1、Part 4 Writing 写作题目 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack刚刚升入高中,但他一时无法适应新 的校园生活,写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信,内容主 要包括: 1.实际上很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑,因此不必过多担心; 2.建议: (1)报名参加课外活动,这有助于结交更多的新朋友; (2)做好日程安排,要特别关注学习,因为作为一名青少年,好好学习是我 们的责任。 3.希望建议能适合你。 注意:1.词数 80 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you
2、re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 主题 就适应高中生活给朋友 建议 体裁 应用文 人称 以第一、二人称为主 时态 一般现在时 布局 第一段:进行安慰,表明写作目的; 第二段:根据提示给出适应高中生活的建议; 第三段:希望建议适合朋友。 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. adv.实际上 2. n.新生 3. v.建议 4. n.日程安排 5. v.改进,改善 6. n.青少年 7. n.责任,义务 8. 对感到困惑 9. 课外活动 10. 集中,特别关注 11. 适合 答案
3、 1.actually 2.freshman 3.recommend 4.schedule 5.improve 6.teenager 7.responsibility 8.be confused about 9.extra-curricular activities 10.focus on 11.be suitable for .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)实际上,很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑。 , high school life. (2)我建议你报名参加课外活动,这能帮助你结交更多的新朋友。 I recommend that you and it can help you m
4、ake more new friends. (3)你应该做好日程安排,并且把注意力集中在提高学习上。 You should and your study. (4)作为一名青少年,好好学习是我们的责任。 , studying well is our . (5)我希望我的建议能适合你。 I hope my suggestions will . 答案 (1)Actually;many freshmen are confused about (2)sign up for extra- curricular activities (3)make a good schedule;focus on impr
5、oving (4)As a teenager;responsibility (5)be suitable for you 2.句式升级 (6)将句(2)升级为含有定语从句的句子 (7)将句(4)升级为含有“it 作形式主语”结构的句子 答案 (6)I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. (7)As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. 连句成篇 参考范文 Dear
6、 Jack, I am sorry to hear that youre having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so dont worry about it too much. Im writing to offer you some useful advice. First, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which
7、 can help you make more new friends. In this way you wont feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. I hope my suggestions will be suitable fo
8、r you. Yours, Li Hua 写作积累 建议信常用句式 1.写信背景(写信的缘由): I heard that. I am informed that. You said in your last letter that. Im sorry that you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in. 2.写信目的: I am writing with my suggestions/proposals for. I am writing to express my views concerning. I am writing to give
9、 you some advice on the problem you are faced with. 3.具体建议: There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with,.Moreover,.Whats more,.Finally,. Why not do.?/Why dont you do.?/What about doing.?/How about doing.? Youd better (not) do. I advise/suggest that you (should) do. I strongly advise
10、you to do. I highly recommend that you (should) do./It is highly recommended that you (should) do. You might/may as well do. 4.结尾: I hope you will find these ideas useful. I hope my advice is of some help to you. I do hope my advice is helpful to you. 实战演练 (2020山西朔州怀仁一中高一上月考,) 假设你是新华中学高一新生李华,你的美国笔友
11、Peter来信询问你的近 况,请你用英语给他写一封回信,内容包括: 1.你对高中生活的感受及打算; 2.简要介绍一位你在新学校认识的新朋友; 3.谈谈你对朋友或友谊的理解。 注意: 1.词数 80 左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, Im writing to tell you something about my new school life. How about your school life?Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Part 4 Writi
12、ng 实战演练 One possible version: Dear Peter, Im writing to tell you something about my new school life. At first,I find it a little difficult to get used to high school life. The subjects we are learning are obviously more difficult. Besides,with endless homework to do,we almost have no time for exerci
13、se and other activities.I feel greatly stressed but Im determined to go through all the difficulties and learn every subject well. Fortunately,the teachers and classmates are all helpful and kind. And Im glad to make a new friendWang Lin,who is very outgoing and always ready to help others. It was with his help that I overcame my fear of maths and made great progress. I think friends should always help and encourage each other. How about your school life?Im looking forward to your reply. yours, Li Hua
