1、Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. (Section B 3a-self check）,Go for it 九年级英语,陆文燕 黔南独山县第三中学,How to develop our writing skills,书面表达是提高分数最大的潜力股,Which composition(作文) do you like better?,1,2,Is your composition like this？,脏 乱 差,别抄阅读理解了，我们也会看试卷的！,越界,衔接美,句式美,词汇美,外在美,结构美,作文高分卷的
2、 特 点,第一印象很重要！,javascript:,写好英语作文要注意十字原则：,（总结）首尾呼应，升华主题.也可指出希望，建议，发出号召，表达祝愿。,（要点）全面，围绕中心。,（引入主题）简单明了开门见山，,1.总,2.分,3.总,结构（三段式）,however, but, or,on the other hand,first(firsty),second(secondly),then, next,finally,补充说明：,结果：,原因：,先后顺序：,转折：,并列：,in a word ，in shortall in all,总结：,语法(硬性),时态是否正确,是否有中国式的表达,前后人称
3、是否一致,单词拼写是否正确,句子是否完整,主谓是否一致,别忘了正确的格式哟,亮点,例文 请保护我的眼睛 【作文要求】 六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。请你结合实际写一篇题目为如何保护眼睛的征文稿，内容要包括： 1. 保护眼睛的重要性； 2. 保护眼睛的具体措施； 不要长时间看书报； 不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书； 坚持做眼保健操。 注意：词数80100词；不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。,How to Protect Our Eyes We see nothing without eyes.So its very important for everyone to keep good eyesight.
4、Heres some advice on how to protect our eyes. Firstly，you are not supposed to read books or newspapers for a long time. When you read books or newspapers for about an hour， you must stop to have a rest. Secondly,dont read in dim(昏暗） light or in the sun. Thirdly， doing eye-exercises is another way to
5、 protect your eyes. All in all,as the saying goes： Eyes are the windows of our mind. Lets protect our eyes from now on.,How to Protect Our Eyes We see nothing without eyes.So its very important for everyone to keep good eyesight. Heres some advice on how to protect our eyes. you are not supposed to
6、read books or newspapers for a long time. When you read books or newspapers for about an hour， you must stop to have a rest. dont read in dim(昏暗） light or in the sun. doing eye-exercises is another way to protect your eyes. All in all,as the saying goes： Lets protect our eyes from now on.,1.,2.,3.,.
7、,Firstly，,Secondly,Thirdly，,Eyes are the windows of our mind.,请你根据表格的内容，以“The opinion of using WeChat”为题写一篇英语短文, 说明使用微信的利弊并谈谈自己的看法。不少于100字。参考词汇：platform （平台），affect (影响) ， trick (欺骗), eyesight (视力),Lets write this composition.,（你的观点及理由）正确使用微信,1.provide a platform of communi-cation for people 2.make
8、more friends 3.get more knowledge,微信在生活中的影响,1.总,2.分,3.总,结构（三段式）,1.lose oneself in Wechat affect the schoolwork 2. make bad friends trick3. spend much time on it be harmful to eyesight,利,弊,六档：18-20分，能写出全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚，漂亮整洁。五档：15-17分，能写出全部或大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。四档：12-14分，能写出大部分要点，语言有一些错误，行
9、文不够连贯，表达不够清楚。三档：8-11分，能写出部分要点，语言虽然有较多错误，尚能表意。二档：4-7分，能写出一、两个要点，语句错误很多，影响意思表达。一档：0-3分，要点不齐，语言错误很多，只能写出所要求内容相关的一些单词，不能表意。,评 卷要求知多少？,Homework:根据中考评分标准，小组互评作文并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好词、好句 。,读书破万卷， 下笔如有神！,Read wide,and you will wisely write,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
