1、教育理念,“尊重学生个体发展，快乐学习，快乐生活”。,Writing How to make your sentences more beautiful,课程目标,让学生了解如何用优美的英文句子表达思想，提高作文得分。,I like sping because its very good.,loveenjoyam fond ofam interested in,We can make sentences have the same meaning in different ways.,warmnicebeautifulcolorful,1.I like spring because its g
2、ood.2.I love spring because its warm.3.I enjoy spring because its nice.4.I am fond of spring because its beautiful.5.I am interested in spring because its colorful.,7分,10分,You need to make sentences more beautiful in your passages.,How to make sentences more beautiful,changing,1,3,2,1. You are very
3、kind. You help me study English.,2. He is a good student at school, and a good son at home.,Its very kind of you to help me study English.,He is not only a good student but also a good son.,How to make sentences more beautiful,changing,changing the _,3,2,forms,Its adj. for (of) sb. to do sth.not onl
4、y. but also.He istoofattowalk. She istootalltoenter the classroom. too.to. The more English you practise, the better your English is. The more., the more.I didnt realize my mistake until the teacher talked with me. not.until.,How to make sentences more beautiful,changing,changing the forms,3,2,1. Im
5、 very happy today.,2. Smoking is bad for your health. Please give it up.,How happy I am today!,Smoking is bad for your health. Why not give it up?,What a happy day I have today!,How to make sentences more beautiful,changing,changing the _,3,sentences,changing the forms,How (What) .Why not .There are
6、 some students running on the playgroud.There be.It takes me one hour to do sports at school every day.It takes sb. time to do sth.Summer is hot. That is the reason why I dont like it.That is the reason why .Youd better stay at home.Sb. had better do sth.,How to make sentences more beautiful,changin
7、g,changing the sentences,3,changing the forms,1. My father went to work, and he didnt have breakfast.,2. I want to tell you something about MH370.,I would like to tell you something about MH370.,My father went to work without having breakfast.,How to make sentences more beautiful,changing,changing t
8、he sentences,words,changing the forms,changing the _,like(enjoy/be interested in / be fond of)dont have.(without having.)want to(would like to) I think you are right.(I believe . / I m sure .)You should study hard.(Try your best to . / Do your best to.)You shouldnt eat junk food.(stay away from)Plea
9、se have to remember many words.(as many as sb. can),Discuss with your partners in your group, and try to change these sentences.,Competition,One,1. The music is very quiet and gentle, I like it very much. I like music _ _quiet and gentle.2. Mrs. Zhou told Tom that he mustnt throw paper on the ground
10、. Mrs. Zhou told Tom _ _ throw paper on the ground.3. Jim didnt visit the museum yesterday. He stayed at home. Jim stayed at home yesterday _ _ visiting the museum.,that,is,not,to,instead,of,4. The soup is too hot for the child to eat. The soup isnt _ _ for the child to eat.5. Peter draws well. Henr
11、y draws well, too. Henry draws _ well _ Peter.6. Shopping online is becoming more popular than before. Shopping online is becoming _ and _ popular.,cold,enough,as,as,more,more,Make this passage more beautiful!,Competition,Two,Many people are learning English now. English is very difficult. Its diffe
12、rent from Chinese. You have to remember many English words. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio and practice your listening. You have to talk with people in English. You can learn English from books and from people around you. If you have any q
13、uestions, please ask me. I think youll learn English well.,Many people are learning English now. Its _ for you _ its quite different from Chinese. You have to remember _ many English words _ _. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio _ practice you
14、r listening. _ _ _ to talk with people in English. You can learn English _ _ from books _ _ from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I _ _ youll learn English well.,difficult,because,as,as,possible,to,Try,your,best,not,only,but,also,am,sure,Competition,Write some sentences a
15、bout “Breakfast and Health”(2012年中考作文）我们大家都知道，早餐对我们来说很重要（as, be important to)一些学生经常吃不健康的食物。（instead)一些学生每天不吃早饭去上学。（without)每天吃一顿丰盛的早餐对我们每个人都很有必要.（Its necessary for sb. to do sth.),Three,As we know, breakfast is important to us.,Some students often have unhealthy food instead.,Besides, the rest of th
16、e students go to school without breakfast.,In my opinion, its very necessary for everyone to have a good breakfast every day.,Lets chant,Writing, writing, dont be afraid.Changing, changing, is a good way.What to change, change forms.What to change, change sentences.What to change, change words.Changing, changing, help you more.,Thank you !,U盘、电脑坏了？教学资料不见了？以前的资料没保存？每一届重复劳动？找不到精品课件、试题、教案反思？各大文库价格昂贵？来【163文库】吧，你可以：上传分享资料赚取零用钱；创建教学空间，分类收藏存储资料；方便下届使用；百万教学资源供你下载；【平台地址：】,
