1、思路点拨思路点拨 佳句妙语佳句妙语 鉴赏例文鉴赏例文 实战演习实战演习 你批我改你批我改 1 2 3 4 5 求助信求助信 人称人称 时态时态 第一人称第一人称 一般现在时一般现在时 写作框架写作框架 综述困难综述困难 分说困难分说困难 感受感受& & 求助求助 思路点拨思路点拨 建议信建议信 人称人称 时态时态 第二人称第二人称 一般现在时一般现在时 写作框架写作框架 表达安慰表达安慰 表述建议表述建议 表达祝福表达祝福 思路点拨思路点拨 佳句妙语佳句妙语 鉴赏例文鉴赏例文 实战演习实战演习 你批我改你批我改 2 3 4 5 求助信求助信 综述困难综述困难 分说困难分说困难 感受感受& &
2、求助求助 My problem is that 佳句妙语佳句妙语 I dont know if I should say Its like a big and black cloud hanging over He is not very nice to me. I dont think this is fair I feel lonely and nervous. What can I do? 建议信建议信 佳句妙语佳句妙语 表达安慰表达安慰 表述建议表述建议 表达祝福表达祝福 It isnt easy being your age. and its normal to have these
3、 feelings. Why dont you？ You should Maybe you could I hope things will be better for you soon. 鉴赏例文鉴赏例文 实战演习实战演习 你批我改你批我改 3 4 5 Example1Example1 Dear Jenny, Can you help me? I always cant stop thinking about the things in the daytime. I was very healthy before, but these days I couldnt sleep well. I
4、 am looking forward to hearing from you! Yours, Helen 1 2 3 4 5 I dont know what I should do. 鉴赏例文鉴赏例文 I was very healthy before, but these days I couldnt sleep well. I always cant stop thinking about the things in the daytime. I dont know what I should do. Can you help me? I am looking forward to h
5、earing from you. Example2Example2 鉴赏例文鉴赏例文 Dear Helen, Im sorry to hear that you couldnt sleep well. Dont worry about that. Here are some pieces of advice. Try to relax yourself. Dont worry too much. Do some exercise before you go to bed. It will help you sleep very quickly. You can listen to some l
6、ight music when you are in bed. I hope these can help you. Have a try, please. Yours, Jenny First , try to relax yourself. Dont worry too much. Second, do some exercise before going to bed. If you do it, you can sleep very quickly. Finally, you could listen to some light music so that you can sleep well. 实战演习实战演习 你批我改你批我改 4 5 考场实战考场实战 A：假如你叫：假如你叫Tom ，是一名中学生，你很害羞，是一名中学生，你很害羞， 害怕在很多人面前讲话，你现在给校报写求助信，害怕在很多人面前讲话，你现在给校报写求助信， 向他们寻求帮助。向他们寻求帮助。 Dear Editor, _ _ Yours , Tom B：假如你是校报的编辑：假如你是校报的编辑Mr. Wise, 请你针对请你针对Tom 的的 问题，谈谈你的看法，给他提至少三点建议。问题，谈谈你的看法，给他提至少三点建议。 Dear Tom, _ Yours, Mr. Wise 你批我改你批我改 5
