1、Lights，camera，action! Unit 1 单元写作突破 影评通常包括两部分影评通常包括两部分，第一部分是简介第一部分是简介，第二部分是评论第二部分是评论。电影电影、电视电视 剧的简介包括故事的背景剧的简介包括故事的背景(setting)，故事情节故事情节(plot)和人物角色和人物角色(characters)等等。 评论就是自己的看法评论就是自己的看法，写作时要注意点面结合以及观点与材料的统一写作时要注意点面结合以及观点与材料的统一。评论评论 时以一般现在时为主时以一般现在时为主，简介视具体情况而定简介视具体情况而定。简介时用第三人称简介时用第三人称，评论用第评论用第 一人称一
2、人称。 常用表达 1.The plot/movie describes. 2.I think/In my opinion/From my point of view. 3.I really enjoyed. 4.One interesting anecdote contained in the film is that. 5.My favourite film is. 6.What an amazing film it is! 7.The film is full of special effects. 8.Even with these slight drawbacks，it is stil
3、l a great film. 返 回 写 作 训 练 请根据下面的材料请根据下面的材料，写一篇写一篇80词左右的短文词左右的短文，介绍电影介绍电影夜宴夜宴。 Night Banquet夜宴夜宴 Stars(Cast)：Zhang Ziyi(章子怡章子怡)，Daniel Wu(吴彦祖吴彦祖)，Zhou Xun(周迅周迅)，Ge You(葛优葛优) Director：Feng Xiaogang(冯小刚冯小刚) Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚：这部电影取材于莎士比亚(Shakespeare)的的哈姆雷特哈姆雷特(Hamlet)。故事故事 以五代十国为背景以五代十国为背景，通过争斗通过争斗、舞蹈和
4、讲故事的方式舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之讲述了宫廷中人与人之 间争权夺利的故事间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。 Review & comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。冯小刚用激动人心的故冯小刚用激动人心的故 事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌百看不厌。 审题审题 1.确定确定体裁：本文为一篇电影评论体裁：本文为一篇电影评论，属于说明文属于说明文。 2.确定确定时态：一般现在时为主时态：一般现在时为主。 3.确定确定人称：
5、第三人称和第一人称人称：第三人称和第一人称。 谋篇谋篇 第一段：电影简介第一段：电影简介。 第二段：情节介绍第二段：情节介绍。 第三段：对电影的评价第三段：对电影的评价。 遣词造句 核心词汇核心词汇 1.由由执导执导 _ 2.主演主演 _ 3.以以为为基础基础 _ 4.以以为为背景背景 _ 5.讲讲故事故事 _ 6.正义和正义和勇气勇气 _ 7.相继相继死去死去 _ 8.值得值得做做 _ be directed by star in be based on be set in tell a story justice and courage die off be worth doing 1.这
6、是冯小刚另一部代表作这是冯小刚另一部代表作。(masterpiece) _ 2.这部影片是由冯小刚导演的这部影片是由冯小刚导演的。(direct) _ 3.夜宴夜宴的情节取材于莎士比亚的的情节取材于莎士比亚的哈姆雷特哈姆雷特。(be based on) _ 4.这部电影以五代十国为背景这部电影以五代十国为背景。(be set in) _ _ 5.这部电影堪称精品这部电影堪称精品，值得反复观看值得反复观看。(worth) _ It is Feng Xiaogangs another masterpiece. It is directed by Feng Xiaogang. The plot of
7、 Night Banquet is based on Shakespeares Hamlet. The film is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. It is a masterpiece and worth seeing again and again. 连词成句连词成句 1.用过去分词作定语合并句用过去分词作定语合并句1和句和句2。 _ 2.用非限制性定语从句合并句用非限制性定语从句合并句3和句和句4。 _ _ 句式升级句式升级 It is another masterp
8、iece directed by Feng Xiaogang. The plot of Night Banquet，which is based on Shakespeares Hamlet，is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容再加上联想内容，组成一篇组成一篇 80词左右的英语短文词左右的英语短文。 Night Banquet is a history and martial arts
9、 film.It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang.Zhang Ziyi，Zhou Xun，Ge You，and Daniel Wu star in the film. 参考范文参考范文 返 回 The plot of Night Banquet，which is based on Shakespeares Hamlet，is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.Through fighting，dancing and
10、storytelling，it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people.Finally they died off at a night banquet. 参考范文参考范文 返 回 Feng Xiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice.It is a masterpiece and worth seeing again and again，so Id like
11、to recommend it to you all. 参考范文参考范文 返 回 假定你是李华，要参加一个关于电影影评的征文活动，请 根据以下所给要点写一篇影评投稿。要点如下： 1. 阿甘正传(Forrest Gump)是一部美国电影，改编自 Winston Groom的小说，由Tom Hanks主演； 2. 主人公Forrest Gump虽然智商低，但他豁达坚强，最终 获得成功成为一名橄榄球(football)明星、战争英雄和百万 富翁； 3. 你对影片的评价及感悟。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适 当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 审题 主题 电 影 体
12、裁 议论文 时态 一般现在时 人称 第三人称 写作要点 1. 电影的相关背景信息 2. 介绍电影当中的一些情节 3. 表达自己对这部电影的观影感悟 构思 列纲 Para. 1: The background information Para. 2: The plots of the film Para. 3: My reviews of the film A. 翻译短语 1. 由改编_ 2. 出生_ 3. 获得成功_ 4. 充满着_ 5. 传达信息_ 6. 对有积极的态度_ 7. 放弃_ B. 完成句子 1. 阿甘正传是一部美国电影。 Forrest Gump is _ _ film. 2.
13、这部电影改编自Winston Groom写的小说。 It _ _ _ the novel written by Winston Groom. be adapted from be born achieve success be filled with convey a message take a positive attitude towards give up an American is adapted from 3. 他成为一名橄榄球明星、战争英雄和后来的百万富翁。 He becomes a football star, a war hero and _ _ _. 4. 面对生活中的困
14、难时，我们不该放弃。 _ _ _ in life, we should not _ _. C. 句式升格 1. 将第1句和第2句用非限制性定语从句合并。 _ _ 2. 将第3句改为not only .but also结构的倒装句。 _ _ 3. 将第4句改为no matter what引导的让步状语从句。 _ _ later a millionaire Faced with difficulty give up Forrest Gump is an American film, which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom.
15、Not only does he become a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire. No matter what difficulty we face in life, we should not give up. Forrest Gump is one of the most inspirational films that leave a deep impression on me. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Forrest Gump is an American film
16、, which is adapted from the novel written by Winston Groom. Tom Hanks stars in the film. Forrest Gump, the main character, was unfortunately born with a lower IQ, but he is an open-minded person with strong determination. It is unbelievable that he has achieved great success at last. Not only is he
17、a football star, but he is also a war hero and later a millionaire. The film is filled with a tender feeling and kindness. Whats more, it conveys a message that we should take a positive attitude towards life. No matter what difficulty we face in life, we should not give up. Besides, the use of lang
18、uage is striking, which also makes the film a success. 第三部分 写作(共两节，满分40分) 第一节(满分15分) 假定你是李华，你的英国朊友Peter下个月将来你校进行短期游学，因此他 发邮件询问你该如何准备。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示欢迎；2. 从衣、食、住、行四个方面给出建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Dear Peter， Id like to express my sincere welcome for your coming
19、 next month. Herere some suggestions. First, it is neither too hot nor too cold in the city at that time. Bringing some light summer clothes will do. As for eating, people here are used to using chopsticks. It will be helpful if you have some practice ahead of time. Besides, to have a better knowledge of Chinese culture, I strongly recommend you to live with a Chinese family. Finally, it is convenient to use public transport in this city. Im looking forward to your arrival. Yours， Li Hua 谢谢观看谢谢观看
