1、1 Unit1 过关检测过关检测 UNIT 1 过关检测试卷过关检测试卷 第一部分知识第一部分知识.清单破清单破 .核心单词核心单词 A.写作词汇一写词形写作词汇一写词形 1.adj.至关重要的;关键性的 2.adj.必不可少的;极其重要的;充满生机的 3.vt.(尤指经努力)获得;贏得 vi.(规章、习俗等)存在;流行 4.vt.承认(属实、权威等) ; (公开)感谢 5.vi. 最后表达自己对人物的看法。 人称为第三人称。文章应分两个层次:一是介绍梁建英(要点 1),二是表达看法(要点 24 2)。在介绍梁建英时应依据题目所给的表格进行构思,先介绍梁建英的职务、出生 年份,再介绍其主要经历
2、;注意题目所给要点要齐全,不要有遗漏或省本文属于人物 介绍类文章,时态以一般过去时为主, 第二步第二步:添加细节,文意更丰满,表达更亮眼及她获奖后的表现。句式丰富多彩,要 点齐全是高分的基础,因此需要对句式进行升级拓展,使文章表达更充实,内容更 丰富 第三步第三步:连句成文,排语句顺序,重衔接过渡使文章衔接紧密,过渡自然。本文可分 为两段来写,第一段介绍梁建英,第二段表达自己的看法。结合要点,根据上下文 之间的逻辑关系,可添加过渡性词汇 afterwards,as a consequence,however。 【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思 连贯, 符
3、合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句, 如: Since she graduated in 1995,she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high-speed railway.这句话运用了 since 引导的时间状语从句;文章也使用了一 些固定词组,如 be born in; as a consequence; set a good example to 等。全文中没有 中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分 明,上下句
4、转换自然,为文章增色添彩。 第二节第二节 47. 阅读下列短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging a photograph of her father with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy”, she said softly, “Why wont you come back?” Ins
5、tead of gradually adjusting to her fathers death, Desiree refused to accept it. “Daddy will be home soon,” shed tell her mother. “Hes at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chatting with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,” shed say, “When will you come back?” Desirees s
6、ituation made her mother worried. Days later, it was Kens birthday. “How will I send him a card?” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said, “and send it up to heaven?” Desirees eyes immediately lit up. Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked ou
7、t a balloon with HAPPY BIRTHDAYabove a drawing of The Little Mermaid(美人鱼). Desiree and her father had 25 often watched it. The childs eyes shone as they were on the way to Kens grave. Then Desiree dictated a letter to her dad. “Tell him, Happy birthday, I love you and miss you,” she rattled off(快速说)
8、. “ I hope you get this and can write to me on my birthday in January.” Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watche
9、d the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till disappear. “Now Dads going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently. Every day since theyd released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has my balloon yet?” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking. 注
10、意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. _ _ Paragraph 2 Desirees fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a packa
11、ge arrived. _ _ 【答案】One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon, with a piece of paper at the end of the string, wrapped in plastic. Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines to his wife Do
12、nna. She was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, Donna decided to help Desiree. The couple went to buy a birthday card and a book of The Little 26 Mermaid, and then she began to write a letter to Desiree. Desirees fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived. Looking at the un
13、familiar return address, Desirees mother was confused. Suddenly an idea struck her: the balloon! She opened the parcel and found a card with “For a Dear Daughter.” Her heart raced. She rushed to Desirees room and showed her the letter. “Its from daddy!” Desiree jumped with joy, asking her mother to
14、read it for her. “ Happy birthday, my little angel .” Her mother began.Abig tear began to trickle down Desirees cheek. 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写,要求根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完 整的故事。 【详解】 前文主要讲述的是四岁的 Desiree 不肯相信她爸爸已经去世的消息, 在爸爸 生日的当天,与妈妈一起放飞气球,希望送给爸爸礼物,之后 Desiree 一直问妈妈是 否爸爸收到她的礼物。 在给的第一段开头中, One day, 3,000 miles aw
15、ay, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. Wade 是收到气球的 人, 要讲述 Wade 收到气球的心情。 在给的第二段开头中, Desirees fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived.根据上一段, 是 Wade 送给 Desiree 的生日 礼物,要讲述 Desiree 和她妈妈收到礼物的事情。 【高分句型】Donna was so moved that she wanted to do a good thing for the little girl. 唐娜如此感动,她想为这个小女孩做一件好事。sothat如此以至于 27