1、2019 年新人教版必修一 unit1 作文训练 应用文 亮点表达 1.建议信开头常用句式 I know you are now having trouble communicating with others， and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。 Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。 Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里有帮助你的一些建议
2、。 2.表达建议常用句式 First(ly)，why not join a club? If you do this，you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。 Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way，you will feel better. 其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。 Third(ly)， it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By d
3、oing this， you will calm yourself down. 第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。 Last but not least，you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。 As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。 3.建议信结尾常用句式 I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望你会发现这些办
4、法有用。 As time goes on，people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice. 如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。 I believe that if you follow my advice，youll get along well with your classmates. 我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。 【实战演练【实战演练】假如你是李华假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏
5、茹在交友方面存在着一些困难你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提请根据下面提 示给她写一封建议信。示给她写一封建议信。 1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友； 3.友谊需要时间和投入友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。 句型积累句型积累 知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble in.) _ _ 如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(beadj.to do) _ _ 要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not) _ _ 你和朋友同甘共苦
6、难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldnt it be a good idea.？) _ _ 正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes) _ _ 【实战演练【实战演练】假如你是李华假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提请根据下面提 示给她写一封建议信。示给她写一封建议信。 1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友； 3.友谊需要时间和投入友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。 连句成篇连
7、句成篇 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【练一练】假设你是李华，你的英国网友 Linda 最近在中国学习。她写信向你诉说了她的 困扰：不适应新的生活学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。 要点如下： 1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意：词数 80 左右(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。 Hi，Linda， Im sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. 参考答案 Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.
8、Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice. Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends? Wouldntitbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwith yourfriend? Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed. 参考范文 Dear Su Ru， I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However，the sit
9、uation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you. To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？In addition，wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes ， a friend in need is a friend indeed.Last but
10、not least，wouldnt it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort. I hope you will find these ideas useful. All the best. Yours， Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Linda， Imsorrytolearnthatyouarehavingsuchabadtime.Actually， most people
11、will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place，especially a foreign country.So dont worry too much. Here are some tips for you.First，youd better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible.Second，make more new fri
12、ends，who can share their hobbies and ideas with you.You will feel less homesick with many friends around you.Third，you should take part in some social activities.It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures. I hope my advice will be useful. Yours， Li Hua 第二节读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写
13、，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Growing up on a small farm,I lived a life that I took for granted.My father worked in the city as a plumber (水暖工).He was not highly educated, but he was smart, looking at problems in an engineers way.He was a man made of leather, brass and chewing tobacco who tried to teach my brother
14、and me useful things, including respect.He also had a temper and was strict with us for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes.Sometimes, my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didnt like him very much. One day I came home from primaryschool and his car was already there.On
15、ce inside, I was told by my mother that he didnt feel well.His back hurt.My father never missed work;in fact, when he came home, he went to the barn to work even more.I remember looking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the day. Later, my mother told me he got m
16、ultiple myeloma (多发性骨髓瘤), a type of blood cancer.As the cancer grows，the person will shrink because the disease destroys the bodys energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue.Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese, and when they break, they may never heal.But I didn
17、t realize that my fathers time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to. For the last year of my fathers life， his entire day consisted of rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think.He was predictably in that chair when I came home
18、 one day during the ninth grade.I do not remember where my mother and brother were，but the two of us were alone. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1： He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades la
19、ter. Paragraph 2： At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling. 【文章大意】我在一个小农场长大，我的父亲整天忙于工作和农活，他对我和弟弟一直 比较严格，因此有时我感觉他对我来说就像一个远处的敌人。这种情况一直持续到他身患 癌症也没有发生改变，直到有一天他把我叫到病床前，跟我敞开了心扉。 【写作指导】 根据 Paragraph 1 的开头“他让我坐下来， 说了一些几十年后仍让我感动的 话”可知，接下来第一段续写的内容应该是父亲跟我说的具体内容，应该是与他生活息息 相关的内容， 也会有对孩子的些许愧
20、疚等内容。 写作时可用到的词汇有 farm， bed， cancer， hospital 等。 根据 Paragraph 2 的开头“在那一刻， 我才意识到父爱无言”可知， 第二段侧重讲作者对与 父亲之间关系的感悟或对父亲离去的不舍等内容， 可用到的词汇有 enemy， father， remember 等。 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later.Lying on the hospital bed,he told me about hi
21、s life on the farm,his family growing up, his loves, and his heartbreaks.Although he was tortured by the cancer,his inner self rushed out to me in a great flood as if a pipe had burst all of a sudden.He had been speaking for maybe an hour or more and mentioned that he actually felt regretful about b
22、eing so strict with us. Paragraph 2： At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling.He was asking to be forgiven.All it took was to understand what he needed, and I forgave everything, immediately.The thought of my father being an enemy disappeared, with tears rolling down on my face.I held my fathers hands tightly, enjoying this deep but quiet love.Although he has gone for a long time, I still always remember that moment and the realization that I love him.
