1、概要写作概要写作运用运用“4个个”语言技能语言技能做到做到逻辑逻辑层次层次“清清”、语言变换、语言变换“美美”概要写作常备优秀元素一、巧用导入句，亮人一眼一、巧用导入句，亮人一眼1A survey/An experiment/An invention/A research. finds/discovers/proves/shows.2According to a recent survey/experiment/invention.3According to experts/specialists/Dr. White.4Experts/Specialists/Researchers. say.
2、5It is expected that.6Hopefully，.二、改写句子，方法独特二、改写句子，方法独特1同义替换：例如：is good tobenefit；be afraid to doprevent/discourage.from；too muchexcessive(高级词汇)；the same aslikewise(高级词汇)。2反义转换：例如：sincereinsincere；encouragediscourage。3词性转换：例如：recognize your childparents recognition；strongly againststrong opposition。
3、4利用介词短语法We are sure to finish it in time because so many people are helping us.With so many people helping us, we are sure to finish it in time.5句式变化法(1)语态变换It is widely accepted that more people use computers in the world today.Computers are widely used in the world today.(2)简单句合并为复合句The weather tu
4、rned out to be very good.This was more than we could expect.The weather turned out to be very good，which was more than we could expect.(3)连词衔接法He insisted on staying.He was not willing to go.He insisted on staying rather than going.(4)语序改变法Professor White，Professor Smith and many other guests were p
5、resent at the meeting.Present at the meeting were Professor White，Professor Smith and many other guests.(5)特殊句式法(not.but，倒装，there be，etc.)The quality of praise is more important than the quantity.What matters here isnt quantity but quality.三、巧用代词连词，概要结构紧凑三、巧用代词连词，概要结构紧凑写概要第三步：衔接。积累并熟练掌握充当句子内部或者句子之间的
6、逻辑关系的衔接手段。优先考虑使用最短连接词，常见衔接词如下：转折 but，however，yet，nevertheless结果 so，thus，therefore，consequently，in fact原因 because，as，since，for，due to/owing to对比 instead，likewise，on the contrary让步 though，as，although，despite列举 first(ly)，next/later，then，finally/eventually增补 also，besides，whats more，moreover，furthermore，
7、in addition，above all.举例 for example，for instance替代 alternatively解释 namely，in other words，which means，refer to，that is to say，or rather目的 assumed to，aim to，mainly deal with，focus on四、高频词汇高人一头四、高频词汇高人一头在概要写作中你可以利用这些词语替换原文中的词汇1about关于concerning，regarding，related to，be relevant to2actually事实上in fact，as
8、 a matter of fact，in reality3aim at旨在be aimed to，be aimed at，be intended to，be meant to4appear出现appearance，turn up，show up5approach靠近，临近come near，draw near6besides而且，另外additionally，in addition，whats more，moreover，furthermore7be pride of为感到骄傲/自豪take pride in8energetic精力充沛的full of energy9have fun玩得开心e
9、njoy oneself，have a good time10hold举行take place11honor/honour纪念in honour of12intelligent聪明的clever，wise，smart，bright，brilliant13in a word总之all in all，in conclusion，in short，in brief，to sum up14finally最后in the end，eventually，at the end of15in the beginning开始at the start of，to begin with五、针对学生易犯错误，写完后自
10、问五、针对学生易犯错误，写完后自问1内容涵盖全部要点了吗？各要点是否独立表述？2内容理解正确吗？避开陈述个人观点了吗？3用自己的语言(变换词汇及语法结构)组织概要了吗？(严禁整句抄自原文)4使用连接成分(代词、连词)使上下文连贯了吗？5呈现的是最精简的概要吗？字数多于60词了吗？Writing 12021浙江省高考英语仿真模拟卷1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Is a knife a useful instrument or a dangerous weapon? It depends on how it is used. Its the same with techno
11、logy. The greatest inventions are those that affect the mass of people; and one of those greatest inventions are cell phones. They have revolutionized the human existence. This is possible only because they are getting cheaper and cheaper day by day. The technology has made it even easier to give th
12、em a longer life.Undoubtedly，if cell phones are in right hands，no matter how far we are sitting we can talk anytime anywhere! We can watch favourite TV shows，listen to favourite songs，etc，as cell phones are equipped with all high-tech features. In fact，its good to the parents as well as children. Pa
13、rents can every time monitor their children and children are also safe. If anyone is in any kind of danger she or he can call for help immediately.There are always two sides of a coin. The advanced technology has caused a danger that we keep ignoring. The cell phones have progressed rapidly and at t
14、he same time they provide us with more tasks than what we would attempt.When a person is multitasking rather than completing a single task. This causes burden and results in stress. Also cell phones have made terrorist attacks in the world very easy. This has become a global matter of concern. Besid
15、es，children spend much of their time in playing games，listening songs，etc. Instead of going out and playing，they stick to their easy chairs and play games on their phones，which is very harmful to them!Now mobile phones have come into our lives so much that some have started considering it as an inev
16、itable part of their lives. They are addicted to it like a drug addict and some have gone even worse！Using cell phones while driving has contributed 10% to the road accidents.We should always remember，that there lives a wise man between the valley of two mountains. Plain and pleasure are a result of
17、 modern technology. Are cell phones a useful instrument or a dangerous weapon? The answer lies in our hands!_参考范文：Cell phones are one of the greatest inventions of modern technology. But just as there are always two sides of a coin，they have many advantages and disadvantages. Their main advantage is
18、 to make our life easier and more convenient. On the other hand，they have a bad effect on our life. To be honest，whether they are a useful instrument or a dangerous weapon is decided by us human.Writing 22021浙江省高考英语仿真模拟卷2阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Imagine living on the edge of a vast desert, which is
19、 moving quietly closer to your village every day and covering your fields. The desert is on the move. This is called desertification.Desertification occurs in regions close to an already existing desert. It generally arises from two related causes. The first is over-use of water in the area. There i
20、s not enough water in any case, and if it is not carefully used, disaster can follow. As time goes on, water shortages make farming more and more difficult. In some places，locals can remember local lakes and marshes which were once the homes for all kinds of fish and birds. They have been completely
21、 buried by the sand now. Farmers leave the land, and fields are replaced by deserts.The second cause is misuse or over-use of the land. This means that the wrong crops are planted and need more water than is available. Ploughing large fields and removing bushes and trees means that the wind will blo
22、w away the soil. Once the soil is lost, it is hard to replace, and if there is rain, it has nowhere to go, and brings no benefit.It is not only the farmers and villagers who suffer. Every spring, the skies over some of eastern cities, thousands of kilometers away from the deserts, can be darkened by
23、 sandstorms. Dust from deserts can have a great effect on weather systems. While desertification is perhaps being partly caused by global warming, these sandstorms can make global warming worse by adding to what is known as the greenhouse effect.What can be done to slow down or stop the process of d
24、esertification? A great deal of work is already under way. Obviously first steps are to find new water sources. Tree planting can help, by providing barriers between desert and rich field. Some types of grass also hold the soil together, and stop the wind taking it. Without these efforts, it will be
25、 harder and harder to stop the worlds deserts in their tracks, and more and more farmers will give up and head for cities. The lesson to be learnt lies beneath the sand._参考范文：Desertification, the tendency of desert moving and covering nearby fields, is mainly caused by overusing water and misusing the land. It not only does harm to the residents but also has negative effects on weather systems. To deal with it, new water sources should be discovered, and trees and grasses can be planted to set barriers and solidify the soil.
