1、期末复习期末复习 作文篇作文篇 一一 How to write One Writing is like making a hamburger! a piece of bread vegetables eggs meat another piece of bread The beginning Body part The ending Writing Volunteers 上个月，我们去希望小学做志愿者，帮助 了那里的老师和学生。以此事为例，巩固复习 如何写好一篇英语作文。 Beginning Last month, we did something educational. The stude
2、nts in my class went to Hope School as volunteers. We helped the teachers and students there a lot. That event had meaning to all of us. The beginning is too boring and plain. How to make your beginning better? The secret : Add some relish (佐料佐料) Happiness lies in others. The aim of volunteer is . V
3、olunteering makes you the world differently. Little things can a persons life. Proverbs (谚语）谚语） look at change helping giving Beginning _ Last month, we did something educational. The students in my class went to Hope School as volunteers. We helped the teachers and students there a lot. That event
4、had meaning to all of us. Tip 1: Use proverbs to make your writing clear. Happiness lies in helping others. On that day, the weather was sunny and a little cold. We got to there by school bus. The teachers and students welcomed our.We helped to clean the windows and the classrooms. The headmaster sa
5、id something about the poor students. I thought I should help them. Saturday, March 9th Read the passage and find the mistakes. Why? is Tip 2: No grammar errors. us Body part At first, the teachers and students welcomed us and they showed us around their school. After that, we helped to clean the wi
6、ndows and the classrooms because there was a strong wind 2 days ago, the school was in a mess. And then, the headmaster said something about the poor students. I thought I should help them, such as giving them more books. Compare The teachers and students welcomed us. We helped to clean the windows
7、and the classrooms. The headmaster said something about the poor students. I thought I should help them. A B Conjunctions (连接词连接词) Tip 3: Conjunctions make the passage logical (有逻辑的). 逻辑角度逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇 排序关系排序关系 并列关系并列关系 举例关系举例关系 转折关系转折关系 因果关系因果关系 归纳总结归纳总结 递进关系递进关系 first; second; third and; t
8、oo; as well as for example; like; such as although; but; however because; so; since; thanks to; as a result in a word; all in all whats more; not only, but also Body part the class the speech the party the sale talked with drew the pictures showed the talent sang and danced played the instruments th
9、e poor students the schoolwork their spirit our classmates made friends our teachers our results Tip 4: More advanced phrases/sentences. We communicated with each other, and made friends with them. How to polish your writing? We talked with them, we were friends soon. We communicated with each other
10、 happily about the things we like. In this way, we made a lot of friends . word phrases sentences Please add more details to make the sentences attractive (引人入胜的). Grammar Conjunctions Advanced sentences Ending Volunteering feelings Volunteering hopes What a wonderful experience! Volunteering makes
11、me a better person! I hope to visit them again. I wish. I am looking forward to . Attention Handwriting（书写）（书写） Punctuation （标点）（标点） Layout （布局）（布局） The beginning Body part The ending Summary Homework Two Must-do: Complete your writing and learn to rewrite your passage by reading and sharing. May-do: Compare your writing with others and try to keep an English diary to polish your writing to make it better. Homework THANK YOU
