1、02续写练习：母亲的疤痕阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Rajus family was the smallest family on the coastal line of Kanyakumari. Raju was 10 years old. He was tall, dark and handsome and had a lot of dreams. He had always dreamt of living in a city. He was always his dads charm, as he was not quite happy t
2、o spend time with his mom. All he could remember about his mom was her scars, red and white scars on her face, neck and hands. He always felt unpleasant to see his moms face. But what he did not know was that his mom scratched her beauty to save him from a fire when he was one year old. Not wanting
3、to burden him with it, Rajus parents kept it a secret.His mom Kamala used to drop him to school and pick him up every day. He felt awkward to see his mom with that scarred face standing in front of the school gate. As he was laughing and chatting with his fellow school mates, all of them became sile
4、nt and started staring at the gate. So, Raju turned towards the gate with a lot of curiosity. He froze when seeing his mom, face covered with a piece of cloth. Raju felt ashamed and rushed out of the school with lots of anger.With days passing by, Raju started to dislike his mom more. He did not lik
5、e to get picked up or dropped by his mom. He felt that she was ugly and so abnormal. As he grew old, he stopped going out with her to the market or anywhere outside. Kamala tried her best to make her son happy, got him everything that he wanted and gave him his space. She understood what her son was
6、 going through and felt pity for herself and sad for her son, as she was helpless.When Raju turned 15, he was sent to a city high school 67 kilometers away from his coastal village. The very thought of not being with his ugly mother made him very happy.Three years later, then came Rajus graduation c
7、eremony. His parents didnt want to be absent from such an important occasion, so they managed to be there without informing Raju.注意：1. 续写词数应为 150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。Para1:Raju was shocked when seeing his parents arrive at the ceremony hall._Para2:Hesitating for a moment, Rajus father told him ev
8、erything that happened many years ago._文章大意文章讲述了一个名叫Raju的10岁男孩的故事，他梦想着生活在城市中，但对母亲Kamala的疤痕感到羞愧。这些疤痕是母亲在火灾中救他时留下的，但Raju并不知情。随着年龄的增长，他对母亲的厌恶加深，直到15岁时他被送到离家67公里的城市高中。三年后，Raju的毕业典礼上，他的父母未通知他就来到了现场。续写中，Raju最初对父母的出现感到震惊和尴尬，但在父亲的解释下，他了解到了母亲疤痕背后的故事母亲为了救他而牺牲了自己的容貌。这个真相让Raju感到羞愧和感激，他开始重新评价母亲，意识到真正的美丽在于爱和牺牲，而不
9、仅仅是外表。原文中有几处伏笔，为续写部分提供了铺垫：1. Raju对母亲的厌恶：Raju不喜欢母亲送他上学，也不喜欢和她一起外出，这为续写中他的内心冲突和转变埋下了伏笔。2. 母亲的疤痕：文章反复提到母亲的疤痕，这是Raju厌恶的焦点，也是续写中揭示真相的关键。3. Raju的毕业典礼：提到Raju的毕业典礼，暗示了这是一个重要的时刻，可能会有重要的事件发生。4. 父母未通知Raju就来到典礼：这一点为续写中Raju的震惊和随后的情感转变提供了背景。在续写中，这些伏笔得到了回应：1. Raju的震惊：续写中Raju对父母出现在典礼上的震惊是对原文中他与母亲关系的紧张和厌恶的直接回应。2. 母亲
10、的疤痕：续写中揭示了疤痕背后的故事，解释了母亲为何有疤痕，这是对原文中Raju对母亲外貌的厌恶的反转。3. Raju的内心冲突：续写中Raju的内心冲突和最终的转变是对原文中他与母亲关系的紧张和他对城市生活的向往的回应。4. 父母的出现：续写中父母的出现和随后的解释为Raju提供了一个重新评估母亲的机会，这是对原文中Raju对母亲缺乏了解的回应。5. Raju的转变：续写中Raju的转变和对母亲的新认识是对原文中他因为母亲的外貌而感到羞愧的反转。6. 真相的揭示：续写中父亲向Raju揭示了多年前的真相，这是对原文中Raju对母亲疤痕的误解和厌恶的直接回应。这些回应不仅解决了原文中的伏笔，也为R
11、aju的角色发展和故事的情感深度提供了丰富的内容。续写要点Para1: 看到父母出现在毕业典礼上，Raju的第一反应是震惊和尴尬，尤其是当他注意到同学们对他母亲疤痕的反应时。然而，当他的父亲开始讲述火灾的故事和他母亲的英雄行为时，Raju的视角开始转变。他意识到了母亲深沉的爱和她为他所做的牺牲。Para2: 当Raju聆听父亲讲述的往事时，他经历了深刻的情感转变。曾经让他感到羞愧的疤痕现在成为了母亲勇敢和无私的象征。他拥抱了母亲，承认她的疤痕是她爱的证明。这一刻标志着Raju人生的转折点，他学会了欣赏真正的美丽含义和母子之间不可分割的纽带。【范文】Having walked up to the
12、m, Raju managed a smile/forced a strained smileand greeted his father, totally ignoring his mother, whose face was covered with a piece of cloth again.However, when Raju heard some students whispering about his mothers face with curiosity, a mixture of embarrassment and anger overwhelmed him. “You h
13、ave ruined my graduation ceremony!” said Raju, biting his teeth and giving his mother a furious look. Boiling with rage, Raju seized his mums arm and pushed her hard, attempting to drive her out of the hall. Struggling to stand still, his mum hung down her head, endeavoring to hold back tearssobbed,
14、 hiding her face in her hands.Upon hearing the unexpected fact, Raju was numb with shock, utterly speechless.With scenes of hurting his mum emerging in his mind,so regretful about his previous behaviour was Raju that tears of guilt filled his eyes. He reached out his hands to touch those scars on Mu
15、ms face cautiously and tenderly, murmuring “sorry” again and again. He could hardly imagine the amount of pain his mother had gone through physically and mentally owing to him. Mum raised her head, looked straight into her sons eyes and slowly showed a relieved smile. Gazing at mums face, Raju event
16、ually realized the sacrifice she made for him and threw himself into mums arms.下水文1Para1: Raju was shocked when seeing his parents arrive at the ceremony hall. His eyes widened as he saw his mother, her face still marred by the scars that had always made him feel uncomfortable. He had never expected
17、 them to come, especially not his mother. His friends were staring, and he felt a rush of embarrassment. But this time, instead of running away, something inside him made him stand still. He watched as his parents made their way towards him, their faces beaming with pride. His mothers eyes, though s
18、urrounded by the scars, shone with love and anticipation. In that moment, Raju felt a strange mix of emotions shame, anger, but also a flicker of curiosity about the woman who had borne him.Para2: Hesitating for a moment, Rajus father told him everything that happened many years ago. He spoke softly
19、, his voice filled with a mix of sadness and pride. He told Raju about the fire, about how his mother had risked her life to save him, and about the choice they had made to keep it a secret to protect him. As Raju listened, a wave of realization washed over him. The scars that he had always seen as
20、a source of shame were, in fact, badges of his mothers love and sacrifice. His heart filled with a newfound respect and gratitude. He looked at his mother, really looked at her for perhaps the first time, and saw not just the scars but the strength and courage they represented. In that instant, Raju
21、s world shifted, and he understood that beauty was not just skin deep, but also in the heart and the actions of those who loved him.下水文2Para1: Raju was shocked when seeing his parents arrive at the ceremony hall. His heart pounded as he watched them navigate through the crowd, his mothers face still
22、 partially covered, yet her eyes filled with warmth and anticipation. The whispers and stares from his classmates were like needles, pricking at his conscience. But this time, instead of retreating into his shell, Raju felt a surge of courage. He stepped forward, his gaze locked onto his mothers, an
23、d as he did, he saw past the scars to the woman who had given him life. The realization hit him like a wave, and with each step towards his parents, the years of misunderstanding and shame began to crumble.Para2: Hesitating for a moment, Rajus father told him everything that happened many years ago.
24、 His voice trembled as he recounted the harrowing tale of the fire and Kamalas selfless act. The words hung in the air, heavy with the weight of a truth long concealed. Rajus eyes welled up with tears as the narrative unfolded, painting a picture of a mothers love that transcended physical appearanc
25、e. His mothers scars, once a source of estrangement, now stood as a testament to her bravery. In that moment, Rajus perspective shifted, and he understood that true beauty lay in the sacrifices made for those we hold dear. He embraced his mother, the embrace of a son who finally saw his mother not for her scars, but for the love that had shaped his life.
