在（水）中漂浮；使下水；发射上天；（使）开始从事11.propel over vt.推进；推动；驱动；驱使12.catapult off 弹射13.dan
27、ce over 跳过，忽略14.skip along 欢快地跳着走15.bounce around 跳来跳去动作动作7.跳跳三、三、情绪情绪 1.喜喜（1）高兴）高兴dance,whistle,jump/leap with joy,feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy,be overcome with happiness/delight/joy,(ones eyes)twinkle,(ones heart)beat/pound wildly,be in high spirits 情绪高涨情绪高涨;be in cheerful；spirits 心情愉快心情愉
28、快 adj.happy,delighted,overjoyed,wild with joy 狂喜狂喜1.He was happy/delighted/full of joy/all smiles.他开心得满面笑容。2.His face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room.他眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间。3.We were very pleased to hear this encouraging news.听到这个令人鼓舞的消息,我们十分高兴。4.His face lit up with pleasure.他面露喜色。5.She was in ch
29、eerful spirits and grinned from ear to ear.他们兴高采烈，笑得合不拢嘴。6.They didnt know what to do with themselves for joy.他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。7.Laughter lingered around the whole room.笑声在整个房间回荡。8.She had a big smile on her face,and her heart was sweeter than honey.她脸上有个大大的微笑，她的心比蜂蜜都甜。（2）激动）激动excited,thrilled,with exci
30、tement1.She felt thrilled./She was wild with excitement.她非常激动。2.She couldnt contain her excitement and danced/jumped for joy.她无法抑制自己的兴奋,高兴得手舞足蹈。3.Her eyes twinkled with excitement.她激动得两眼放光。4.Her eyes were shining and her heart was thundering with excitement.她两眼放光心激动得怦怦跳。5.Her eyes were sparkling lik
31、e diamonds at the good news.听到这个好消息,她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。6.A wide excitement seized/took hold of her.她兴奋得不能自已。7.They were full of/filled with excitement at the thought of meeting a real movie star.想到要见一位真正的电影明星,他们就满心激动。（3）爱、幸福与感动）爱、幸福与感动moved,touched,moving,touchinga tender hug 温柔的拥抱give sb.a long loving h
32、ug给某人一个长久地爱的拥抱Tears of happiness flowed don her cheeks.幸福的泪水顺着她的脸流了下来。She gathered the child in her arms and held him close.她把孩子揽入怀里，紧紧地抱住他。She was overflowing with happiness.她觉得幸福满满。A delicious sweetness welled up in her heart.一种美妙的甜蜜涌上她的心头。（4）满意满意satisfied,content,satisfying,be pleased with1.There
33、 is always a smile of contentment on her face.她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。2.Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction.看到任务完成了,他们感到很满意。3.Im pleased with the way things have been going.我很满意事情的进展。4.He glanced at her with a pleased smile.他面带满意的笑容瞥了她一眼。5.Lucys face wore a satisfied expression.露西一脸
34、的心满意足。（5）感激）感激appreciative adj.感激的感激的 grateful adj.感激的感激的thankful adj.感谢的感谢的 gratefulness n.感激之情感激之情thankfulness n.感恩之情感恩之情 impassioned adj.激昂的激昂的gratitude n.感恩之感恩之情情 touched adj.受感动的受感动的 be grateful beyond words 无法言表的感激无法言表的感激be overwhelmed with gratitude 感激不已感激不已be filled with appreciation 充满感激充满感
35、激tremendously grateful 非常感激非常感激be deeply moved 深受感动深受感动be grateful from the bottom of one s heart 某人由衷感激某人由衷感激be filled with immense gratitude 饱含无尽感激饱含无尽感激be inspired beyond words 受到难以言喻的鼓舞受到难以言喻的鼓舞gratitude from the depths of ones soul 发自某人心灵深处的感激发自某人心灵深处的感激be moved to tears 感动得落泪感动得落泪be grateful f
36、or the kindness 对好意心怀感激对好意心怀感激immensely thankful 极度感激极度感激be truly touched 被真实地打动被真实地打动be thankful from the depths of ones heart 衷心感激衷心感激I cannot express how grateful and thrilled I am to receive this incredible opportunity.我无法表达我有多么感激和兴奋能够得到这个不可思议的机会。My heart is filled with immense appreciation and
37、excitement for all the support and kindness I have received.我的心中充满了无尽的感激和兴奋，因为我收到了如此多的支持和善意。Words fail to describe the overwhelming joy and gratitude I feel in this moment.言语无法表达我此刻无比喜悦和感激的心情。I am bursting with happiness and excitement,jumping for joy at this wonderful news.我满怀幸福和激动，听到这个极好的消息后高兴地跳跃着
38、。With a wide smile and tears of gratitude in my eyes,I can hardly contain the excitement coursing through my veins.带着灿烂的笑容和眼中感激的泪水，我几乎无法抑制流淌在我血管里的兴奋。With tears of joy and gratitude streaming down my face,I realize how blessed I am to have such amazing people in my life.当喜悦和感激的泪水流过我的脸颊，我意识到我有多么幸运，能在我
39、的生活中有这样美妙的人。2.愤怒愤怒feel/get angry,feel a burst of anger(rage),storm out of/into/off,storm(say angrily),lose ones temper 发脾气，发脾气，clasp ones hands,be seized by anger/annoyanceShe looked at him with eyes flashing angrily.她愤怒地看着他。He was seized by anger that he stormed out of the room,slamming the door fu
40、riously behind him.他怒气冲冲地冲出房间,狠狠地摔门而去。He ran out of the room in a burst of anger.他怒气冲冲地跑出了房间。His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。His eyes were shining with anger,and his voice trembled with anger.他的双眼闪着愤怒的光芒,他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。His face was a mask of fury,the muscles in his jaw clenched so tightly they seeme
41、d ready to snap.他的脸是愤怒的面具，下巴的肌肉绷得如此紧，似乎快要断裂。The room seemed to pulse with his anger,the very air charged with an electric tension that was almost tangible.房间似乎随着他的愤怒而跳动，空气中充满了几乎可以触摸到的电流般的紧张感。3.孤独孤独、郁闷、忧伤、郁闷、忧伤名词名词 sorrow sadness despair loneliness grief动词动词 upset darken frown 形容词形容词 alone bitter lon
42、ely deserted sad sorrowful speechless upset despairingpitiful self-pitying miserable副词副词sadly 词块词块feel a surge of sadness感到一阵悲伤感到一阵悲伤ones heart ache 心痛心痛be overcome with sadness 悲伤不已悲伤不已bite ones tongue/lip 忍住不说忍住不说drag ones feet 行动缓慢，拖着脚步行动缓慢，拖着脚步sadness surge within sb.心中涌起心中涌起悲伤悲伤His heart felt h
43、eavy,burdened by the weight of disappointment and the sharp edge of regret.他的心感觉沉重，被失望的重压和后悔的利刃所困扰。I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。It was a time of great sorrow.这是一个非常悲伤的时刻。.Words cannot express my sorrow.言语无法表达我的哀伤。Charles was overcome with grief.查尔斯悲痛欲绝。He shook his
44、head sadly and sighed.他难过地摇摇头，叹了一口气。Numb with grief,she became speechless.她因悲伤而麻木，说不出话。Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip.蒂娜闭上双眼，咬了咬嘴唇。His chin quivered and a tear ran down his cheek.他下巴颤抖着，一颗泪珠从面颊上滑落。The boy stood there,Lowering his head and biting his tongue.那个男孩站在那里，低着头，一言不发。I stood ther
45、e with a lump in my throat and tried to fight back tears.我站在那里，喉咙哽塞，拼命想止住眼泪His heart was torn with despair.他的心因绝望而被撕裂了。Her heart was heavy with a sense of loss.她怅然若失，心情沉重。His words were daggers,sharp and cutting,each sentence a well-aimed strike that left no room for retreat.他的话语像匕首一样锋利，每个句子都是精心瞄准的打
46、击，让人无处可退。4.惧惧frightened,panicked,scared,speechless,In(a)panic,in a cold sweat,be full of fear,be filled with terror,be rooted to the spot,freeze,run away,flee,ones knees feel weak,(hands)sweatHis heart was pounding,as if he were frightened.他的心怦怦跳,似乎被吓坏了。I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at
47、my fathers cloudy face.我胆怯地低着头,不敢看爸爸那张阴云密布的脸。My mind is blank.I just want to leave this horrible place.我大脑一片空白,只想离开这个恐怖的地方。I was scared to death with eyes full of horror.我被吓得要死,眼睛里充满了恐惧。I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.我害怕得嗓子发紧,膝盖发软。I froze with terror,too scared to m
48、ove an inch我吓呆了,不敢动弹。I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.我被深深的恐惧感所控制,手心出汗。The horrible scene made my blood run cold and struck fear into my heart.那可怕的场面使我毛骨悚然,胆战心惊。I shook all over in a cold sweat.我冒冷汗,直哆嗦。He turned to me,with his eyes full of horror.他转向我,眼里充满了恐惧。Her
49、face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied她脸色苍白,站在那里说不出话来。She shook all over,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身发抖,觉得如坐针毡。A flood of fear welled up in me.一阵恐惧涌上我的心头。I was sick with fear,but the thought of the consequences urged me on.我吓得要死,但一想到后果,我就只有往前。I didnt have the nerve to move an i
50、nch and I was shaking like I had rubber bones.我一动不敢动,浑身发软。A terrible fear took hold of/seized me./Fear slowly(quickly)crept upon me.恐惧爬上我的心头。The horrible scene just made my hair stand on end.可怕的场面令我毛骨悚然。Fear was a dark cloud that loomed over her,casting a shadow on her every step.恐惧就像一片笼罩在她头上的乌云，给她的
