1、Part 4 Writing 写作题目 最近,你校英文报在举办主题为“One hour of exercise a day makes a lifetime of health.”的征文活动。假定你是李华,请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文。 1.你对征文主题的理解; 2.你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况; 3.该运动给你的生活和学习带来的好处。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已写好,不计入总词数。 Nowadays,playing sports is becoming more and more popular. 思路点拨 主题 运动 体裁 应用文 人称
2、 第一人称 时态 一般现在时为主 布局 第一段:对征文主题的理解; 第二段:介绍自己喜欢的运动及运动给自己带来的好处; 第三段:号召人们积极参加运动。 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. adj.积极的;正面的;乐观的 2.stress n. 3. 有作用或影响 4.work out 5. 放弃;投降 6.lose heart 答案 1.positive 2.压力;紧张;重音 3.make a difference 4.锻炼;计算出;解决 5.give up 6.丧失信心;泄气 .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)锻炼能够给我们带来很大影响。 can to us. (2)运动
3、可以帮助我们减轻压力,并且给我们提供交朋友的机会。 Doing sports can help us reduce our stress and offer us opportunities . (3)我最喜欢的运动是篮球,篮球让我变得更加健康和乐观。 My favorite sport is basketball and it makes me . (4)通过打篮球,我学会了如何和别人打交道,也意识到了团队合作的重要性。 , I have learned how I should deal with others and have realized the importance of tea
4、mwork. (5)输掉比赛教会了我永远不要放弃或失去信心。 Losing games teaches me never to or lose heart. (6)跟着来吧!让我们一起去运动,享受健康的生活! ! Lets do sports together and enjoy a healthy life! 答案 (1)Working out;make a great difference (2)to make friends (3)healthier and more positive (4)By playing basketball (5)give up (6)Come along 2
5、.句式升级 (7)用 not only.but also.改写句(2) (8) 用定语从句改写句(3) (9) 用“疑问词+不定式”改写句(4) (10) 用反意疑问句改写句(6) 答案 (7)Doing sports can not only help us reduce our stress but also offer us opportunities to make friends. (8)My favorite sport is basketball which makes me healthier and more positive. (9)By playing basketbal
6、l,I have learned how to deal with others and have realized the importance of teamwork. (10)Come along!Lets do sports together and enjoy a healthy life,shall we? 连句成篇 参考范文 基础篇 Nowadays, playing sports is becoming more and more popular. It is also your favorite, isnt it? After all, working out can mak
7、e a great difference to us. Doing sports can not only help us reduce our stress but also offer us opportunities to make friends. My favorite sport is basketball which makes me healthier and more positive. By playing basketball, I have learned how to deal with others and have realized the importance
8、of teamwork. Losing games teaches me never to give up or lose heart. In short, as a sports lover, I benefit a lot from basketball. Come along! Lets do sports together and enjoy a healthy life,shall we? 【点评】 本文使用了经典的三段式结构,After all、In short 等使文章条理清晰、层次 分明,要点一目了然。 文中定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词短语、介词短语等的交替使用使文 章句式多
9、变、长短结合,增加了可读性,同时也表现了作者丰富的语言知识以及对 语言很高的驾驭能力。 文末祈使句的使用增强了文章的感染力和亲和力,拉近了作者与读者的距离, 能够有效地激发人们对运动的热忱。 提升篇 Nowadays, playing sports is becoming more and more popular. As we all know, a person who takes exercise regularly always keeps fit and lives a happy life. As for me, my favorite sport is basketball, w
10、hich I think not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed. After a whole day of hard study, playing basketball helps me relax. Besides, through the game, I have learned the spirit of teamwork, an important quality needed in the future. Also, I think it offers me a good opportunity to make
11、friends with people who have similar interests with me. In short, playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident. 写作积累 1.Playing sports is one of the best ways to keep us fit. 2.A healthy body is necessary for a healthy mind. 3.Life lies in movement, and sport is the thing that give
12、s us an opportunity to move. 4.They can not only build up our bodies but also help us study more efficiently. 5.When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people. 6.Different students have different reasons for taking part in sports. 7.Many students just want
13、 to relax themselves and have fun. 8.Most boys take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. 9.Girls also like sports because they want to lose weight. 10.Only by keeping ourselves healthy can we feel energetic and confident in our study and work. 实战演练 答案见 P118 () 假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Peter
14、来信询问你校学生的体育运动情况,请给他 回信,内容包括: 1.学校的体育场; 2.主要的运动项目; 3.你喜欢的项目。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Part 4 Writing 实战演练 One possible version: Dear Peter, I am so delighted to have received your letter. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following informatio
15、n may give you some help. To my great joy, a famous new stadium has been put up, which has become the landmark in our school. Besides, with the stadium built, a wide range of sports activities can be carried out, of which table tennis, football and running competitions enjoy great popularity. I am particularly fond of basketball because it has been giving me strength to confront the challenge in my life. Finally, I sincerely invite you to visit our school and join in the sports we both like. Yours, Li Hua
