1、Writing,-,The very hungry caterpillar(毛毛虫）likes.,Play a game:,applellolipopbiscuitpopcornhamburgerpotato chips,be likemake eat,sweet harmful(un)happy(un)healthy,be,Snacks are dilicious.,like,I like eating / to eat snacks.,Eating snacks makes us happy.,Money,Environment,spend / pay,students,litter,th
2、row/drop,fat,Health,Eating snacks is a waste of money.,Eating too many snacks is bad for our health.,Eating snacks is harmful to our environment.,.,Students often spend a lot of money on snacks.,Students often throw litter everywhere.,It will make us fat.,Talk about some advantages and disadvantages
3、 of eating snacks.,Some advantages :,Snacks are dilicious.,Eating snacks makes us happy.,Improvement 提高,I think.As we all know.Youd better.You are supposed to.Its + adj +for sb + to do sth,I think,eating snacks makes us happy.,snacks are dilicious.,As we all know,Improvement: 提高,Some disadvantages:,
4、Eating too many snacks is bad for our health.,Eating snacks is harmful to our environment.,Eating snacks is a waste of money.,Improvement 提高,1. First.Second.and then.finally2. Firstly.Secondly.and then.finally3. First of all, whats more, in addition(此外） whats worse,4. in my opinion, in a word, gener
5、ally speaking.,eating too many snacks is bad for our health.,First of all,eating snacks is a waste of money.,In addition,Whats worse,eating snacks is harmful to our environment.,Improvement :,书面表达： 某某中学学生在校吃零食现象严重，为此各班召开班会，大家 纷纷表达了自己的观点。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1.一些学生很喜欢吃零食，他们认为零食能给他们带来快乐。2.其余的学生认为校园应该拒绝零食。
6、理由是：吃太多的零食对 我们的健康不利；经常买零食浪费钱；随地丢垃圾污染环境等。3.我的观点是.,注意：1.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.词数70-110，开头已给出不计入总词数。,There are many advantages and disadvantages of eating snacks. Some students ,Show time,Check out your mistakes,Share your ideas,Show your work,第一档（1315分）：很好地完成了规定的写作任务。包含所有内容要点，紧扣主题
7、，结构完整，条理清晰，能恰当使用连接词表示各种逻辑关系；语句流畅，表达清楚准确；使用较为丰富的语法结构和词汇，且错误极少；书写规范，字数符合要求。第二档（1012分）：较好地完成了规定的写作任务。基本上包含所有要点，紧扣主题，结构较为完整，条理清晰，能使用正确的连接词；语句完整，意思清楚；语法和词汇方面错误较少且不妨碍理解；书写较为规范，字数符合要求。第三档（79分）：基本上完成了写作任务。包含主要内容要点，结构欠完整，但不影响文章整体效果；少数语句不通顺，意思基本清楚；语法和词汇方面存在一些错误；书写基本规范，字数基本符合要求。第四档（46分）：未能按要求完成规定的写作任务。能写出一些关键句
8、子，但句式单调，词汇有限，写作内容缺少连贯性，影响理解；语法结构和词汇错误较多；书写欠规范，字数过少。第五档（13分）：未完成规定的写作任务。能写出与写作内容相关的个别句子，但语句不完整，语法和词汇错误很多，书写不规范。不得分（0分）：写作内容与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清；写作中抄袭阅读篇章中与作文话题无关的句子或段落。,There are many advantages and disadvantages of eating snacks. Some students like snacks very much.They believe that snacks are deliciou
9、s. Eating snacks can make them happy. The other students believe that it is a bad habit. First of all, eating snacks is a waste of money. Students often spend much money on snacks. In addition, eating too many snacks is bad for our health. It will make us fat. They are unhealthy food. What is worse,
10、 some students throw litter everywhere. It is also harmful to our environment. As middle school students, we shouldnt eat snacks any more. Dear students, lets form good eating habits and say no to snacks.,注意：1.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.词数70-110，开头已给出不计入总词数。,Shopping on line is quite
11、 popular in our daily life now. Once you open your computer, you can see many people shopping online.,Homework: 随着社会的发展，网上购物在我们的日常生活中成为一种流行的购物方式。请按要求写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。1.大部分人认为网上购物有很多好处。理由是：网上购物十分方便，不用出家门就可以买到自己想买的东西；网店二十四小时营业，顾客无需等候，在任何时间都可以买到自己想买的东西。2.其余的人认为网上购物有很多弊端。理由是：因不能看到实物而被店主欺骗；不能与朋友共享快乐的时光。3.我的观点是,The Very Hungry Caterpillar(毛毛虫）,敬请指正,THANKS,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
