1、北京市部分区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题分类汇编应用文写作北京市丰台区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题（B卷）第二节 应用文写作（20分） 40. 根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于100。 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中询问你所钦佩的人。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 你钦佩人是谁；2. 你钦佩他/她的理由；注意：开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua北京市海淀区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题第三部分: 书面表达（共一题，共15
2、分)45. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，今年6月5日是第50个世界环境日(World Environment Day)，你校将举办一场相关主题活动。请你写一封邮件，邀请你班交换生Jim参加。邮件内容包括:1.简述该活动的目的；2.介绍该活动的日程（例如时间、地点、内容等)；3询问对方意向。注意:1.100词左右；2.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_YoursLi Hua北京市通州区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中质量检测英语试题第三节 应用文写作（20分）41. 假如你是李华，你所在的城市要举办“中国春节民俗文化节”(the Folk Culture and custo
3、ms of the Chinese Spring Festival) 活动。请你给英国的笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此活动。内容包括：1. 活动的时间和地点。2. 活动内容。要求：1. 词数80-100左右；2. 开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_YoursLi Hua北京市延庆区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题第五节 写作（15分）50. 阅读以下文章，并撰写文章的概要。The famous classical pianist, Kong Xiangdong, surprised his fans last week by giving a conc
4、ert combining classical music with Chinese folk music. Kong explained that he tried this because he wanted to create something new. As a musician, playing the same music in different cities of the world is very boring, says Kong. He also feels that playing Chinese folk music on the piano can help br
5、ing it to the rest of the world.Music has always been part of Kongs world. As his mother was a great music lover, he lived with music from birth. But it wasnt always easy for the young Kong Xiangdong. His mother couldnt buy him a piano until he was seven. She had to draw piano keys on a piece of pap
6、er so that he could learn to play as early as possible. The 5-year-old Kong would practice on the paper piano as his mother clapped the rhythm. He was made to practice the piano so much that, at times, he thought about giving up. However, he didnt quit, and he became a great pianist. In 1986,at the
7、age of 18,he became the youngest prize winner in Moscows Tchaikovsky International Competition. He went on to win awards in competitions across the world.Because of Kongs talent and hard work, he became famous worldwide. But after years of performing, he felt that in some ways he had lost his identi
8、ty. This is why he went back to his roots and rediscovered the beauty in Chinese folk music. He began experimenting with different styles and his Dream Tour Concert is the result.Kongs new experiment in Chinese folk music is so important to him that he even changed his appearance. When he arrived at
9、 his concert last week, he had shaved off all his hair! Since his music style was new, he decided his hairstyle had to be new too!Whether Kong is changing his appearance or transforming his music, he is a pioneer in music today. The concert last week was such a success that Kongs Dream Tour Concert
10、is expected to run for the next two years in Beijing, Shanghai, and other main cities before going to Paris and New York.北京市房山区2020-2021学年高一下学期英语期中试卷六、提纲类作文11. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你们学校下星期将要开展“走进自然,义务植树”活动。请给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括： 1）活动安排；2）准备事项。注意：1）词数70左右；2）邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hu
11、a答案：北京市丰台区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题（B卷）【答案】Dear Jim,Its great to hear from you. I feel happy to let you know who I admire. I think Tu Youyou is someone I admire. I admire her for many reasons. First she is the first Chinese female scientist to be awarded a Nobel Prize. She and her team discovered art
12、emisinin which have saved millions of lives. She makes remarkable contribution to mankind. Another reason is that she is so brave, because she did research during a difficult time for science in China. She bravely volunteered to be the first human subject to test the effect of the promising chemical
13、. Besides, I admire her because she is creative. She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives. This is why she is worthy of admiration. Who is the person you admire most? Write to me soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友
14、Jim写封回信，介绍你所钦佩的一个人。【详解】1.词汇积累钦佩：admirerespect发现：discoverfind困难的：difficulthard智慧：wisdomintelligence2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：She makes remarkable contribution to mankind.拓展句：Because her discovery is very important, she makes remarkable contribution to mankind.【点睛】高分句型1 She and her team discovered artemisinin w
15、hich have saved millions of lives. (which引导限制性定语从句) 高分句型2 She and her team used old wisdom and new methods to bridge the Eastern and Western worlds, saving millions of lives. (现在分词作状语)北京市海淀区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题【答案】Possible Version 1Dear Jim,How have you been recently? As the World Environmental
16、Day is coming, an educational activity aiming to raise our awareness of environment protection will be held in our school. I believe you will be interested in it. Let me tell you more about the arrangement. On the morning of June 5th, a professor will give a lecture at 9:00 in the central hall, thro
17、ugh which we can get more knowledge in this field. Then in the afternoon, an exhibition of some world-famous artworks on protecting the earth will be held in the Students Activity Center. What do you think of this activity? Would you like to come and join us? Im looking forward to your participation
18、.Yours,Li HuaPossible Version 2Dear Jim,How have you been recently? As the World Environmental Day is around the corner, a series of eye-opening and educational activities will be held in our school with the theme of making peace with nature. Since youre concerned about the environmental issues, I b
19、elieve it will be of great interest to you. The aim of the activity is to raise our awareness of environment protection and call for students to put in their efforts to make the world a better place to live in. After all, small changes can bring about a big difference. Let me tell you more about the
20、 specific arrangement. On the morning of June 5th, a professor will give a lecture at 9:00 in the central hall on the significance of living a low-carbon life. Not only can we obtain some professional knowledge in this field, we can also get some practical tips such as ways of saving water, paper an
21、d electricity at school. Then in the afternoon, an art exhibition named REIMAGINERECOVERRESTORE will be held in the Students Activity Center. You cant miss the wonderful presentation about some international award-winning paintings and sculptures. They depict the damage nature has suffered and the e
22、fforts to reverse it. Whats more, craftwork made with recycled materials by our schoolmates will also be on display. What do you think of this activity after my introduction? Would you like to come and join us? Im looking forward to your participation and you are bound to love it. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分
23、析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校举办的世界环境日的相关活动。【详解】1.词汇积累到来：arrivecome旨在做某事：aim at doingaim to do演讲：speechlecture关于：abouton2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Then in the afternoon, an exhibition of some world-famous artworks on protecting the earth will be held in the Students Activity Center.拓展句：Then in the afte
24、rnoon an exhibition of some world-famous artworks will be held in the Students Activity Center, whose theme is on protecting the earth.【点睛】高分句型1 As the World Environmental Day is coming, an educational activity aiming to raise our awareness of environment protection will be held in our school. (运用了a
25、s引导的状语从句)高分句型2 On the morning of June 5th, a professor will give a lecture at 9:00 in the central hall, through which we can get more knowledge in this field. (运用了“介词+关系词”引导的非限制性定语从句)北京市通州区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中质量检测英语试题【答案】Dear Jim,Knowing that you are enthusiastic about Chinese folk culture, Id like to
26、 invite you to take part in the Folk Culture and customs of the Chinese Spring Festival to be held in my city.The festival is scheduled from August 11 to 17 in the Folk Custom Park, and you can see paper cutting, martial art and lion dancing and enjoy the genuine Chinese food there. As for accommoda
27、tion, I hope you can stay in my home so that you can experience more about our daily life.Im sure you will have a good time in China. YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国的笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加你所在的城市要举办“中国春节民俗文化节”(the Folk Culture and customs of the Chinese Spring Festival)的活动。【详解】1.词汇积累对感兴趣：be intere
28、sted in=be enthusiastic about参加：participate in take part in相信：believe be sure玩得开心：have fun=have a good time2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The festival is scheduled from August 11 to 17 in the Folk Custom Park, and you can see paper cutting, martial art and lion dancing and enjoy the genuine Chinese food there.拓展句：
29、The festival is scheduled from August 11 to 17 in the Folk Custom Park, where you can see paper cutting, martial art and lion dancing and enjoy the genuine Chinese food.【点睛】高分句型1 Knowing that you are enthusiastic about Chinese folk culture, Id like to invite you to take part in the Folk Culture and
30、customs of the Chinese Spring Festival to be held in my city.这句话运用了现在分词作原因状语。高分句型2 hope you can stay in my home so that you can experience more about our daily life.这句话运用了so that 引导的目的状语从句。北京市延庆区2020-2021学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题【答案】Kong xiangdong, a classical pianist performed the classical music combined wi
31、th Chinese folk music in his concert in order to bring Chinese folk music to the whole world. (para.1) Influenced by his mom, Kong xiangdong learned to play the piano from an early age but his way to success is not an easy one. Due to his talent and great efforts, he became renowned worldwide by win
32、ning many great awards in competitions.(para.2)Years of performing classical music make him lose his own root and identity, so he turned to Chinese folk music. (para.3&4) Kong xiangdong is regarded as the pioneer in music for his new experiments with different music styles.(para.5)【解析】【分析】这是一篇概要写作。【
33、详解】写作步骤1）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨。文章主要介绍了古典钢琴家孔向东在他的音乐会上表演了古典音乐与中国民族音乐的结合，目的是把中国民族音乐带到全世界。在母亲的影响下，孔祥东从小就学会了弹钢琴，但他的成功之路并不容易。由于他的才华和努力，他在比赛中赢得了许多大奖，蜚声世界。多年的古典音乐表演让他失去了自己的根基和身份，于是他转向了中国的民族音乐。孔祥东尝试了不同的音乐风格，被认为是音乐的先驱。2）弄清结构，归纳段意。概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。因此一定要弄清文章结构，归纳文章各段大意。3）列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分
34、项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。4）在写作时要特别注意下面几点：（1）概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。（2）安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。（3）注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。（4）不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的话语表达，至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。（5）计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。北京市房山区2020-2
35、021学年高一下学期英语期中试卷11. 【答案】 Dear Jim, How is everything going? Spring has come and our school is going to organize an activity themed Going into Nature, voluntary tree planting next week. I am writing to invite you to join us. Here is some information about the activity. At 8:00 am, we will gather at t
36、he school gate and then go to the famous green park in the suburbs. After arriving there, our teachers will show us how to plant trees. After that, we will plant trees by ourselves. Its a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the nature in the countryside. Dont forget to wear your cap and prote
37、ctive gloves if you come. Youd better bring your lunch pack with you. I hope we can have fun together. If you are interested in it, just let me know. Yours,Li Hua【考点】提纲作文，文字式应用文，半开放性作文 【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高一学生李华的身份给你校的交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们学校下星期将要开展的“走进自然,义务植树”活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动安排；2）准
38、备事项。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次 【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Spring has come and our school is going to organize an activity themed G
39、oing into Nature, voluntary tree planting next week. 运用了并列句；Here is some information about the activity. 运用了倒装句； Its a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the nature in the countryside. 运用了it作形式主语；Dont forget to wear your cap and protective gloves if you come. 运用了条件状语从句，祈使句；I hope we can have fun together. 运用了宾语从句。11
