1、英语高考读后续写如何刻画人物高考英语作文的“读后续写”部分，要求考生根据短文内容，进行续写，并运用恰当的语言描写人物的动作和心理状态。1. Action Description（动作描述）Tips写作技巧1：动作表达情感（Action expresses emotion）Avoid vague verbs, use specific and vivid verbs to describe actions.(避免使用模糊的动词，要使用具体而生动的动词来描述动作。)普通表达:He walked into the room.出彩表达:He strode into the room, his face
2、 etched with determination.（他大步走进房间，脸上写满了决心。）出彩表达:She stormed out of the room, furious with her brother.她怒气冲冲地冲出房间，生她哥哥的气。More Examples：She flung her arms around him .她张开双臂搂住他。(她紧紧地抱住他，表达了爱意和激动。)He slammed the door shut .他砰地关上了门。(他粗暴地关上门，表达了愤怒和失望。)She smiled warmly at him.她热情地对他微笑。(表达了友好和温暖。)Tips写作技
3、巧2:Describe the details of the action to reveal the characters personality, state, and emotions.（描述行动的细节来揭示角色的个性、状态和情感。）普通表达: She was angry.出彩表达:Her fists clenched, her eyes narrowed, and a vein pulsed in her forehead.（她握紧拳头，眯起眼睛，额头上有一根血管在跳动。）Tips写作技巧3:Combine the characters action with the surround
4、ing environment for a more vivid portrayal.（将人物的动作与周围的环境结合起来，使人物的形象更加生动。）普通表达:He sat on the bench.出彩表达: He slumped onto the bench, his shoulders heavy with despair, as the rain poured down around him.（他瘫倒在长凳上，绝望地压着他的肩膀，大雨倾盆而下。）2. Psychological Description（心理描述）Tips写作技巧4:Internal Monologue 内心独白:Use t
5、he characters inner thoughts to directly express their feelings, ideas, and intentions.用角色的内心想法直接表达他们的感受、想法和意图。出彩表达:What am I going to do? she thought, her heart pounding in her chest. How can I possibly face him?“我该怎么办呢?”她心里想，心怦怦直跳。“我怎么可能面对他?”More Examples：She was overjoyed when she heard the news.
6、当她听到这个消息时，她欣喜若狂。(她听到消息后非常高兴。)He was devastated by the loss.损失使他悲痛欲绝。(他因失去而深感悲伤。)They were inseparable during the vacation.假期里他们形影不离。(他们在度假期间非常亲密。)Tips写作技巧5:Expression and Body Language表情和肢体语言:Use descriptions of facial expressions and body language to indirectly reveal the characters inner state.使用面
7、部表情和肢体语言的描述来间接地揭示角色的内心状态。出彩表达: A flicker of fear crossed his face, and he nervously twisted his wedding ring.一丝恐惧掠过他的脸，他紧张地扭动着他的结婚戒指。出彩表达:Her eyes welled up with tears as she listened to the news (当她听到这个消息时，泪水夺眶而出).More Examples：He crossed his arms, indicating he was defensive.(他交叉双臂，表明他是防御性的。)She l
8、ooked away, showing she was embarrassed .(她避开视线，表明她是尴尬的。)He leaned in, showing he was interested. (他探过身来，表明他是有兴趣的。)Tips写作技巧6:Psychological Activities心理活动:Describe the characters mental processes, such as thoughts, memories, and fantasies, to delve deeper into their psychological world.描述人物的心理过程，如思想、
9、记忆和幻想，以深入挖掘他们的心理世界。出彩表达: Memories of their laughter and shared dreams flooded her mind, bringing a bittersweet ache to her heart.他们的欢笑和共同的梦想充斥着她的脑海，给她的心带来了苦乐参半的痛苦。High-Scoring Sentence Structures高分句型1. Parallel Structure平行结构:Emphasize the coexistence of action and psychological state, adding layers
10、to the description.强调动作与心理状态的共存，使描写有层次。Example:He clenched his fists, his heart pounding with a mixture of anger and fear.他握紧拳头，又气又怕，心怦怦直跳。2. Contrast对比:Highlight the complexity and change in the characters psychology, creating dramatic tension.突出人物心理的复杂性和变化，营造戏剧张力。Example:Though a smile played on h
11、is lips, a deep sadness lingered in his eyes.虽然他的嘴唇上挂着微笑，但他的眼睛里却闪烁着深深的悲伤。3. Metaphor隐喻: Use figurative language to personify the characters emotions, making the description more vivid and impactful.用形象化的语言将人物的情感拟人化，使描写更加生动有力。Example:His hope, once a bright flame, flickered and dimmed with each passi
12、ng day.他的希望，曾经是一束明亮的火焰，随着时间的流逝而闪烁和暗淡。More Examples：Her heartsank like a stone in the ocean.她的心像大海里的一块石头一样沉了下去。Her sorrow was a heavy fog that shrouded the city悲伤像城市的浓雾笼罩着她。He was a stormy sea, turbulent and unpredictable .他是惊涛骇浪的大海，波涛汹涌，变幻莫测。(他像暴风雨一样，动荡和不可预测)She was a ray of sunshine, brightening up the day .她是一缕阳光，照亮了这一天。He was a rock, solid and unshakeable.他坚如磐石，不可动摇。(他像岩石一样，坚固和不可动摇)
