1、Reading and Writing -continuation writing Learning Objectives: At the end of the class, Ss will be able to: 1.Have a deep understanding of the text; 2.Know how to write continuation writing; 3.Discover how to appreciate a good continuation writing; Text Analysis Content Tone Language Content Story W
2、hat Why How Where When Who Theme Plot Background Content-Background main character: one day during a sailing trip sea around Africa Story Who When Where Lucky Plot Story Who When Where What Jack One day during the sailing trip Sea around Africa Why How Theme Tonya (husband and wife) Max (friends) Sa
3、sha (friends) Lucky (human and aninmal) Content A baby killer whale trapped Jack jumped into water to save it Tonya disappeared Plot Event 1 Event 2 Problem Solution Problem Solution ？ theme: love, kindness, help theme: ? Content Plot Story Who When Where What Jack One day during the sailing trip Se
4、a around Africa Why How Event 1 Event 2 Problem Solution Problem Solution a baby killer whale trapped Jack Jumped into water to save it Tonya disappeared ? Theme Tonya (husband and wife) Max (friends) Sasha (friends) Lucky (human and aninmal) Kindness, help, love ? Content Tone(情节基调）情节基调） dangerous
5、safe a happy ending Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away. Sudenly there were other killer whales near the boat. “Jack!” Tonya shouted. “Get in quickly.” Jack swam to the boat as fast as a fish. “I am going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he
6、said. Language Characteristics “Somethings wrong with their fishing net,” “Whats that?” “There is something in the net. Its alive.” Jack jumped into the water. Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. It swam away. Very slowly they moved nearer. It began to rain harder and harder. The wind got st
7、ronger and the boat was full of water. dialogues action description scene description Analysis of given information about unfinished part Analysis of given information about unfinished part The underlined words: boat, shouted, killer whale, help, Lucky, the waves, in the water, the wind, lifejacket,
8、 the beach Given sentence: After several minutes, suddenly he saw someone waving to him._ _ The underlined words: Action shouted help What boat the waves the wind lifejacket Where in the water the beach Who killer whale Lucky Given sentence: Suddenly Jack saw someone waving to him. Who is the person
9、? Why is the person waving to Jack? What is Jacks response? How is the person connected to the problem mentioned above? Analysis of Given information about unfished part Predict Possible Plot Development Tone: dangerous safe ( a happy ending) Language: simple, oral, informal, dialogues Problem Solut
10、ion Tonya disappeared ? Theme? The underlined words: who where what action killer whale Lucky in the water the beach boat, the waves, the wind, lifejacket shouted help Given sentence: Suddenly Jack saw someone waving to him. text given infor- mation who why what response how Your Show Time 评分原则 本题总分
11、为25分，分5个档次给分 第五档 (21-25) 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些错误， 但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 高融洽度 Tone (情节基调) Language characteristics(语言特征) Content (内容: plot development - “W & H”) After several minutes, suddenly Jack saw someone waving to him.When they
12、came closer, he found that Tonya was sitting on the back of a killer whale, shouting and she was safe! As soon as Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Dont worry. Im fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small
13、 one is Lucky, who you rescued!” Jack walked towards Lucky, stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you for your help, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin as if they were good friends. Then the crowd of killer whales swam away into the vast sea in the sunset. One Possible Version love, help, kindness,harmony solution Reflection Content analysis: 5W1H Language Tone given information plot prediction writing Homework Polish the composition
