1、 1.He stood rooted to the spot 2.my mind went blank 3.He shed tears of sorrow.4.droop/lower ones head 5.my palms sweated 6.My legs trembled 7.my throat tightened 8.my heart was sinking 9.I dragged my feet into the room 10.Her eyes twinkled with joy 11.He wore a broad smile 12 He sprang to his feet w
2、ith joy 13.His heart pounded wildly 14.with butterflies in his stomach 15.He felt like sitting on pins and needles 他站在原地一动不动 我大脑一片空白 他流下了伤心的眼泪 低下了头 我手心出汗 我的腿颤抖着 我喉咙都发紧 我情绪低落 我拖着沉重的腿走进房间 他眼睛闪烁着喜悦的光芒 他露出了灿烂的笑容 他高兴地跳起来 她的心跳地很快 他的心七上八下 他如坐针毡 16.pace back and forth restlessly 17 clench his fist 18.His kn
3、ees felt weak 19.He stamped his feet in anger 20 force a smile 21 storm out of the house 22.He slammed the door heavily 23 she patted his shoulder gently 24.She stroked the his hair 25 He scratched his head 26.His eyes danced with joy and sweetness 27 He stormed out of the room in a huff 不安地走来走去 握紧拳
4、头 他双膝发软 他生气地跺脚 强颜欢笑 冲出房间 他重重地摔门 她轻轻地拍他的 肩膀 她轻轻地摸着他的头发 他挠了挠头 他的眼睛闪烁着喜悦的光芒 他气呼呼地冲出了房间 Continuation Writing-读后续写微技能 之情感描写How did you feel while watching it?excited/thrilled/breathless/cheerful How did Ren Ziwei feel when he came first?A joyful expression flashed over his face.He was overjoyed.He waved
5、to the crowd and shed tears.How can we describe a persons emotion?直接情感描写：直接描述直接描述人物的人物的面部表情面部表情或或 内心情感内心情感。Direct emotional description 直接情感描写间接情感描写：通过描述通过描述头、眼、手、脚、头、眼、手、脚、心心等等肢体动作肢体动作烘托人物的情感烘托人物的情感。How can we make our emotions sensible or vivid?Objectives(目标目标):To learn to appreciate the vividness
6、 of emotional description;To learn how to give vivid description of emotions;To learn to describe emotions based on situations;To arouse interest in English writing.What kind of decription is used here?Which expressions are more vivid(生动的)and sensible to you.Why?1.a)Seeing Chinese athletes were ahea
7、d,I was very happy.b)Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead,I was floating in an ocean of happiness.2.a)A sense of tension took hold of me when the Hungarian athlete got ahead.b)I became tense when the Hungarian athlete got ahead.3.a)A delighted expression flashed over Ren when he came first.b)Ren was o
8、verjoyed when he came first.Direct emotional description 直接情感描写Which expressions are more vivid(生动的)and sensible to you.Why?1.a)Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead,I was very happy.b)Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead,I was floating in an ocean of happiness.exaggaration 夸张the strong sense of emotionW
9、hich expressions are more vivid(生动的)and sensible to you.Why?2.a)A sense of tension took hold of me when the German athlete got ahead.b)I became tense when the German athlete got ahead.personification 拟人化 make it sensibleWhich expressions are more vivid(生动的)and sensible to you.Why?3.a)A delighted exp
10、ression flashed over Ren when he came first.b)Ren was overjoyed when he came first.dynamic verbs 动感的动词 vividly show the change of peoples emotion1.a)Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead,I was very happy.b)Seeing Chinese athletes were ahead,I was floating in an ocean of happiness.2.a)A sense of tension
11、 took hold of me when the Hungarian athlete got ahead.b)I became tense when the Hungarian athlete got ahead.3.a)A delighted expression flashed over Ren when he came first.b)Ren was overjoyed when he came first.总结总结1直接情感描写生动形象的方法：可以通过拟人、夸张等修辞手法或富有动感的动词，直接向读者展示人物内心情感的强弱变化，生动形象，富有动感，更易于打动读者。Use the exp
12、ressions below to describe how you feel about the exam.e.g.1)Before the exam,_2)_ _ because the exam was approaching.直接情感描写常用的表达：常用的表达：1)Sb was floating in an ocean of+情感名词 was overcome with .被.征服 was seized/overwhelmed by .被控制/侵袭 2)(A surge/sense/ripple of)+情感名词 +took hold of sb +almost drowned sb
13、几乎淹没.+crept on sb 爬上心头3)A+情感形容词+expression flashed/spread over ones face.掠过,浮现4）much to ones+情感名词，sb.令某人非常.5)What+情感（动词）+sb.was that 从句 让某人.的是.I was seized by a sense of anxiety.I was floating in an ocean of anxietyA surge of anxity crept on me 校本 p89Exploration2 1.1.Which one shows Ren Ziweis emoti
14、on(情感情感)better?Why?a)Ren waved to the crowd and shed(流泪）流泪）tears when he came first.b)Ren Ziwei was overjoyed when he came first.总结总结2间接情感描写生动形象的方法 可以通过人物的_，如 头、手、脚、眼、嘴、舌、手、脚、眼、嘴、舌、头、心、胃、呼吸头、心、胃、呼吸等_的的描写，栩栩如生地向读者展现人物的形象。肢体语言身体动作Practice 通过人物的通过人物的肢体语言，如，如 头、头、手、脚、眼、嘴、舌、头、心、手、脚、眼、嘴、舌、头、心、胃、呼吸胃、呼吸等等身体
15、动作身体动作的描写的描写 表达情感表达情感 （预习案（预习案 Ex 2)e.g 1)他很害怕：At the sight of the wolf,he _ 2)他很开心：When he was informed that he got the chance to sing in the contest,he_ 3)他很伤心：When hearing he lost the game,he_ 4)他很愤怒 When his sister refused his request for shoveling the snow together again,he _ 5)他很惊讶 When he fou
16、nd behind his friend crept a snake,_ 6)他很紧张，焦虑 Knowing that the result would be annouced,_ Practice:Try to add emotion,facial expression and body movement to make the following description more vivid.e.g 1)他很害怕：At the sight of the wolf,he _At the sight of the wolf,he was seized by a strong sense of
17、horror and my palms were sweating At the sight of the wolf,he was rooted/stood rooted to the spot.(吓得钉在地上/无法动弹)。felt so scared that my throat tightened and I felt weak in the knees.(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)2)他很开心：When he was informed that he got the chance to sing in the contest,_ When he was informed that he got
18、 the chance to sing in the contest,_ When he was informed that he got the chance to sing in the contest,_his face beamed(笑容满面 and his bright smile lit up the room.his eyes danced with joy and sweetness (欢欣雀跃)it seemed as if he were on top of the world.3)他很伤心：When hearing he lost the game,he felt his
19、 heart was sinking and tears streamed down his cheeks.he felt seized by a burst of sorrow and couldnt help sighing and sobbing.he felt his stomach twisted and turned inside.4)他很愤怒 When his sister refused his request for shoveling the snow together again,he stormed out of the room,slamming the door f
20、uriously behind him.a surge of anger took hold of him and he stamped his foot,unable to utter a single word.5)他很惊讶 When he found behind his friend crept a snake,he froze with shock and stood rooted to the spot.he was rooted to the ground,with his mind blank 6)他很紧张，焦虑 Knowing that the result would be
21、 annouced,he paced back and forth,praying for the good news to come.he paced back and forth restlessly with his heart pounding wildly.he felt like sitting on pins and needles ,anxious and nervous.Explore 3 Read out the sentences and try to summarize the strucutre of the following sentences.1._,he sa
22、t there and waited for the result.2._,he sat there and waited for the result.3.4.His heart pounding wildly,he sat there and waited for the result.5.So anxious did he feel that his palms sweated and his heart pounded wildly.Seized by/Floating in an ocean of tensionWith his heart pounding wildly,he sa
23、t there and waited for the result.Nervous and anxious1)形容词（短语)做状语，+句子2)非谓语（短语)做状语，+句子3)With+宾+宾补,+句子4)独立主格，+句子5)so.that 倒装句Summary3情感描写生动形象的方法：（细节描写方式+语言结构）可以将直接描写和间接描写或者多个间接描写相结合，常用的语言结构有：1.形容词（短语)做状语，+句子；2.非谓语做状语+句子3.With+宾语+宾补,+句子；4.独立主格,+句子;_，the boy widened his eyes._，the boy widened his eyes._
24、，the boy widened his eyes._，the boy widened his eyes _ the boy widened his eyes.surprisedSurprised and thrilled Seized by a sense of surprise and thrill With a sense of surprise welling up in his heart 5.so.that 倒装A sense of surprise welling up in his heart So surprised and thrilled did he feel that
25、 Summary3情感描写生动形象的方法：细节描写方式+语言结构）可以将直接描写和间接描写或者多个间接描写相结合，常用的语言结构有：1.形容词（短语)做状语，+句子；2.非谓语做状语+句子3.With+宾语+宾补,+句子；4.独立主格,+句子;5.So that.倒装2._,he shouted,“I entered the competition.”emotion facial expression Body movement 3._,he shouted,“I entered the competition.”delightedexcitedthrilledExcited and over
26、joyedOvercome with joy and thrill Floating in an ocean of delightWith excitement _(take)hold of himtakingEyes twinkling Hands wavingJumping to his feet 1)Sb be floating in an ocean of+情感名词 be overcome with be seized by 2)(A surge/sense of)+情感名词+takes hold of sb +floods over sb +wells up in sb +creep
27、s on sb 夸张、拟人(动感的的动词)等修辞Direct emotional descriptionHow to give vivid emotional descriptionIndirect emotional descriptionCombine both emotionsA+情感形容词+expression flashes over ones face.facial expressionbody movement1.形容词（短语)做状语，+句子；2.非谓语做状语+句子3.With+宾语+宾补,+句子；4.独立主格,+句子;5.So.that 倒装句 head,eye,mouth,t
28、ongue,breath,hands,legs,heart,stomach Practice 3Try to use the expressions or sentence patterns learned(at least 2)to describe emotions based on the following situations.I stepped onto the stage._ _I took a deep breath and began my speech.At first,I couldnt speak fluently but I remembered what my te
29、acher,Mr.Li instructed(指导)me to focus on my speech during my practice.I did so and gradually it went smoothly.In the end,the audience gave me a big applause and Mr.Li gave me a thumb-up.Then we waited for the result.After what seemed like ages,the judge announced the result and I came first._Share a
30、nd comment1.Share works in groups and make comments.1)Tell us what kind of emotion is conveyed.Is it logical here?2)How is the emotion conveyed?Direct or indirect?3)What expressions or language structures are used to make it vivid?I stepped onto the stage.So nervous was I that I felt my tongue tight
31、,my mind going blank.But with the friendly smile flashing over my classmates,a sense of relief welled up in me.Smiling at them,I tried to calm myself down.I took a deep breath and began my speech.Focusing on my speech,I did what my teacher Mr.Li instructed me to do during my practice.Gradually absor
32、bed in it,I was even unaware that my speech came to an end smoothly.The audience gave me a big applause and Mr.Li gave me a thumb-up.Then we waited for the result.After what seemed like ages,the judge announced the result and I came first.Overcome with great excitement and thrill,I jumped up and che
33、ered,with my eyes twinkling.I approached Mr.Li and threw my arms around Mr.Li,whispering,“Thank you,Mr.Li.Without your guidance,I couldnt stand out in the competition.”Mr.Li patted me on the back,saying,“It is your great efforts that brings you success.”1)Sb be floating in an ocean of+情感名词 be overco
34、me with be seized by 2)(A surge/sense of)+情感名词+takes hold of sb +floods over sb +wells up in sb +creeps on sb 夸张、拟人(动感的的动词)等修辞Direct emotional descriptionHow to give vivid emotional descriptionIndirect emotional descriptionCombine both emotionsA+情感形容词+expression flashes over ones face.facial express
35、ionbody movement1.形容词（短语)做状语，+句子；2.非谓语做状语+句子3.With+宾语+宾补,+句子；4.独立主格,+句子;5.So.that 倒装句 head,eye,mouth,tongue,breath,hands,legs,heart,stomach I felt a strong sense of pity for her at my heart.Mrs.S,my family故事故事(段落段落)背景背景情节情节事件(首句首句)反应反应结果结果(2段首句段首句)who:where:when:what:invite.to partyThings began to c
36、hange after the party.内在内在反应反应(情感、心理情感、心理)外在外在反应反应(动作、语言、视觉、听动作、语言、视觉、听）Mrs.Sknocked at the doorsympatheticwent to housenervous/anxiousinsistedinvited her to.partyembarrassedhesitantreject the invitationsincereIhappyour homesagreed to come to the partyloneliness declinedenjoy the party,have a good talkdelightedThank You
