1、图画作文 描述图画 (就事论事) 阐述图画内涵并拓展 (提炼漫画所想表达的意义,并围绕该含义,或通过举例具体化,或者分析背后产生的原因,或者分析可能产生的影响) 提出建议、措施、并评价建议或者措施可能的效果。 1.1 _. 1.2_ 1.3_. 2.1 _. 2.2-2.6_.3.1 _.3.2-3.5_第一段的写作1.1: 引出图画1.2: 图画内容介绍 (一般进行时态或者一般现在时)1.3:总结并为第二段做好铺垫1.1句写作模式: ”当谈及.话题时,有一幅非常有意思的图画非常值得一提。 When it comes to the topic of internet, it is worth
2、mentioning an interesting cartoon. 对于那些谈论.话题的人们,我推荐给他们一幅非常有趣的漫画”To those who talk about cooperation, I recommend them seeing a cartoon.1.2 句写作模式:“ 在这幅图画中,.In the cartoon, .1.3 句写作模式:”尽管图画很简单, 其寓意却是非常深刻的.“A simple drawing as it is, the meaning is profound.练习1 When it comes to the topic of culture, it
3、 is worth mentioning an interesting cartoon. In this cartoon, we can see a huge hotpot in which a variety of “foods” are blended and boiled. Some of them are traditional Chinese culture, such as Taoism, Kongfu, Peking Opera, and Buddhism while others are western, such as Einstein, Shakespeare, and p
4、ostmodernism. Below the hotpot is a line of words which say “cultural hotpot: healthy and tasty.”A simple drawing as it is, the meaning is profound.练习2 When it comes to the topic of culture, it is worth mentioning an interesting cartoon.In this cartoon, a large number of people are sitting in front
5、of computers. They are communicating via the internet, but everyone lives in their own small space/room. Below the picture is a line of words which say “Internet brings us closer but at the same time it makes us feel lonely.” (the far and near of the Internet) A simple drawing as it is, the meaning
6、is profound.练习3 第二段的写法第二段的写法写重要性分析现象+背后的原因+影响。写重要性 模式1:重要性+例证+小总结 模式2: 重要性+分两个方面+小总结分析现象背后的原因 现象+两个、三个方面的原因+小总结第二段的写法-写重要性模式1: 重要性+分两个方面 显而易见,漫画作者是要我们关注_的重要性。该重要性体现在两个方面。一方面, . 另一方面,. . 没有_, 很难想象一个人、一个社会会取得进步。It is fairly evident that the cartoonist aims at drawing our attention to the importance of
7、 _. Such importance is twofold. For one thing, _. For another, _. Without it, it would be hard to imagine that a person or a country can achieve any great progress.模式2:重要性+例证+小总结 显而易见,漫画作者是要我们关注_的重要性。找不到比以下更好的例子来证明它有多么重要。一个例子是.; 另一个例子是.。没有了_, 很难想象一个人、一个社会会取得进步。It is fairly evident that the cartoonis
8、t aims at drawing our attention to the importance of _. No better illustration of this idea can be found than the example mentioned below. One is _. Another example is _. Without it, it would be hard to imagine that a person or a country can achieve any great progress.第二段的写法-写现象写现象(揭示现象+分析现象原因+分析现象影
9、响) 显而易见,漫画作者是要我们关注我们社会中的一个现象:_. 该现象主要原因是_. 该现象的流行,已经并且将会继续产生如下影响。首先,.其次,.It is fairly evident that the cartoonist aims at drawing our attention to a phenomenon in our society:_. A chief reason why this is happening is that _. Such a phenomenon will likely impact our society profoundly. For one thing
10、, _. For another, _. 重要性万能句型It improves individuals overall well-being and quality of life to a higher level. Unless we protect our environment, we will live a life of mediocre, a life that leads us nowhere.It contributes to a better society or even a better world in which people from all walks of l
11、ife live hormouniously with each other, helping each other and having faith in each other. As long as we respect and care for the old and the young population, we can expect a brighter and more prosperous future of the nation.Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something val
12、uable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition.Without confidence in ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated.Only being confident can
13、you put your capacities into full play and can you become the winner in the society.重要性的思考角度:1. 个人个人拥有更好的工作 ( have a better career, secure a higher-paying job )朋友 (make more friends, become more popular, gain more personal charm)健康 ( become healthier, enjoy a longer life, have a stronger body,)成功 (
14、reap more success, achieve higher goals, realize ones dream)快乐 ( feel happier and satisfied)见识 ( widen ones horizons )2. 社会社会变得更加和谐 ( peaceful, harmonious)繁荣 (prosperous)美丽 ( beautiful, attractive, a land of blessings)富强 ( wealthy, powerful, have more influence in the international community)原因思考角度
15、首先个人个人: 如,意识不够, 坏的行为已经发展成了习惯,习惯就成自然了。In the first place, there is a lack of individual awareness. Some of us have unethical practices. Those wrongdoings are not corrected timely, so they develop into a habit. This is why it is not surprising at all for those people to do so. 更进一步,政府政府: 如法律不够健全,恶习未受到
16、惩罚。Furthermore, perhaps more importantly, the government fails to improve law system and establish more detailed regulations to punish those who have such a wrong behavior. 最后,学校学校: 如学校的教育缺乏道德价值的教育,过分地关注考试Lastly, education focuses on examination and easily ignore the importance of moral education. 激
17、励学生学习的名言格言激励学生学习的名言格言220、每一个成功者都有一个开始。勇于开始,才能找到成功的路。221、世界会向那些有目标和远见的人让路(冯两努香港著名推销商) 222、绊脚石乃是进身之阶。223、销售世界上第一号的产品不是汽车,而是自己。在你成功地把自己推销给别人之前,你必须百分之百的把自己推销给自己。224、即使爬到最高的山上,一次也只能脚踏实地地迈一步。225、积极思考造成积极人生,消极思考造成消极人生。226、人之所以有一张嘴,而有两只耳朵,原因是听的要比说的多一倍。227、别想一下造出大海,必须先由小河川开始。228、有事者,事竟成;破釜沉舟,百二秦关终归楚;苦心人,天不负;
18、卧薪尝胆,三千越甲可吞吴。 229、以诚感人者,人亦诚而应。 230、积极的人在每一次忧患中都看到一个机会,而消极的人则在每个机会都看到某种忧患。231、出门走好路,出口说好话,出手做好事。232、旁观者的姓名永远爬不到比赛的计分板上。 233、怠惰是贫穷的制造厂。234、莫找借口失败,只找理由成功。(不为失败找理由,要为成功找方法)235、如果我们想要更多的玫瑰花,就必须种植更多的玫瑰树。236、伟人之所以伟大,是因为他与别人共处逆境时,别人失去了信心,他却下决心实现自己的目标。237、世上没有绝望的处境,只有对处境绝望的人。238、回避现实的人,未来将更不理想。239、当你感到悲哀痛苦时,
19、最好是去学些什么东西。学习会使你永远立于不败之地。240、伟人所达到并保持着的高处,并不是一飞就到的,而是他们在同伴们都睡着的时候,一步步艰辛地向上爬241、世界上那些最容易的事情中,拖延时间最不费力。242、坚韧是成功的一大要素,只要在门上敲得够久、够大声,终会把人唤醒的。 243、人之所以能,是相信能。244、没有口水与汗水,就没有成功的泪水。245、一个有信念者所开发出的力量,大于99个只有兴趣者。 246、环境不会改变,解决之道在于改变自己。247、两粒种子,一片森林。248、每一发奋努力的背后,必有加倍的赏赐。249、如果你希望成功,以恒心为良友,以经验为参谋,以小心为兄弟,以希望为哨兵。250、大多数人想要改造这个世界,但却罕有人想改造自己。