1、Unit 2Sports and Fitness Part 6Writing 应用文写作 写作题目 假设你叫李华,你的澳大利亚朋友 Emily来信谈论了她最喜爱的体育运动,并希望了解你最喜爱的体 育运动。请根据以下提示用英语写一封回信。要点如下: 1.最喜欢的运动是什么; 2.为什么喜欢这项运动; 3.运动给你带来什么好处。 注意: 1.词数 100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Emily, Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 主题 介绍自己最喜欢的 体育运动 体裁应用文 人称以第一人称为主时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 布局
2、 第一部分:引出话题,说明写信目的; 第二部分:介绍自己最喜欢的体育运动,并说明原因; 第三部分:说明该项运动对自己的好处。 遣词造句 .用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1.n.羽毛球 2.favorite adj. 3.as至于 4.be deeply impressed by 5.优秀的技能 6.falllove with 爱上 7.build up ones body 8.not only.but also. 答案1.badminton2.最喜欢的3.for4.对印象深刻5.excellent skills6.in7.增强体质 8.不但而且 .本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)当我看
3、到林丹在奥运会上打羽毛球的时候,我对他优秀的技能印象深刻,我决定要像他一样。 When I watched Lin Danat the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressedhis excellent skills and I decided to be just like him. (2)我一开始打羽毛球就爱上了它,并养成了在周末和朋友一起打羽毛球的习惯。 Iwith badminton as soon as I started playing it and playing it with my friends at weekends. (3)现在我在我学
4、校的羽毛球队,这让我很自豪。 Now I am on my school badminton team, and itme very proud. (4)打羽毛球不仅增强了我的体质,而且帮助我结交了很多新朋友。 Playing badmintonbuilds up my body,helps me make a lot of new friends. 2.句式升级 (5)用 which引导的定语从句改写句(3)。 (6)用倒装句改写句(4)。 答案(1)playing badminton;by(2)fell in love; formed the habit of(3)makes(4)not
5、only; but also (5)Now I am on my school badminton team, which makes me very proud. (6)Not only does playing badminton build up my body, but also it helps me make a lot of new friends. 连句成篇 参考范文 基础篇 Dear Emily, I am happy to hear from you. As for my favorite sport, Id say its badminton. When I watche
6、d Lin Dan playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by his excellent skills and I decided to be just like him. I fell in love with badminton as soon as I started playing it and formed the habit of playing it with my friends at weekends. As time goes by, I have greatly improved m
7、y skills. Now I am on my school badminton team, and it makes me very proud. Playing badminton not only builds up my body, but also helps me make a lot of new friends. It makes my life more enjoyable. Yours, Li Hua 提升篇 Dear Emily, I am so delighted to hear from you. As for my favorite sport, Id say i
8、ts badminton. Watching Lin Dan playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by his excellent skills and I decided to be just like him. I fell in love with badminton as soon as I started playing it and formed the habit of playing it with my friends at weekends. As time goes by, I ha
9、ve greatly improved my skills. Now I am on my school badminton team, which makes me very proud. Not only does playing badminton build up my body, but also it helps me make a lot of new friends. It makes my life more enjoyable. Yours, Li Hua 写作积累 1.As time goes by, I have greatly improved my skills.
10、(As意为“随着”,引导时间状语从句) 2.Not only does playing badminton build up my body, but also it helps me make a lot of new friends.(Not only位于句首引起的部分倒装) 3.Watching Lin Dan playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by his excellent skills and I decided to be just like him.(现在分词短语作时间状语) 实战演练答
11、案见 P113 (2019陕西渭南中学高一上第三次月考,) 假如你是高一学生李华,你平时非常喜欢运动。请以 My Favorite Sport 为题并根据以下提示写一篇 英语短文。 1.你最喜欢的运动; 2.你喜欢该运动的原因。 注意:1.词数 100左右; 2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。 概要写作 写作题目 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容概要。 A travel diary is an individuals record of his or her travels. This may be kept in a personal journal or diary and
12、only read by the individual, or it may be kept online in a blog. The individual may then share the travel diary with others. Many people keep travel diaries so they better remember all the details of the trip, and keep track of where they have been, particularly if they are frequent travelers. There
13、 is no right or wrong way to keep a travel diary. Some people just buy a simple diary and set down basic notes throughout their trip. Others will buy a special travel diary and write lengthy descriptions of each day or special events of the trip. Whatever the form is, it is important not to get bogg
14、ed down in the way it is “supposed” to be done, and just write it in the way that seems the most natural. A travel diary is not only used for writing. Many diaries have places to insert photos or souvenirs, such as ticket stubs. Keeping all of your travel memorabilia (纪念品)in one place is a great way
15、 to save them for later trips, and many people choose to combine their travel diaries and photo albums into a sort of scrapbook. This is another great thing to share with others. Keeping a travel diary on a website can be a great way to connect with other people who are interested in traveling, or t
16、o share adventures with friends and family who may live far. It is easy to upload photos to a website as well, and to make it even more descriptive. Individuals can choose whether they want to protect the website with a password, or only make it accessible to certain people. Besides, a public travel
17、 blog makes the information open to anyone. If keeping a travel blog online, be sure to back it up regularly to make sure all the travel memories are not lost. 思路点拨 一、归纳大意 本文是一篇说明文,是典型的“”结构,结构明确,要点清晰。全文共分四段,每段的中心大意 如下: 第一段: 第二段: 第三段: 第四段: 二、定位主要内容 在读懂原文、抓住大意的基础上,逐段定位每段的主要内容,并记录下来。 第一段: 第二段: 第三段: 第四段
18、: 三、转换表达 要点 1第一段的主要内容可以概括为要点 1,该要点含有两部分,可以用表示自然导致的结果。 an individuals record of his or her travels可以表述为 a record oftravels;该段中 The individual may then share the travel diary with others. Many people keep travel diaries so they better remember all the details of the trip.描述的是旅行日记的好处,即既有益于自己,也有益于他人,可以表
19、述 为。 要点 2第二段的主要内容可以概括为要点 2,该要点介绍了旅行日记的写作特点,含有两部分内容,可以 用连接两个并列分句来表述。首句 There is no right or wrong way to keep a travel diary.说 明旅行日记的形式多样,可以用 it doesnt matter.句型转述;该段尾句 it is important 可以用 what 引导的 主语从句来转述。 要点 3第三段的主要内容可以概括为要点 3,该段叙述了日记本中插入照片和纪念品的作用,该段尾句 This is another great thing to share with othe
20、rs.可以用作目的状语的形式来表述。 要点 4第四段的主要内容可以概括为要点 4,该段阐述了在博客中分享旅行日记的好处,并提出注意点: 注意备份,以防丢失。可以用引导的非限制性定语从句来表述注意事项。 答案一、总分; 第一段:旅行日记的定义和作用。 第二段:旅行日记的常见写作方式:用普通的笔记本写下基本旅行过程或在专门的旅行笔记本中详细描述 旅途见闻。 第三段:许多旅行日记中都有插入图片和纪念品的地方,让旅游者能更好地与他人分享。 第四段:在博客中写旅行日记是与他人分享的好方法,但是注意要经常备份。 二、 第一段:A travel diary is an individuals record
21、of his or her travels. 第二段:Whatever the form is, it is important not to get bogged down in the way it is “supposed” to be done, and just write it in the way that seems the most natural. 第三段:Many diaries have places to insert photos or souvenirs, such as ticket stubs. 第四段:Keeping a travel diary on a
22、website can be a great way to connect with other people who are interested in traveling, or to share adventures with friends and family who may live far. 三、 要点 1:现在分词;ones; benefit you and others 要点 2:and; what matters 要点 3:动词不定式 要点 4: which 连句成篇 参考范文 A travel diary is a record of ones travels, bene
23、fiting you and others.(要点 1)It doesnt matter whether the diary is formal, and what matters is that the diary is kept naturally.(要点 2)Many diaries have places for photos or souvenirs for you to share better.(要点 3)Writing a travel diary on a website is a good way to connect with others, which needs to
24、 be backed up regularly for security.(要点 4) 写作积累 1.A travel diary is a record of ones travels, benefiting you and others. (现在分词作结果状语) 2.It doesnt matter whether the diary is formal, and what matters is that the diary is kept naturally.(It 作形式主语,whether引导的从句是真正的主语;what 引导主语从句;that引导表语从句) 3.Writing a
25、travel diary on a website is a good way to connect with others, which needs to be backed up regularly for security.(动名词短语作主语;which引导非限制性定语从句) 实战演练答案见 P114 (2020浙江宁波北仑中学高一上期中,) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容概要。 Without water, your body would stop working properly. Water makes up more than half of your body
26、 weight, and a person cant survive for more than a few days without it. Why? Your body has lots of important jobs and it needs water to do many of them. For instance, your blood, which contains a lot of water, carries oxygen to all the cells of your body. Without oxygen, those tiny cells would die a
27、nd your body would stop working. Most people think they can get water only from drinking water. However, they can get enough liquid through the drinks they consume every day. These include water, fruit juice, coffee, soda, iced tea, and other drinks. Your body doesnt get water only from drinking wat
28、er. Any liquid you drink contains water. Lots of foods contain water, too. Fruit contains quite a bit of water, which you could probably tell if youve ever eaten a peach or a plum and felt the juice dripping down your chin! Vegetables, also, contain a lot of water. How much water should people drink
29、? Many people believe they are supposed to drink eight glasses of water a day, or about two liters. Why? Because that is what they have been told all their lives. But a new report offers some different advice. Experts say people should obey their bodies; they should drink as much water as they feel
30、like drinking. The report says most people meet their daily need for liquid by letting thirst be their guide. You lose water when you breathe, sweat and so on. So you need to supplement(补充) enough liquid to stay healthy. If you dont get enough water, you could become dehydrated (脱水的). If you get ver
31、y dehydrated, your body will no longer have enough liquid to circulate. This is very dangerous. Dehydration also can keep you from being as fast and sharp as youd like to be. Serious dehydration can even make you sick. 五年高考练 .阅读理解 (2018北京,A) My First Marathon(马拉松) A month before my first marathon, o
32、ne of my ankles was injured and this meant not running for two weeks, leaving me only two weeks to train. Yet, I was determined to go ahead. I remember back to my 7th year in school. In my first P.E. class, the teacher required us to run laps and then hit a softball. I didnt do either well. He later
33、 informed me that I was“not athletic”. The idea that I was “not athletic”stuck with me for years. When I started running in my 30s, I realized running was a battle against myself, not about competition or whether or not I was athletic. It was all about the battle against my own body and mind. A test
34、 of wills! The night before my marathon, I dreamt that I couldnt even find the finish line. I woke up sweating and nervous, but ready to prove something to myself. Shortly after crossing the start line, my shoe laces(鞋带) became untied. So I stopped to readjust. Not the start I wanted! At mile 3, I p
35、assed a sign:“GO FOR IT, RUNNERS!” By mile 17, I became out of breath and the once injured ankle hurt badly. Despite the pain, I stayed the course walking a bit and then running again. By mile 21, I was starving! As I approached mile 23, I could see my wife waving a sign. She is my biggest fan. She
36、never minded the alarm clock sounding at 4 a.m. or questioned my expenses on running. I was one of the final runners to finish. But I finished! And I got a medal. In fact, I got the same medal as the one that the guy who came in first place had. Determined to be myself, move forward, free of shame a
37、nd worldly labels(世俗标签), I can now call myself a “marathon winner”. 词汇积累 1.run laps 跑圈 2.readjust v.重新调整 3.approach v.靠近; 接近 4.determined adj.下定决心的;坚决的 1.A month before the marathon, the author. A.was well trained B.felt scared C.made up his mind to run D.lost hope 2.Why did the author mention the P
38、.E. class in his 7th year? A.To acknowledge the support of his teacher. B.To amuse the readers with a funny story. C.To show he was not talented in sports. D.To share a precious memory. 3.How was the authors first marathon? A.He made it. B.He quit halfway. C.He got the first prize. D.He walked to th
39、e end. 4.What does the story mainly tell us? A.A man owes his success to his family support. B.A winner is one with a great effort of will. C.Failure is the mother of success. D.One is never too old to learn. .七选五 (2019北京) Much of the work in todays world is accomplished(完成) in teams. Most people be
40、lieve the best way to build a great team is to gather a group of the most talented individuals.1Companies spend millions hiring top business people. Is their money well spent? 2They focused on football, basketball and baseball. The results are mixed. For football and basketball, adding talented play
41、ers to a team proves a good method, but only up to the point where 70% of the players are top talent; above that level, the teams performance begins to decline. Interestingly, this trend isnt evident in baseball, where additional individual talent keeps improving the teams performance. To explain th
42、is phenomenon, the researchers explored the degree to which a good performance by a team requires its members to coordinate(协调) their actions.3In baseball, the performance of individual players is less dependent on teammates. They conclude that when task interdependence is high, team performance wil
43、l suffer when there is too much talent, while individual talent will have positive effects on team performance when task interdependence is lower. If a basketball star is, for example, trying to gain a high personal point total, he may take a shot himself when it would be better to pass the ball to
44、a teammate, affecting the teams performance. Young children learning to play team sports are often told,“There is no I in TEAM.”4 Another possibility is that when there is a lot of talent on a team, some players may make less effort. Just as in a game of tug-of-war(拔河比赛),whenever a person is added,
45、everyone else pulls the rope with less force. 5An A-team may require a balancenot just A players, but a few generous B players as well. A.Its not a simple matter to determine the nature of talent. B.Sports team owners spend millions of dollars attracting top talent. C.The group interaction and its e
46、ffect drew the researchers attention. D.Stars apparently do not follow this basic principle of sportsmanship. E.Several recent studies examined the role of talent in the sports world. F.Building up a dream team is more complex than simply hiring the best talent. G.This task interdependence distingui
47、shes baseball from football and basketball. 1.2.3.4.5. 词汇积累 1.individual n.个体, 个人adj.个别的, 独特的 2.focus on 聚焦于 3.up to 到达 4.phenomenon n.现象 .语法填空 (2018课标全国) According to a review of evidence in a medical journal, runners live three years1(long)than non-runners. You dont have to run fast or for long2(s
48、ee)the benefit. You may drink, smoke, be overweight and still reduce your risk of3(die)early by running. While running regularly cant make you live forever, the review says it4(be)more effective at lengthening life5walking, cycling or swimming. Two of the authors of the review also made a study publ
49、ished in 20146showed a mere five to 10 minutes a day of running reduced the risk of heart disease and early deaths from all7(cause). The best exercise is one that you enjoy and will do. But otherwise.its probably running. To avoid knee pain, you can run on soft surfaces, do exercises to8(strength)yo
50、ur leg muscles(肌 肉),avoid hills and get good running shoes. Running is cheap, easy and its always9(energy). If you are time poor, you need run for only half the time to get the same benefits as other sports, so perhaps we should all give10a try. 1.2.3.4.5. 6.7.8.9.10. 词汇积累 1.review n.述评,汇报,报告 2.bene