1、Teaching objective At the end of the class, you will be able to: better your English writing from 5 aspects 第一档 （ 15-13） 评分标准 : What kind of writing can be outstanding? 文段表达评分标准 : 第一档 （ 15-13） 1.词汇丰富。 (Rich vocabulary) 2.句式多样 。 (Attractive sentences) 3.语言准确 。 (Correct grammar) 4.语意连贯 ,表达清楚，具有逻辑性 。 (
2、Tight logic) 5. 结构清晰。 (Clear structure) 6.完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全 , 详略得当。 (Outline) (1) Better the word. . enjoy am fond of am interested in I love running because it helps me lose weight and keep fit. 1. Rich vocabulary (1) Better the word. shapes Running helps both my body and my mind. 1. Rich vocabula
3、ry During the three years, I have taken part in different kinds of activities. (2) Better the phrase. a variety of various kinds of 1. Rich vocabulary Because of basketball, I develop unbreakable friendship with my teammates and become more confident. (2) Better the phrase. Thanks to Owing to 1. Rich vocabulary We will present you with a performance. (3) Add adj. We will present you with a well-prepared performance. 1. Rich vocabulary We were excited at the news. (3) Add adv. We were extremely excited at the news. 1. Rich vocabulary
