1、Writing,Liu Wei,Liu Wei is a/an _ pianist.,Liu Wei is a _ pianist who _,famous,successful,plays the piano without hands.,Liu Wei is a pianist.,excellent,special,Tip 1:try to use different words and expressions,He is armless.,He _.,without hands,famous,has no hands,special,Tip2:try to make the senten
2、ce contain more information.,He plays the piano _.,Some information about Liu Wei,He was born in _.,He was born on _.,October, seventh,Beijing,Tip2:try to make the sentence contain more information.,He is _.,1987,He was born _.,on October, seventh, 1987,He was born in _.,He was born in _.,an ordinar
3、y family,He was born in _.,an ordinary family in Beijing,He is _.,He is shy _ sunny.,shy,sunny,but,Some information about Liu Wei,What happened to Liu Wei?,A wire hurt him.,His arms were useless.,Unluckily, he _ by accident and _ his arms.,Tip3:Pay attention to the tense and the voice when you tell
4、a story,was hurt,lost,Some information about Liu Wei,At the age of 19,When he was 19 (years old),_,he started to play the piano.,It was _.,He _ it.,interesting,difficult,was interested in,was crazy about,got over the difficulty to practice,so he,but he,It seems that its impossible for an armless per
5、son to play the piano, but he made it.,_,he started to play the piano.,How did he train?,He was crazy about playing the piano.,His toes were hurt.,He still kept training hard.,Tip 4. Conjunctive words can make the passage more coherent(连贯).,He played very well.,He won the first prize.,He played very
6、 well _ he won the first prize.,He spent more than 7 hours practicing it every day.,He was_ crazy about playing the piano _he spent more than 7 hours practicing it every day.,_his toes were hurt, he still kept training hard.,so,that,Though,so that,Why does he succeed?,a strong willwork hard never gi
7、ve up.,Nothing is impossible in the world if we try our best to do it.,Why does he succeed?,The reasons,He has a strong will.,He works hard and never gives up.,Do you know why Liu Wei is successful? _, he has a strong will._, he works hard and never gives up.,Firstly,Secondly,Tip 4. Conjunctive word
8、s can make the passage more coherent(连贯).,for one thing; for another,on the one hand; on the other hand,What have you learnt from Liu Wei?,His story _I _ to work hard with a positive attitude.,encourages me not to give up,make up my mind,encourage sb to do sthmake up ones mind to do sthplan to do st
9、hbe ready to do sthtry ones best to do sth,I have learnt a lot from Liu Wei.,Free talk,Who do you think has influenced you most? Why ?,人生如旅。 在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事人物.最近你校在举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生征文活动。,Writing,1. What you will write.2. How to organize the article:
10、 Beginning: Body: Ending: 3. How to write: Tip1: try to use different words and expressions Tip2: try to make the sentence contain more information Tip3: Pay attention to the tense and the voice when you tell a story Tip4: Conjunctive words can make the passage more coherent(连贯).,(A person),person i
11、ntroduction,experiences and the reasons of success,your thoughts,Thank you!,His famous words: For a person like me, there were only two choices. One was to give up all dreams, which would lead to a quick and hopeless death. The other was to struggle without arms to live an outstanding life.,Nothing is impossible in the world if we try our best to do it.,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
