1、Writing about a family memoryLearning aims1. To learn ans summay the features and the structure about writing a family memory.2. Use the useful expressions to write a family memory.Pre-reading: PredictionWhat happened in this story?There is a mom and her daughter who are laughing in the picture. The
2、y are in the kitchen because there is a stove behind them. The picture mainly tells us an interesting story between the mom and her daughter.Read for more detailsRead the journal entry and answer the questions.1. Is your prediction correct?2. What brought back the authors lovely memory?3. What happe
3、ned in the authors memory? 4. Why did the author say “ love is a magical ingredient”?5. Do you think it is a lovely memory? Why?Read for more details1. What brought back the authors lovely memory?An old photo2. What happened in the authors memory? Read for more detailsThe author wanted to surprise h
4、er mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mothers birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all any way.3. Why did the author say “ love is a magical ingredient”?Read for more detailsThe home-made scrambled eggs were burnt but her mom tasted t
5、hem and said they werent bad.Learn the features and the structure about how to write a family memory.provide time informationWritten in the first personWritten in past tensePara2-3: the details and the climax of the storyThe endingPara1:Provide background information Summarize the features and the s
6、tructure about how to write a family memory.Characters (who)Settings (when&where)Plots(what)Beginningmiddle:climaxendEnding(why)Make an outlineWrite about a family memory with the useful expressionsPara1: I was. and found.; As I was looking at the., the lovely memory of that day crowds in my mind.Pa
7、ra2: Last summer./ Many years ago/ In 2015.Para3: not only.but also.; I remember this because.; It made me feel so.I learnt that.Present and evaluate your workIs your story well-organised?Are all the elements of a story include?Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation mistakes?What do you lea
8、rn from the story?A possible version I was tidying the warehouse and caught sight of a small bike lying quietly on the ground. As I was looking at it, the sweet memory about it crowded into my mind. Many years ago, it was a Sunday morning on my sixth birthday. My father bought me a new bike. I could
9、nt wait to get on it and learn how to ride, so I begged my father to teach me in the garden. After I sat on the new bike, my father helped me put my two hands on the handlebars and my feet on the pedals. Then, he pushed the bike so that the pedal tarted to move. I was scared so I fell off the bike a
10、nd hurt myself. But my father kept encouraging me to stand up, be brave and try again. After my first try, I could cycle around the garden shortly. After that, I practise it often and gradually, I was able to ride the bike more skillfully. I kept riding the bike until it was too small for me. It is
11、still one of my most precious possessions, for not only was it my first bike, but a symbol of my courage as well as my fathers love. And I learnt that love has great power. SummaryHow to write about a family memory? 体裁体裁人称时态段落Step 1:审题谋篇 a family memorythe first personpast tensebeginning/ middle/ endingsettingplotconclusionStep 2: make an outline according to five WsSte3: Write it according to the outlineWhat makes a good writing?plete points2. rich expressions3.well-organised4.logical5.proper communication6.good handwriting
