1、旅游交通基础篇,【话题解读】 旅游交通包含两个方面的话题：旅游和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等；交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。,【真题回放】 在英语课上，老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the city”的话题讨 论。请根据小组讨论结果，写一篇英语短文，介绍两者的不同特点，并写出你的选择与理由。,注意： 1) 短文必须包含记录表中的信息，并 适当发挥； 2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信 息； 3)词数80100，所给的文章开头供选 择，
2、不计入词数。,In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city. _ (2016 浙江丽水),【真题分析】 通过审题可知该写作任务要求对比“a trip to the countryside”和“a trip to the city”，介绍两者的不同特点。介绍时要分别从优、缺点两个方面来写。表格中已经列出了比较的方面，包括心情感受、空气质量、交通状况、购物消费等，写作时应围绕这几个方面重点阐述并有一定程度的发挥。最后记得要给出自己的选
3、择并陈述理由。,【标准范文】 In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city. Having a trip to the countryside can be relaxing. You can go fishing or hiking there. And the air is fresh. But its not easy to take public transportation in the countryside. Hav
4、ing a trip to the city can be an,exciting experience. You can go to different places and try different kinds of food. But it can be crowded in the city and things there are usually expensive. Id like to have a trip to the city. Why? Because I like shopping and I want to buy a lot of things.,旅游交通提高篇,
5、【高分突破】 In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city. Having a trip to the countryside can be a relaxing experience. And the fresh air is good for your health. However, you might not have many choices in transportation.,A trip to the city a
6、lso has its advantages and disadvantages. If you like shopping, its very exciting to wander in large malls. However, you might have to spend a lot because things are expensive in the city. And the traffic jam might let you down. As for me, a trip to the countryside is surely my top choice. I like pl
7、aces where I can get close to nature and breathe fresh air.,【高分揭秘】 1. 该习作要点齐全，段落层次清晰，语言地道优美； 2. 作者在第三段用了一句A trip to the city also has its advantages and disadvantages, 起到了承上启下的作用；同时also, however, and 等词的使用也使习作读起 来连贯、流畅；,3. 作者在结尾部分表达自己的选择和理 由时，话语简明扼要，my top choice 更是用得准确而贴切。,【素材积累】 1. 词汇 旅游：go on a t
8、rip, take a trip, place of interest, relaxing, be impressed with, exciting 交通：crowded, red light, traffic rules, traffic jam, public transportation,2. 句子 Traveling makes us get close to nature. Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier. Our schedule for today is to visit the GreatWall. I cant
9、 wait to share the fantastic experience with my friends. Traveling is a great way to learn about yourself and the world.,【写作任务】 目前，家长开车接送孩子上学已经成 为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不 一，家长们也有自己的看法。 观点1：省时; 安全; 提供更多与孩子交 流的机会。 观点2：学校周围更拥挤；最近发生了 几起交通事故；污染的空气对身 体有不良影响。,你的观点：(必须用2至3 句话作适当发挥) 注意： 1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
10、2. 词数：80 词左右(文章的开头已给出, 不计 入总词数)； 3. 文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。,Nowadays its common for parents to drive their children to school and back home, which has caused a heated discussion. Some parents think _ _ _ (2016 湖北随州),【参考范文】 Nowadays its common for parents to drive their children to school and back home, wh
11、ich has caused a heated discussion. Some parents think it saves time and is a safe choice for their children. They also believe that it offers them more chances to communicate with their children, so they can get along well with their children.,However, other parents think it makes traffic near scho
12、ols worse. As is known, there have been several traffic accidents recently. Whats worse, cars pollute the air and that is bad for health. I think we are old enough to go to school by ourselves.,We should take public transportation as mush as possible, which will not only help reduce air pollution, but also improve the traffic situation.,
