1、Reading for Writing (Write a letter of advice) Chelsea Chen Write a letter of advice 10th September 2018 Dear worried friends, All the best, Susan Luo Date Greeting Body Close Signature Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. (P18) Read for the format of th
2、e letter I know what the problem is. I understand how you feel. This is my advice and reason(s). I think my advice will help. Read for the content of the letter 1 Do you think Ms Luos advice is useful? Why or why not? Perhaps the advice is (not) useful, because it is. 2 What other kinds of advice wo
3、uld you give? I would tell Chen Lei that he should spend his time more productively with an eye on his future. He could learn computer programming instead of playing computer games. Useful and reasonable advices! I know what the problem is. I understand how you feel. This is my advice and reason(s).
4、 I think my advice will help. Read for the structure of the letter the content and structure of the letter the content and structure of the letter Read for the expressions of suggestion 说明背景和写信目的说明背景和写信目的 翻译：很抱歉听到你觉得适应新学校很困难，这种问题很正常，可能 以下的建议对你有帮助。 1. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble doin
5、g sth. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful/beneficial/constructive/favorable. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting yourself to your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful /beneficial /constr
6、uctive /favorable. 说明背景和写信目的说明背景和写信目的 翻译：很抱歉听到你觉得适应新学校很困难，这种问题很正常，可能 以下的建议对你有帮助。 2. Im very sorry to hear that you felt anxious about how to do sth. Now Im writing to offer you some helpful /beneficial /constructive /favorable advice. Im very sorry to hear that you felt anxious about how to fit in t
7、he new school. Now Im writing to offer you some helpful /beneficial /constructive /favorable suggestions the expressions about suggestions 翻译：建议你加入一些学校社团。 1. I (would like to) suggest that I would like to suggest that you should join some school clubs. 2.If I were you，I would If I were you，I would j
8、oin some school clubs. 3. It is necessary for you to do. It is necessary for you to join some school clubs the expressions about suggestions and reasons 翻译：建议你多跟同学交流，这样有利于和同学们相处好。 1. You would better do/ not do ,which helps (sb) do sth You would better talk with your classmates more often, which hel
9、ps you get along well with them. 2.You may consider doing sth, V-ing结构作结果状语. You may consider talking with your classmates more often, helping you get along well with them the expressions about suggestions and reasons 翻译：建议你多跟同学交流，这样有利于和同学们相处好。 3.It should be a good idea to do sth. Only in this way
10、can you improve your listening(部分倒装) It should be a good idea to talk with your classmates more often. Only in this way can you get along well with them. 4. You are supposed to do.so that+clause(结果状语从句) You are supposed to talk with your classmates more often so that you can get along well with them
11、 结尾句结尾句 1.I sincerely hope you will find these advice/suggestions/proposals practical/favorable 2. I sincerely hope these suggestions can offer you practical help/assistant. I sincerely hope these advice can help/assist you. . Group work Suggestion Reason Group work: Choose one of the situation and
12、then fill in the table Group work: Choose one of the situation (p75) and then fill in the table Group work: Choose one of the situation (p75) and then fill in the table Group work: Choose one of the situation (p75) and then fill in the table Show the reader that you know the problem is. Tell the rea
13、der that you understand how he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reason(s). Tell the reader what you think will happen. Write the date and greet the reader. Close and sign the letter. Draft your letter according to the outline below. Draft your letter according
14、 to the outline below. Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in a good order? Does the writer give reasons for the advice? Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions? Are the sentence structures correct? Are there any spelling mistakes? Does the writer use commas and stops correctly? Is the handwriting easy to read? The checklist may help you. 3. Exchange and revise your draft with your partner. 4. Share your writing. Thank you
