1、Section Writing 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 概要写作概要写作 概要写作是近几年高考的新题型。此题型要求考生根据一篇 350词以内的短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要,以此来考查学生 准确获取关键词,对文章大意进行归纳概括,并用简洁的语言转述 文章重要信息的能力。考生要在正确理解短文的基础上,用简明、 精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点,是对阅读理解能力和 书面表达能力的综合考查。 短文选材以说明文和议论文为主,文章结构比较明晰,通常包含4 个左右的要点。考生要客观准确归纳要点,不照搬原文句子,要点 之间要恰当衔接,全文内容要连贯,过渡要自然。 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练
2、写作思路 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Eating healthily and exercising to get your body fit can feel like a lot of work.In fact, sometimes it can feel like so much work that you might not even want to try! Have no fear, thoughthere are some fun ways to get your body healthy. You might think that going to a
3、 gym and working out on exercise equipment is the only or the best way to get fit, but thats just not so.There are loads of things you can do outside of the gym to keep yourself healthy! Think a hike might be a bit challenging for you?Take a walk on the beach or in a park.Youll get extra points if y
4、ou take your whole walk on the sand; it provides some resistance and will give you a better workout. 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 Dancing is one of the very best forms of exercise.It works a lot of different muscles, and there are endless varieties of dances to keep you entertained.Some people avoid dancing
5、because they may not have a partner to go to a dance class with.There are many types of dances you can do solo! Maybe you should go out on a limb and try hip-hop dancing or tap dancing you can do both of those on your own.Dont feel like taking a dance class?You dont need to! Put on some music and ha
6、ve a dance party by yourself in your room, with your friends in the halls at school, or even with your family in the living room! 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 There are lots of great reasons to get exercise and keep your body and brain healthy.Keep in mind that increasing your regular movement doesnt mean th
7、at you have to go to extremes by running to the gym seven days a weekthere are fun and easy ways to introduce more exercise into your life. 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 一、细读短文,明确篇章结构,确定要点数量。 首先,仔细阅读短文。阅读的目的是确定文章的体裁和主题,明 确篇章结构。根据意义划分段落,然后对段落划分层次,确定要点 的数量。本文是一篇说明文,共有四个自然段。主要说明了保持健 康,加强体育锻炼的方法。 二、处理文章,抓住主题句,删除细
8、节信息。 明确全文结构之后,就要对文章内容进行处理。处理的目的是删 除次要内容,保留主要内容。文中描述性的语言、细节和列举的示 例都属于要删除的内容。剩余的主要部分要仔细研读,与主题相关 的关键词句要重点标注出来,这些词句就是最后归纳转述的要点。 文章第一段概括说,保持健康有很多好方法。主旨句是最后一 句:.there are some fun ways to get your body healthy。 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 第二段第四句是本段的主题句:Take a walk on the beach or in a park.在沙滩上或者公园里散步。 第三段第一句是本段的
9、主旨句:Dancing is one of the very best forms of exercise.跳舞是锻炼身体的最佳方法之一。 第四段第二句是本段的主旨句:Keep in mind that increasing your regular movement doesnt mean that you have to go to extremes by running to the gym seven days a week.记住,增加你的规律运动并不 意味着你一周七天跑步去健身房。 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 三、逐段进行归纳,提取关键信息,准确转述要点 。 删除了短文中
10、的细节、例证等细枝末节后,每段的主要内容已经 明确,然后要用自己的语言准确地表述各段的要点。为避免和原文 的句子重复,可使用同义转述的形式,也可以用句子重构的方式来 完成要点归纳。归纳时要分清主次,各要点的词数应根据文中对应 的内容来定。归纳后每段的要点为: 第一段:There are some fun ways to keep fit. 第二段:Its a good way for you to take a walk on the beach or in the park. 第三段:Dancing is a great way to exercise your muscles. 第四段:I
11、f you want to keep fit, you dont have to go to the gym regularly. 最后,加上适当的过渡句和衔接词,以保证上下文的连贯。 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 四、检查要点,修改错误,确定终稿。 初稿完成后,要检查要点是否齐全,各要点是否表述准确,检查是 否有语法错误、拼写错误和标点符号错误等,还要检查词数是否符 合要求。 范文赏读 写作指导 针对训练 写作思路 范文赏读 Besides eating healthily and exercising, there are some fun ways to keep fit.(要
12、点1)Its a good way for you to take a walk on the beach or in the park.(要点2) In addition, whether you have a partner or not, or whether you take a dance class or not, dancing is a great way to exercise your muscles.(要点3) Therefore, if you want to keep fit, you dont have to go to the gym regularly.(要点4)
