1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a bright May afternoon along the Maryland coast, and Jonathan Bauer, 51, a technology executive at a hospital, and his 13-year-old daughter, Ava, were taking full advantage of it. They were driving with the windows down as they headed home on the 14-mile-l
2、ong, two-lane Route 90 bridge, which spans the shallow waters of Assa woman Bay. Suddenly, the calm was disturbed by the squeal of tires.Not far ahead of them, a black pickup was sliding from one lane to the other. To the Bauers horror it crashed into a concrete barrier over the SUV directly ahead o
3、f them, and came to rest hanging over the railing of the bridge. Bauer hit the brakes in time to avoid the vehicles in his path, but a BMW car that had smashed into the guardrail on the right came sliding backward toward him. He turned left, but too late the BMW struck his Volvos fender before crash
4、ing into the vehicle behind him.Bauer stopped the car. “Ava, are you OK? he asked, She was shaken, but otherwise unhurt. He ran to the BMW. “Are you OK?” he asked the driver. She nodded, too shocked to speak. It came from the pickup, which had come to rest on its right side. The passenger at the bac
5、k of the pickup and truck bed hung out past the guardrail, 30 or more feet above the waters of the bay.The drivers door threw open and a man climbed out. He dropped to the ground. Bauer ran up beside him. The man pointed down, saying something in Spanish.In the water was a car seat. Moving next to i
6、t, a girl, about two years old._A moment later, The little girl was less than ten feet away from Bauer._文章大意51 岁的乔纳森鲍尔和他 13 岁的女儿艾娃在马里兰州沿海的一座桥上开车回家。突然，平静被打破，前方一辆黑色皮卡失控撞上一辆 SUV 并卡在桥栏杆上，随后一辆宝马撞上护栏后向后滑向鲍尔的车，鲍尔停车确认女儿没事后，发现皮卡事故中有更严重的情况。皮卡侧翻，后排乘客悬在桥外 30 多英尺的水面上方，而且水里还有一个汽车座椅和一个约两岁的小女孩。五要素分析 人物：乔纳森鲍尔、艾娃、皮卡司
7、机、宝马司机、落水小女孩等。 时间：五月一个晴朗的下午。 地点：马里兰州沿海的 90 号公路桥。 起因：一系列交通事故。 经过：车辆碰撞，皮卡侧翻，发现小女孩落水。 结果：鲍尔准备营救小女孩。几处伏笔及续写中的回应 伏笔：小女孩在水中危险。回应：第一段续写鲍尔爬下桥去救小女孩，展现水中救援过程和他的勇敢。 伏笔：鲍尔靠近小女孩。回应：第二段续写鲍尔抱住小女孩，带着她往岸边返回，体现对小女孩的保护。续写要点第一段 情感线：紧张、急切，鲍尔看到小女孩危险后毫不犹豫地行动，情况危急令人揪心。 故事线：描述鲍尔下水救小女孩的过程，包括他克服困难和安抚小女孩。第二段 情感线：安心，鲍尔抱住小女孩，让读者
8、悬着的心放下。 故事线：鲍尔带着小女孩往岸边走，有旁人协助，凸显救援成功在望。主旨升华句1. In the face of danger, human kindness and courage shine brightly like a lighthouse.2. A heroic act in a crisis moment can be the most beautiful melody of humanity.3. When disaster strikes, the instinct to save a life reveals the noble side of our nature
9、.4. Every life is precious, and a rescuer is an angel in the darkest hour.5. In the chaos of an accident, a helping hand holds the hope of life and love.写作示范第一篇In the water was a car seat. Moving next to it, a girl, about two years old. Bauers heart raced as he assessed the situation. Without a seco
10、nd thought, he shed his shoes and dove into the water. The waves were stronger than he expected, but he fought through them. He reached out for the girl as she bobbed up and down, her cries fueling his determination. The cold water numbed his limbs, but he kept going, inching closer to the terrified
11、 child.A moment later, the little girl was less than ten feet away from Bauer. With a burst of energy, he lunged forward and grabbed her. She clung to him, her tiny hands gripping his shirt. Bauer held her close, feeling her shivering body. He whispered words of comfort as he began to swim back, the
12、 onlookers above cheering him on.第二篇In the water was a car seat. Moving next to it, a girl, about two years old. Bauer felt a sense of urgency wash over him. He quickly made his way down the bridge, ignoring the scrapes and bruises. As he entered the water, it was a struggle against the current. He
13、used nearby debris to steady himself and reached towards the girl. He called out to her gently, trying to get her attention.A moment later, the little girl was less than ten feet away from Bauer. Bauer stretched his arm as far as he could. When he finally got hold of her, he felt a huge relief. He w
14、rapped his arms around her protectively. The water seemed less cold and the task less daunting with the girl in his arms. He started making his way back, following the guidance of the people on the bridge.第三篇In the water was a car seat. Moving next to it, a girl, about two years old. Bauers mind wen
15、t blank except for the thought of saving her. He clambered down the bridge structure, his hands getting scratched. Once in the water, he had to battle the swirling current. He focused on the girl, her little figure in the big expanse of water. He swam with all his might, his eyes never leaving her.A
16、 moment later, the little girl was less than ten feet away from Bauer. Bauer mustered all his strength and swam the last few feet. He grasped the girl firmly. She was crying hysterically, and Bauer held her tighter. He told her it would be okay. With newfound energy, he started back towards the shor
17、e, the shouts of encouragement from above giving him more strength.参考答案In the water was a car seat. Moving next to it, a girl, about two years old. Bauers heart lurched at the sight. Without hesitation, he clambered over the bridge railing, ignoring the height and the danger. The salty wind whipped
18、at his clothes as he carefully made his way down the rough surface of the bridge support towards the water. As he got closer, the water looked even more menacing, but he couldnt turn back. He called out to the little girl in a gentle voice, trying to reassure her. Some bystanders joined in, trying t
19、o keep the girl calm from above. Bauer finally reached the water and plunged in, swimming powerfully towards the child.A moment later, the little girl was less than ten feet away from Bauer. He could see the terror in her eyes. Bauer fought against the current with all his might. With one last burst
20、 of energy, he managed to grab the edge of the car seat. The girl immediately reached out her tiny arms and clung to him. Bauer held her close, feeling her little heart pounding against his chest. He could feel her warm breath on his neck as she sobbed. He stroked her wet hair gently, murmuring soothing words. Looking up, he saw the concerned faces of the people on the bridge, waiting to help them get to safety.
