1、Reading for Writing My friend Tom was cheated of money on the Internet. Can you give him some advice to help him stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet? Lead in Keep away from strange sites. Use strong passwords. Protect your privacy. Reading for main idea Read the blog post quic
2、kly and answer the questions. 1.Whats the main purpose of the blog post? 2. Whats Paragraph 2 mainly about? 3. Can you write a title for it? 1.Whats the main purpose of the blog post? 2. Whats Paragraph 2 mainly about? 3. Can you write a title for it? It is to tell the readers how to stay safe onlin
3、e and avoid bad experiences on the Internet. Three suggestions given by the blogger on how to surf the Internet more safely. Online safety/How to stay safe online Read the blog post again and answer the questions. 1. What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online? 2. Who are the onl
4、ine troublemakers the blog post mentions? 3. What does “a troll” mean? What does “a cyberbully” mean? 4. Do you have any more tips for how to surf the Internet safely? Share your ideas with a partner. Reading for details 1. What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online? 2. Who are
5、the online troublemakers the blog post mentions? 3. What does “a troll” mean? What does “a cyberbully” mean? 4. Do you have any more tips for how to surf the Internet safely? Share your ideas with a partner. First of all, leave immediately if you find something that makes you feel uncomfortable on t
6、he site. Second, protect your privacy. Third, be polite. Three kinds of people: an identity thief, a troll and a cyberbully A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online. A cyberbully uses the Internet to be mean to others. Like a troll, a cyberbully will als
7、o write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people. Dont give your real name or personal details such as your age, address or your school. Use a virus program to protect your computer from viruses or attacks. Read the text again and study the organization and language feature. 1.
8、Tick what the writer tells the reader in Para 1. definition of online safety the writers knowledge background information the topic of the post 2. What words and phrases does the writer use to organize the information in the Para 2? 3. How does the writer end the post? 4. Draw a mind map to show the
9、 structure of the blog. Reading for organization and language features Tick what the writer tells the reader in Paragraph 1. definition of online safetythe writers knowledge background informationthe topic of the post What words and phrases does the writer use to organise the information in the seco
10、nd paragraph? First of all; Second; Third. How does the writer end the post? By asking for comments. Online safety Introduction: the topic of the post Body: advice (First of all；Second； Third) Ending: ask for comments Draw a mind map to show the structure of the blog. Use what you have learnt to wri
11、te a blog post about Online shopping safety. Lets write 【写作指导】 【文体剖析】 网络博客文体是包含了网友评论、相关新闻 链接在内的一种新兴的新闻文体。它通常就某一 问题发表自己的观点, 体现了个性化的交流。文章 通常以陈述句居多, 也较多地采用疑问句和感叹句, 用来表达强烈的情感。 1. Today Ill blog about a questionhow do you stay safe online? Im not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a th
12、ing or two. 2.First of all, theres the golden rule of the Internet: If you see something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. Dont post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Dont give out your address or phone number. Someone might use them to steal y
13、our identity. Identity sheft is a common problem. Third, be polite. Being online is no excuse for being rude. 3.Do you have some good advice for staying safe online? Please post your comments bellow. Organization and Features 结构特点 Ending Introduction Body （主要内容）（主要内容） 把 A， B， C三项，填入相应的表格。 Introducti
14、on Body Ending C: Introduce the topic and what you know about the topic. B:Tell readers what they should do or keep in mind. A :Ask readers to write comments. C: Introduce the topic and what you know about the topic. B: Tell readers what they should do or keep in mind. A : Ask readers to write post
15、comments. Organization and Features 结构特点 话题语料积累话题语料积累 How to write a blog post? 1. Today I thought Id blog about a question that has been asked many times: how to.? 今天，我想我会在博客中谈论一个已被问过很多次的问题你如何.? 2. First of all,. Second,.Third,.首先，.第二.第三. 3. Have you ever had bad /similar/unforgettable experience o
16、nline? 你有什么糟糕的/相似的/难忘的在线经历吗？ 4. Do you have good advice/suggestions for .? 你有应对.的好的建议吗？ 5. Post your comments below. 请跟帖评论。 How to stay safe online? 1. Please keep in mind the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. 请记住
17、互联网的黄金法则：如果你看到或读到一些让你不舒服的内容，请立即离开这个网站。 2. Dont post comments or click on anything. 不要发表评论或点击任何内容。 3. Do not give out personal information, such as your full name, phone number, and home or work address. 不要泄露个人信息，如姓名，电话号码，家庭或工作地址。 4. Dont visit a website or click on a link you are not familiar with.
18、不要访问或点击你不熟悉的网址或链接。 5. Be polite online. 6. Avoid responding to messages from strangers, in general. 避免回复陌生人的信息。 Can you think of more expressions used to make suggestions? Writing a blog post about Online shopping safety I recommend that you should I think you should Why not? It is a good idea/choic
19、e to do How about/What about doing? I suggest that you should Youd better Topic Online shopping safety tips Write a blog. A 3-step method 3 steps to write the blog Step 1：Organization Step 2：Collecting information: 1.Use the website you are familiar with 2.Use strong password 3.Dont use public compu
20、ters IntroductionEndingBody first. second. besides, on one hand, on the other hand, so that, however, that /which/who(关系词关系词) . Step 3：Proper link words (Structure) :Online shopping safety Useful expressions 1. Today, I want to blog _ online shopping safety, which has caused _ (广泛的关注广泛的关注) nowadays.
21、 2. Many years _(作为一作为一名名) an online shopper have taught me _ (略知一二略知一二) about this topic . 3. Use the website you are _ _ (熟悉的熟悉的). 4. Shopping at a familiar website is _(好的选择好的选择) 5. _, _ _(此外，此外，避免使用避免使用) your birthday and phone number as your password. 6. Its better _(use) a mix of numbers and l
22、etters as your password. 7. _difficult the password is , _(密码越复杂，你就越安全密码越复杂，你就越安全) 8. Some people shop online at public places , _can make them become the _ (目目 标标) of hackers. 9. It is much safer to _.(在家网购在家网购) 10.Do you have some good _(好的建议分享？好的建议分享？) a thing or two the safer you are. a good cho
23、ice Besides avoid using familiar with The more shop at home which advice to share target about as a wide attention to use Useful expressions 1. 发表关于.的博客_ 2. 网上购物安全_ 3. 略知一个_ 4.对.熟悉_ 5. 这是一个好的选择_ 6.避免使用这个密码_ 7. 越复杂，越安全_ 8. 在公共场所_ 9.黑客的目标_ 10.在家购物_ 11.发表你的评论 _ know a thing or two Its a good choice. av
24、oid using this password be familiar with the more difficult. the safer. shop at home blog about . post your comments the target of/for hackers online shopping safety in public places 1.Use the website you are familiar with 2.Use difficult password 3.Dont use public computers Today, I want to blog ab
25、out online shopping safety, which has caused a wide attention nowadays. Many years as an online shopper have taught me a thing or two about this topic. First of all, youd better use the website you are familiar with. It is easy for us to be open-minded and try a new website, but for the sake of (为了为
26、了.起见起见) safety, shopping at a familiar website is a better choice. Second, many people think shop online at public places without problems. If you think so, there are more chances for you to be the target of hackers. A computer hacker is someone who tries to break into computer systems, especially i
27、n order to get secret information. Therefore, its much safer to shop at home. Besides, remember to use a strong password, avoiding using common information like your birthday or your phone number. Its better to use a mix of numbers and letters. As long as you use these safety tips, you have a better
28、 chance of being safe while shopping online. Do you have some good advice to share with us? you can post your comments below. One possible version Lets check Lets check Use the checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic? Are
29、 the tips and suggestions well organised? Has the writer defined the new words? Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations? Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions? Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes? 1. Continue to polish your draft. 2. Finish YOUR writing.
