1、1 浙江高考读后续写微技能浙江高考读后续写微技能| | 1212 种高分开头种高分开头 浙江高考读后续写已经进行了浙江高考读后续写已经进行了 4 次次。如何写好读后续写在高考中博取阅卷如何写好读后续写在高考中博取阅卷 老师的眼球获得梦寐以求的高分老师的眼球获得梦寐以求的高分，如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出，获得获得 20+高分这是很多老师和学生一直在不懈努力的课题高分这是很多老师和学生一直在不懈努力的课题。今天小编将带着大家一今天小编将带着大家一 起来探究一下如何写好读后续写的开头起来探究一下如何写好读后续写的开头？可以使用哪些写作技能和手法可以使用哪些写作技
2、能和手法？一一 个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的 兴趣兴趣，并且愿意听下去并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个好的故事开头就好比是 一个带着香味十足的诱饵一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的而一个拙劣的 故事开头故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡恹恹欲睡。“well begun is half done！”可见可见， 写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要写好一个好
3、故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么到底在时间紧迫的考场上如何写那么到底在时间紧迫的考场上如何写 出靓丽的开头呢出靓丽的开头呢？我们此文主要从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来探究我们此文主要从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来探究。 1. An adverb Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. Joyfully he skipped up the street. Para 1： (2016. 10 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
4、 Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间 副词衔接+环境描写） 2. 2. An adj. phrase Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave. Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot. (2016.10 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperat
5、e and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her 2 face. （并列情绪形容词） (2016.10 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （状 态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句） (2018.06 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabb
6、it jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形容词+从句) (2018.06 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 3. A particip
7、le (-ing or ed word) Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door. Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over. (2016.10 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for anothe
8、r night. （现在分词+情绪形容词） (2016.10 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out. （现在分词+状态形容词） 4. A conjunction As he walked, he whistled Although he was afraid, he jumped right in. 5. A prepositional phrase At the
9、end of the lane he suddenly stopped. At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice. 6. A dialogue or a monologue “Lets see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny. “Hold on tight!” My father yelled. We just finished bucking in as
10、 the coaster jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride. (2017.06 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get 3 into the car.“ Paul shouted at Mac. 7. A character Mark is a studious boy who loves reading. His classmates often tease him for being too hardworking
11、 and they call him Mr. Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home 8. An emotion The moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tinas eyes and falling down her cheeks. 9. A setting I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gen
12、tly opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach. The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldnt even see my hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget. (2017.11 浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through sever
13、al states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉视觉+环境描写环境描写+拟人拟人） 10. An action Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw
14、his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk. (2017.11 浙 江 高 考 读 后 续 写 范 文 摘 录 )Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写动作描写+问句衔接问句衔接） 11. Sound effects
15、BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared. 12. A question Have you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer. Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a “kick me“ sign on my back or something? fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）
